Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there tall buildings near your home?
Thí sinh
Yes and is a building is under construction right now and this nearby my house. I love top buildings feels OK. I like urban architecture.
Giám khảo
Do you take photos of buildings?
Thí sinh
Not usually, but if when I see a building that is catch my eyes, I will like take picture of the buildings. Yeah. So it's that depends on the building is beautiful or not, special or not.
Giám khảo
Is there a building that you would like to visit?
Thí sinh
Yes, if I'm really interesting in the building and I I always interesting in like restaurant. So if this restaurant is like. Very beautiful, I will visit you.
Giám khảo
Do you want to live in a tall building?
Thí sinh
Oh, MMM. I think not to talk because, you know, in my country, Taiwan is really. Earthquakes. It happens on my country so I don't like live in a tall building but if it's safe.
Are there tall buildings near your home?
Điểm: 52.0Gợi ý: 回答要更直接且语法正确。先用一句话直接回答,然后用一两句具体说明位置或喜好,避免多余和重复。注意时态和主谓一致,例如把“is a building is under construction”改为“a building is under construction”并用连词和介词连接短语。
Ví dụ: Yes. There is a tall building under construction very close to my house, about two minutes’ walk away. I enjoy modern urban architecture because it looks sleek and impressive, especially at night when the lights are on.
Do you take photos of buildings?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 回答应更流畅并使用连接词组织句子。先给出简短直接的答复,然后用一两个具体条件说明何时拍照。修正语法(例如“catch my eyes”应为“catches my eye”),并避免重复。
Ví dụ: Not usually. However, if a building catches my eye because it is beautiful or unusual, I will take a photo of it. For example, I photographed an old cathedral last year because of its intricate façade.
Is there a building that you would like to visit?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 回答要更明确并注意语法和用词(例如用interest作形容词要用interested)。先直接回答,再具体说明想参观的类型或理由,并举一两个具体例子。避免说“visit you”之类不清晰的表述。
Ví dụ: Yes. I would like to visit a famous restaurant with striking architecture. If a restaurant has a beautiful interior or a unique design, I would definitely go there to eat and take photos.
Do you want to live in a tall building?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答应更简洁并用正确的连词表达原因。先给出肯定或否定,然后用一两句说明原因,注意语法(如“earthquakes happen in my country”)。可以补充在安全措施下是否会改变看法。
Ví dụ: No, I wouldn't like to live in a tall building because Taiwan experiences frequent earthquakes. However, if the building had excellent seismic design and safety measures, I might consider it.
× Yes and is a building is under construction right now and this nearby my house.
✓ Yes. A building is under construction right now nearby my house.
原句结构混乱,有多余的“is”和不正确的词序。应使用完整句子“A building is under construction right now nearby my house.” 保持主语+系动词+过去分词短语,并把地点状语放置在句末或合适位置。建议:说话前先在脑中理清主语和谓语,避免重复动词。
× I love top buildings feels OK.
✓ I like tall buildings; they look OK to me.
原句使用了不正确的形容词“top”及动词短语“feels”与主语不一致。应使用形容词“tall”描述高楼,并用复数主语“they”搭配单数动词“look”。建议:注意形容词选择并保持主谓一致。
× I like urban architecture.
✓ I like urban architecture.
此句语法正确,仅保留原句即可。 (说明:句子结构和用词都正确。)
× Not usually, but if when I see a building that is catch my eyes, I will like take picture of the buildings.
✓ Not usually, but when I see a building that catches my eye, I'll take a picture of it.
原句时态和动词形式错误:定语从句中应使用第三人称单数动词“catches”,名词短语“catch my eyes”应改为常用表达“catch my eye”。未来意图可用“I'll”。同时“take picture of the buildings”需修正为“take a picture of it”。建议:注意定语从句动词与先行词的人称、数一致,并使用固定搭配。
× Yeah. So it's that depends on the building is beautiful or not, special or not.
✓ Yeah, it depends on whether the building is beautiful or special.
原句包含多余结构“it's that depends on”和错误的从句结构。应使用“It depends on whether...” 引导选择性从句,去掉重复的“or not”并合并形容词。建议:用固定结构“depends on whether...”表达“取决于……是否”。
× Yes, if I'm really interesting in the building and I I always interesting in like restaurant.
✓ Yes, if I'm really interested in a building — I'm always interested in restaurants.
原句把形容词“interested”误写为“interesting”(意思不同)且时态/词性错误。应使用“interested in”表示对某物感兴趣。重复“I”也要删除。建议:区分“interesting”(有趣的)与“interested”(感兴趣的)。
× So if this restaurant is like. Very beautiful, I will visit you.
✓ So if the restaurant is very beautiful, I will visit it.
原句有断句和代词错误:“visit you”把听者当作宾语,应为“visit it”指餐馆。句子内的无意义停顿应去掉。建议:注意代词指代对象并保持连贯句子。
× Oh, MMM. I think not to talk because, you know, in my country, Taiwan is really. Earthquakes.
✓ Oh, hmm. I don't think so, because, you know, in my country Taiwan there are frequent earthquakes.
原句中“not to talk”不合逻辑,且“There are earthquakes” 的存在句需要复数谓语。应使用“That doesn't sound good”或“I don't think so”表达否定意见,并用“There are frequent earthquakes”说明事实。建议:学习“There is/are”结构以及用更自然的否定表达。
× It happens on my country so I don't like live in a tall building but if it's safe.
✓ They happen in my country, so I don't like living in a tall building unless it's safe.
原句使用了错误的介词“on my country”,正确应为“in my country”。此外“不喜欢住在高楼”应用动名词“living”,并用“unless it's safe”更自然地表达“如果安全的话除外”。建议:注意介词搭配(in + country)和动词形式(like + -ing)。