Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there tall buildings near your home?
Thí sinh
My home is the tallest of this era. It has fourteen floor.
Giám khảo
Do you take photos of buildings?
Thí sinh
Yes, I take photo of this building. It is very beautiful and standard tourist floor. I can see many. Beautiful St.
Giám khảo
Is there a building that you would like to visit?
Thí sinh
I often visit this building which is taught people knowledge.
Giám khảo
Do you want to live in a tall building?
Thí sinh
Yes, I want to leave the tall building. When I sit at the home, I will feel comfortable and happiness.
Are there tall buildings near your home?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 回答要更直接并纠正语法错误,句子控制在两到三句内。首先用一句话直接回答问题,然后用具体细节支持(例如楼层数、周边环境)。注意单复数与冠词(a/ the)以及正确的数词形式。
Ví dụ: Yes. There are several tall buildings near my home; in fact, my building is one of the tallest in the neighborhood. It has fourteen floors and offers a good view of the city.
Do you take photos of buildings?
Điểm: 52.0Gợi ý: 回答需要更清晰和连贯,避免碎片化表达。先直接回答,然后用一到两句说明你拍摄建筑的原因或频率,使用连接词(because, so, for example)并提供具体细节(如哪座建筑、什么时候拍、为什么吸引你)。注意语法(photo → photos, sentence structure)。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of buildings, especially the old cathedral downtown because of its ornate architecture. For example, I like photographing its stained-glass windows and carved stone details when the light is good.
Is there a building that you would like to visit?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 回答要更准确表达想法,句子需更自然。先说明是否有想参观的建筑,然后说明是哪一座并给出具体原因(例如功能、历史或个人兴趣)。避免直接翻译式表达,使用自然的英语结构。
Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit the national museum because it teaches people about history and culture. I’m interested in its ancient artifacts and special exhibitions.
Do you want to live in a tall building?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 句子有严重语法与用词错误(leave → live),需要先直接回答并给出一到两条具体理由,用连接词使句子连贯。注意动词形式、时态和词汇搭配(feel comfortable and happy)。控制在三句内。
Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because it usually has great views and good facilities. I think living there would make me feel comfortable and happy.
× My home is the tallest of this era.
✓ My home is the tallest in this area.
原句中用語不自然且有語意錯誤。“of this era”意思是“這個時代”,通常用於談論時代特徵,與“最高的房子”不搭。應改為“in this area/region”或“around here”。建議:用與地點相關的片語(如in this area / around here)。
× It has fourteen floor.
✓ It has fourteen floors.
floor為可數名詞,表示多個樓層時需使用複數形式“floors”。中文說明:當名詞表示多於一個時要加複數(-s)。
× Yes, I take photo of this building.
✓ Yes, I take photos of this building.
photo為可數名詞,表示多張照片時需用複數“photos”,若指泛指拍照行為可用“I take photos of buildings”或“I take a photo of this building”。建議:根據語境選擇單數或複數。
× It is very beautiful and standard tourist floor.
✓ It is a very beautiful and popular tourist spot.
原句詞序與詞彙不當。“standard tourist floor”不符合英語慣用表達。應使用“tourist spot/attraction”表示旅遊景點,並加不定冠詞“a”。中文建議:用常見搭配如“popular tourist attraction / tourist spot”。
× I can see many. Beautiful St.
✓ I can see many beautiful sights.
原句斷裂且詞序錯誤。“many. Beautiful St.”不是完整句子且“St.”可能為縮寫但在此不合適。應合併為完整名詞短語“many beautiful sights”或“many beautiful streets”。中文建議:保持句子完整,將形容詞放在名詞之前並連成一個短語。
× I often visit this building which is taught people knowledge.
✓ I often visit this building which teaches people knowledge.
原句使用被動或過去分詞“taught”不正確,應使用動詞現在時“teaches”來表達該建築提供知識的功能。中文說明:定語從句中,先行詞是建築物,需用主動語態和正確時態“teaches”。
× Yes, I want to leave the tall building.
✓ Yes, I want to live in a tall building.
原句“leave”意為離開,與問題“Do you want to live”意思相反。需用動詞“live”表示居住。中文建議:注意動詞詞義,選用正確動詞以匹配問句含義。
× When I sit at the home, I will feel comfortable and happiness.
✓ When I sit at home, I feel comfortable and happy.
時間副詞從句中談習慣性或普遍真理時,一般用現在時而不是將來時;“at the home”用法不自然,應為“at home”或“in my home”;“happiness”是名詞,需用形容詞“happy”來修飾人感覺。中文建議:條件或時間從句描述習慣性事實用一般現在時;使用慣用搭配“at home”;情感用形容詞。