Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there tall buildings near your home?
Thí sinh
Yes, there are quite a few tall buildings near my home. Because I live in a densely populated residential area. Many of the apartment blocks have more than 20 rooms, so Larry dominates the skyline and make the neighborhood feel quite compact.
Giám khảo
Do you take photos of buildings?
Thí sinh
Yes, especially I love photographing old buildings. When I travel on trips to other countries, I always take many pictures of long old landmark, because their styles and details are quite different from those buildings in my hometown. For example, I really enjoyed capturing the ornate facades and narrow edges of all European tongues.
Giám khảo
Is there a building that you would like to visit?
Thí sinh
Yes, I would like to visit those historic buildings in another part of the UK, not just those Sky story President London. For example. I would like to visit Los medieval cathedrals or Tudor houses in places like York and Bath in the UK.
Giám khảo
Do you want to live in a tall building?
Thí sinh
Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because it's often offers a stunning meal, panoramic view of the city and the sky. Besides, I also enjoy watching sunrises and sunsets every day from up high. And living on a higher floor also means more privacy and better air quality with less noises.
Are there tall buildings near your home?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答要连贯并避免语法和词汇错误。应把短句合并成一到两句,使用正确词汇(例如:storeys而不是 rooms,'dominate'后面不用人名,动词需一致)。可以加入一两个具体细节来支持观点。
Ví dụ: Yes — there are quite a few tall buildings near my home because I live in a densely populated area. Many apartment blocks have more than 20 storeys, so they dominate the skyline and make the neighbourhood feel quite compact.
Do you take photos of buildings?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 注意用词准确和句子简洁,避免冗余(如 'travel on trips')。用正确名词形式(landmarks),避免奇怪搭配(narrow edges, European tongues 不合适)。最好用一到两句说明原因并给具体例子。
Ví dụ: Yes, I especially enjoy photographing old buildings. When I travel abroad I always take photos of historic landmarks because their architectural styles and decorative details are very different from those at home; for example, I like capturing ornate facades and narrow alleyways in European towns.
Is there a building that you would like to visit?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答需要更正错误词汇和语法,句子要流畅(例如 'skyscrapers in London' 而不是 'Sky story President London';不要混用西班牙语词如 'Los')。提供清晰具体的例子并简短说明原因。
Ví dụ: Yes, I’d like to visit historic buildings elsewhere in the UK, not just the skyscrapers in London. For example, I hope to see medieval cathedrals and Tudor houses in York and Bath because they have well‑preserved architecture and interesting history.
Do you want to live in a tall building?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 注意语法和词汇准确('offers a stunning view' 而不是 'stunning meal';去掉多余连接词并合并句子)。保持回答在最多五句内,并用连接词使逻辑更清楚。
Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because it often offers a stunning view of the city and sky. I also enjoy watching sunrises and sunsets from up high, and higher floors usually provide more privacy and less noise, as well as better air quality.
× Yes, there are quite a few tall buildings near my home. Because I live in a densely populated residential area.
✓ Yes, there are quite a few tall buildings near my home because I live in a densely populated residential area.
问题类型ID:26。原句把原因独立成一个以 Because 开头的短句,导致句子结构不完整(从句与主句不连贯)。建议把原因从句与主句合并,或将 Because 改为另外的连词或独立句(如 "This is because...")以保持句子完整性。
× Many of the apartment blocks have more than 20 rooms, so Larry dominates the skyline and make the neighborhood feel quite compact.
✓ Many of the apartment blocks have more than 20 rooms, so they dominate the skyline and make the neighborhood feel quite compact.
问题类型ID:27。原句中主语是复数短语 "Many of the apartment blocks",但随后错误使用了专有名词 "Larry" 作为主语,导致主谓不一致;另外动词 "make" 与复数主语 "they" 配合正确。建议保证主语一致,若要指代公寓楼应使用代词 "they" 或重复名词短语。
× Yes, especially I love photographing old buildings.
✓ Yes, I especially love photographing old buildings.
问题类型ID:13。副词位置不当。常见结构是把强调副词放在主语和谓语之间(I especially love...),原句将 especially 放在句首导致语序不自然。建议把 especially 移到动词前或使用 'particularly' 替换以更自然表达。
× When I travel on trips to other countries, I always take many pictures of long old landmark, because their styles and details are quite different from those buildings in my hometown.
✓ When I travel to other countries, I always take many pictures of old landmarks, because their styles and details are quite different from the buildings in my hometown.
问题类型ID:13。问题包括短语冗余("travel on trips")和形容词顺序与名词单复数错误("long old landmark" 不自然且 landmark 应为复数 "landmarks"),以及定冠词使用问题(改为 "the buildings" 更自然)。建议去掉多余词,按英语习惯使用形容词顺序(年龄/状态形容词在名词前)并正确使用复数形式。
× For example, I really enjoyed capturing the ornate facades and narrow edges of all European tongues.
✓ For example, I really enjoy capturing the ornate facades and narrow streets of many European towns.
问题类型ID:13。原句中时态与词汇使用错误:"enjoyed"(过去时)与一般陈述应一致使用现在时或与上下文统一;"narrow edges" 用词不当,应为 "narrow streets";"tongues" 误用,正确应为 "towns"(城镇)。建议使用恰当词汇并使时态与上下文一致。
× Yes, I would like to visit those historic buildings in another part of the UK, not just those Sky story President London.
✓ Yes, I would like to visit those historic buildings in another part of the UK, not just the skyscrapers in central London.
问题类型ID:13。原句含有错误词组 "Sky story President London",应为 "skyscrapers in central London" 或类似表述。建议使用正确词汇并注意大小写与复合词拼写(skyscraper/sky-scraper)。
× For example. I would like to visit Los medieval cathedrals or Tudor houses in places like York and Bath in the UK.
✓ For example, I would like to visit the medieval cathedrals or Tudor houses in places like York and Bath in the UK.
问题类型ID:26。原句将 For example. 单独成句不完整,应与后句连成一句;此外使用了错误的外来词 "Los",应为定冠词 "the"。建议将举例短语与主句合并并使用正确冠词。
× Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because it's often offers a stunning meal, panoramic view of the city and the sky.
✓ Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because it often offers a stunning view, a panoramic view of the city and the sky.
问题类型ID:2。原句 "it's often offers" 主语与动词重复(it is + offers),应使用单一谓语 "it often offers"。此外 "stunning meal" 用词不当,应该是 "stunning view"。建议删除多余的助动词 'is',并使用适当名词。
× Besides, I also enjoy watching sunrises and sunsets every day from up high.
✓ Besides, I also enjoy watching sunrises and sunsets every day from up high.
问题类型ID:22。原句其实没有明显语法错误,但根据题单只修正列出的错误类型;此句保持不变。但需注意定冠词使用根据上下文可保持原样。
× And living on a higher floor also means more privacy and better air quality with less noises.
✓ And living on a higher floor also means more privacy and better air quality with less noise.
问题类型ID:14。错误在于可数/不可数名词用法:"noises" 通常指具体噪音来源为可数,但此处表达总体噪音水平应使用不可数名词 "noise"。建议在描述总体概念时使用不可数形式。