Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct noun forms and articles (e.g., “a short building,” “small houses”). Avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my home. I live in a small city, so most buildings are low-rise; for example, houses and two- or three-storey shops are common. Therefore I rarely see skyscrapers here.

Gợi ý: Use natural verbs and smoother linking. Begin with a direct statement, then give a specific reason and an example. Replace informal fillers and incorrect grammar (e.g., “I often take photos,” “when I visit other cities”).

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of buildings when I visit other towns. For instance, I usually photograph historic facades and modern towers and sometimes record short videos to keep the memories.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and clearly, then expand with specific reasons. Avoid hesitations and repeated words. Use linking phrases like “because” or “for example” to explain why you want to visit.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit the Burj Khalifa in Dubai because it is the tallest building in the world. For example, I want to see the observation deck and enjoy the city view from the top, and I’m also interested in the building’s architecture.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence, then provide two specific reasons using linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., “tall buildings have a nice atmosphere” or “there is fresh air”), avoid repetition, and use concise sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because it often has a nicer atmosphere and better views. For example, the top floors usually feel quieter with fresher morning air, and I could enjoy beautiful sunsets from my balcony.

× No, there are not tall buildings near our home.

✓ No, there are no tall buildings near our home.

This sentence uses incorrect negative construction with 'are not' before an adjective; the correct form is 'there are no' + plural noun. Use 'no' to negate the existence of plural countable nouns (there are no tall buildings).

× There is a short.

✓ There are short buildings.

The original sentence lacks a noun after the adjective 'short' and uses singular 'is' incorrectly. Use a plural noun 'buildings' with 'there are' to match context, or provide a specific noun (for example, 'There is a short building').

× There is a small houses and buildings.

✓ There are small houses and buildings.

The sentence mixes singular verb 'is' with plural nouns 'houses and buildings'. Use plural verb 'are' to agree with plural nouns (subject-verb agreement).

× I do not see any tall building in the rest of my life because I live in a very smaller city.

✓ I have not seen any tall buildings in my life because I live in a very small city.

Use present perfect ('have not seen') for life experience up to now. 'Rest of my life' is incorrect here; use 'in my life'. Also use plural 'buildings' and 'small' instead of 'smaller' unless comparing to something else. Maintain subject-verb agreement and correct adjective form.

× So I don't see.

✓ So I don't see any.

This fragment 'I don't see' lacks an object; add 'any' or complete thought (for example, 'So I don't see any tall buildings').

× I only see.

✓ I only see small buildings.

This fragment lacks an object; specify what is seen. Complete the sentence with a noun phrase to make it grammatical.

× Yes, I often click, uh, click photos of buildings whenever go outside in, uh, outside out out of my city.

✓ Yes, I often take photos of buildings whenever I go outside of my city.

'Click photos' is informal; use 'take photos'. The sentence misses the subject 'I' before 'go'. Remove filler repetitions. Use correct preposition 'outside of my city' or 'outside my city'.

× Uh, so I click pictures and also making videos there because for memories.

✓ So I take pictures and also make videos there for memories.

Use base verb 'make' with 'also' to parallel 'take pictures' rather than 'making'. Remove redundant 'because' and keep 'for memories' or better 'to keep memories'/'as memories'.

× I want to visit the biggest building in the world is that Burj Khalifa in Dubai?

✓ I want to visit the biggest building in the world, the Burj Khalifa in Dubai.

The original is an incorrect question-like construction. Use a declarative noun phrase with apposition ('the Burj Khalifa') and a comma. Remove the question mark and rephrase to match the statement 'I want to visit'.

× Umm, it was. It is my dream country and a dream building.

✓ It is my dream country and the Burj Khalifa is my dream building.

Avoid 'it was' which is unclear; keep present tense 'is' for ongoing desires. Clarify referents: 'it' should be replaced or repeated for clarity. Use 'the Burj Khalifa is my dream building' for clarity and article 'the'.

× Uh, where I go to where I where I go to in future?

✓ I want to go there in the future.

Original is repetitive and ungrammatical. Use a clear future-intent phrase 'I want to go there in the future' or 'I will go there in the future'.

× Yes, I love to live in a tall building, uh, because, uh, tall building is uh, very nice at atmosphere there.

✓ Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because the atmosphere there is very nice.

Use 'would like to' or 'want to' for preference. Use article 'a' or 'the' before 'tall building' and correct word order: 'the atmosphere there is very nice'. Remove filler sounds. 'At atmosphere' is incorrect preposition usage.

× There there are fresh air in the morning and the there are very beautiful, beautiful sunset and sun views in the in the top as floor of the.

✓ There is fresh air in the morning, and there are very beautiful sunsets and sun views on the top floors.

'Fresh air' is uncountable singular so use 'there is'. Use plural 'sunsets' and 'top floors' for general statements. Fix repeated words and prepositions: use 'on' for floors. Remove trailing 'of the' and clean word order.