Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 응답은 질문에 답했으나 문법 오류와 불명확한 표현이 많습니다. 구체적으로는 관사(a/the) 사용, 단수/복수 일치, 전치사와 숫자 표현이 필요합니다. 문장을 간결하게 정리하고 연결어(upon/also 등)를 사용해 자연스럽게 이어주세요. 예를 들어 거주층을 말할 때는 "I live on the ninth floor"처럼 정확한 표현을 쓰고 "in the south of the city"로 지역을 표현하세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several tall buildings near my home. I live in the south of the city and many high-rise apartments surround my block. I live on the ninth floor, so I can see the skyline from my window.

Gợi ý: 답변은 부정 의사를 전달했지만 중복, 불명확한 단어('exukata')와 문법 오류가 많습니다. 이유를 말할 때는 연결어(because, so)와 간결한 이유 제시를 사용하세요. 또한 적절한 단어(choice of vocabulary)로 'bored with'나 'not interested in'를 사용해야 합니다. 마지막에 상대 의견을 덧붙일 때는 짧은 대조 문장을 쓰세요.

Ví dụ: No, I don't usually take photos of buildings because I live in the city and see them every day, so they don't seem special to me. However, some people do enjoy photographing architecture for its design.

Gợi ý: 의도를 설명했으나 어순, 관사, 동사 형태와 불필요한 반복이 많습니다. 'high floor'와 'expensive' 등을 정확한 표현으로 고치고 이유와 조건을 논리적으로 연결하세요(eg. "because", "so", "on special occasions"). 문장을 간결하게 정리하고 한두 문장으로 핵심을 전달하세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, I'd like to visit the Yuxan Building because it has a restaurant on a high floor with excellent food, although it's quite expensive. I hope to go there on a special occasion, such as my birthday.

Gợi ý: 근거를 제시했지만 문법(진행형/현재형), 어휘('less bug', 'harmful person'), 의미 전달에서 오류가 있습니다. 'fewer insects' 또는 'less noise'처럼 정확한 표현을 사용하고, 안전성이나 사생활 보호 같은 이점을 간결하게 정리하세요. 연결어(for example, because)로 문장을 매끄럽게 이어주면 좋습니다.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because I'm already used to it and find it convenient. For example, higher floors often have fewer insects and offer more privacy, which makes me feel safer and happier.

× I live South in city so there is many high building.

✓ I live in the south of the city, so there are many tall buildings.

The sentence has multiple preposition and article issues: use 'in the south of the city' (correct preposition and article), use plural 'buildings' to match 'many', and 'tall' is a more natural adjective. 개선 제안: 'in' 전치사와 정관사 'the'를 쓰고 명사를 복수형으로 고치세요.

× there is many high building.

✓ there are many tall buildings.

Use 'there are' with plural nouns and 'many' requires a plural noun form. Also change 'high' to 'tall' for buildings. 개선 제안: 'many' 다음에는 복수형 명사를 사용하고 동사도 복수형으로 일치시키세요.

× I live 9 floors and their top is third floor.

✓ I live on the ninth floor and the top is the third floor.

Use 'on' with floors and ordinal numbers for specific floors ('ninth floor'). The original 'their top is third floor' is unclear; if intended meaning differs, adjust accordingly. 개선 제안: 층을 말할 때 'on the ninth floor'처럼 'on'과 서수(ordinal)를 사용하세요.

× I don't like take a picture about building because I I already say to you, but I live city so I'm very exukata to building, so I boring to see building.

✓ I don't like taking pictures of buildings because I already told you that I live in the city, so I'm very used to buildings and bored of seeing them.

Use gerund 'taking' after 'like'. 'Pictures of' is the correct preposition. Use past tense 'told' for reporting. 'Live in the city' needs 'in' and 'the'. 'Used to' means accustomed to. 'Bored of' or 'bored with' expresses lack of interest. 개선 제안: 'like' 다음에는 동명사 사용, 'tell'의 과거형 'told', 장소에는 'in the'를 사용하고 'used to'와 'bored of/with' 표현을 사용하세요.

× I don't have interest in building, so I.

✓ I don't have an interest in buildings, so I don't.

'an interest' requires an article and 'buildings' should be plural. The trailing 'so I.' is incomplete; complete with 'so I don't'. 개선 제안: 가산명사 'interest'에는 관사 'an'을 포함하고 문장을 완결하세요.

× Some people take a picture about building.

✓ Some people take pictures of buildings.

'Take pictures of' is the correct collocation; 'about' is incorrect here and 'pictures' should be plural. 개선 제안: 'take pictures of' 패턴을 사용하세요.

× I want to visit Yuxan building because their high flower have a restaurant but their restaurant is very high quality and very expensive.

✓ I want to visit the Yuxan Building because its top floor has a restaurant, and the restaurant is of very high quality and very expensive.

Use 'its' for singular building possession, 'top floor' not 'high flower', and 'has' (third-person singular). 'of very high quality' is a natural phrase. 개선 제안: 단수 소유격 'its'와 서수 표현, 'has' 같은 3인칭 단수 동사 형태를 사용하세요.

× So in usual I can go there.

✓ So usually I can go there.

Use 'usually' (adverb) instead of 'in usual'. Word order: adverb before verb. 개선 제안: 빈도부사 'usually'를 사용하고 올바른 위치에 두세요.

× So because there is very expensive I don't have a money.

✓ Because it is very expensive, I don't have the money.

Use 'it is' to refer to the restaurant, and 'money' is uncountable so use no article or 'the money' for specific sum. 'There is' is incorrect here. 개선 제안: 지시대명사 'it'을 사용하고 'money'의 관사 사용 규칙을 기억하세요.

× So I think that very special occasion I can go there.

✓ So I think that on a very special occasion I could go there.

Use 'on a very special occasion' (preposition + article) and modal 'could' is more natural for hypothetical possibility. 개선 제안: 전치사 'on', 부정관사 'a', 그리고 적절한 조동사 선택(could) 사용하세요.

× So my dreams is. I I want want to go there on my birthday.

✓ My dream is that I want to go there on my birthday.

Complete the fragment into a full clause using 'that' and use singular 'dream'. Remove repeated words. 개선 제안: 문장을 완전히 구성하고 중복 단어를 제거하세요.

× Yes, I want to live in the tall building because I'm already live in tall building and I think this is very convenient because there are less bug and it's safe to safely from harmful person and it's easy to.

✓ Yes, I want to live in a tall building because I already live in one and I think it is very convenient: there are fewer bugs, it is safe from harmful people, and it's easy to...

Use 'already live in one' for conciseness. 'Fewer' for countable 'bugs'. 'Safe from harmful people' corrects noun forms and prepositions. Remove duplicate 'safely'. The trailing 'it's easy to...' needs completion. 개선 제안: 수량 표현(fewer)을 사용하고 전치사와 복수형을 올바르게 사용하세요.

× Not showing, sharing my life to others like hanging.

✓ I don't have to show or share my life with others, like hanging out.

Use full negative clause 'I don't have to', use 'share with' and 'hang out' as correct colloquial expression. 'To others' should be 'with others'. 개선 제안: 전치사 'with'와 올바른 표현 'hang out'을 사용하세요.

× So I think high building makes me happy.

✓ So I think tall buildings make me happy.

Use plural 'buildings' to match general statement and 'tall' is more natural adjective. Verb should be plural 'make'. 개선 제안: 일반적 사실에는 복수 주어와 동사 일치를 유지하세요.