Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and add one specific detail using a linking word. Also correct prepositions and verb forms.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several tall buildings near my hometown. For example, many large company headquarters line the main avenue, and I often walk past them when I spend time outdoors. They look impressive because of their glass facades and height, so I enjoy watching their changing lights in the evening.

Gợi ý: Use correct tense and specific vocabulary. Begin with a direct answer, then give a clear example and purpose. Avoid unclear phrases and correct article use.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of interesting buildings. For example, I photographed the historic Charminar last month because of its unique architecture, and I usually share such pictures with my family and friends so they can see places I visit.

Gợi ý: Give a clear, grammatically correct reason and one specific detail. State the building, location, and why it appeals to you using linking words such as 'because' or 'because of'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would love to visit the Burj Khalifa in Dubai because it is the tallest building in the world. I want to see the observation deck for the panoramic views and take photos to appreciate its modern engineering and design.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and give a clear reason with a specific example. Use correct sentence structure and avoid awkward phrasing. Link the example to your preference with words like 'because' or 'for example'.

Ví dụ: No, I would prefer living in a small house rather than a tall building because I value privacy and quiet. For example, a friend who lives in a large residential tower often complains about noise and elevator crowds, which makes apartment living stressful for him.

× Of course there are there are many big companies which have really big buildings near of my hometown and I usually spend most of my time in outdoor.

✓ Of course, there are many big companies that have really large buildings near my hometown, and I usually spend most of my time outdoors.

Incorrect use of 'there are' repetition and wrong preposition 'near of'. 'There are' only needs once. Use 'near my hometown' not 'near of'. 'outdoor' should be the adverbial 'outdoors'. Also 'which' better replaced by 'that' for defining clause.

× So I used to watch many kinds of buildings and companies which have really big buildings and it's fascinating to watch.

✓ So I used to look at many kinds of buildings and companies that have very large buildings, and it's fascinating to see them.

Verb choice 'watch' is incorrect for observing buildings; use 'look at' or 'see'. Pronoun reference 'it's' is vague; replace with 'it's fascinating to see them' to clarify. Also avoid repeating 'big buildings' by rephrasing.

× Of course I do whenever I saw some unique or strange building, for example the building flag Charminar, it's a old infrastructure and monitor them as well.

✓ Of course I do. Whenever I see a unique or unusual building, for example the Charminar, I take pictures of it and also note details about it.

Mixed tenses: 'do' (present) followed by 'saw' (past) should be consistent: use present 'see'. 'building flag Charminar' is incorrect word order; use 'the Charminar'. 'it's a old' should be 'it's an old'. 'monitor them' is unnatural for photographing buildings; instead 'note details' or 'observe them'.

× So I click the picture of the channel and send it to my friends and family groups so they can also experience and enjoy by watching pictures.

✓ So I take a picture of the building and send it to my friends and family groups so they can also enjoy seeing the photos.

Incorrect noun 'channel' should be 'building'. 'click the picture' is informal; use 'take a picture'. 'experience and enjoy by watching pictures' is awkward: 'enjoy seeing the photos' is natural. Article usage corrected accordingly.

× Of course I want there are many kinds of building that I wanted to visit once in my life.

✓ Of course I want to. There are many kinds of buildings that I want to visit in my life.

Tense inconsistency: 'want' (present) followed by 'wanted' (past) should be present 'want'. 'kinds of building' should be plural 'kinds of buildings'. Also add 'to' after 'want' when preceding a verb.

× But actually if I had to pick then I'll definitely pick Burj Khalifa.

✓ But actually, if I had to pick, I'd definitely choose the Burj Khalifa.

Conditional phrasing: 'if I had to pick then I'll' mixes conditional forms and is better as 'if I had to pick, I'd' (conditional). Use 'choose' rather than 'pick' for variety; include article 'the' before 'Burj Khalifa'.

× It is in Dubai and it is world largest ever Tanish building.

✓ It is in Dubai and it is the largest building in the world.

Incorrect word order and extra words: 'world largest ever Tanish building' is ungrammatical. Use superlative with article 'the largest building in the world'. Remove unknown word 'Tanish'.

× So I really wanted to go there and take some pictures and wanted to know about.

✓ So I really want to go there, take some pictures, and learn more about it.

Tense inconsistency: 'wanted' (past) should be present 'want' to match earlier present intention. 'wanted to know about' is incomplete; use 'learn more about it'. Use parallel verbs: 'want to go' and 'take' (base form) after 'want to'.

× Of the honestly, I would like to prefer living in a small home rather than living in a tall building.

✓ To be honest, I would prefer living in a small home rather than in a tall building.

'Of the honestly' is incorrect phrase; use 'To be honest'. 'would like to prefer' is redundant; choose 'would prefer' or 'would like'. Also 'rather than living in' can be shortened to 'rather than in'.

× For example, my friend who is living in a college building in our home side, he was get very tired and frustrated by stress.

✓ For example, my friend who lives in a college building near our home gets very tired and frustrated by stress.

Pronoun 'he' is redundant after a defining relative clause; remove it. Verb forms: 'is living' can be simple present 'lives' for habitual situation. 'was get' is incorrect; use 'gets' (present) to match general statement. 'in our home side' should be 'near our home' or 'on our side of town'.