Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 질문에 직접적으로 간결하게 답한 다음, 추가 설명은 명확한 문장 구조와 연결어를 사용해 구체적으로 제시하세요. 예: 주어-동사 일치 오류(“they are all tall building”)를 고치고, 불필요한 반복(‘tall building and buildings’)을 피하며 문장을 완결하세요. 또한 ‘I usually’로 끝난 미완성 문장을 피하고 무엇을 ‘usually’ 하는지 명확히 하세요.

Ví dụ: Yes. There are several tall buildings near my home, including lecture halls and Korea University Hospital. I often walk past them on my way to campus, so I see them almost every day.

Gợi ý: 대답을 간결한 주제문으로 시작하고, 추가 설명은 시제와 문법을 일치시키며 연결어를 사용해 논리적으로 이어가세요. 예: ‘I enjoy take photos’ 같은 동사 형태 오류를 고치고, ‘when I went to / when I go to’ 같은 혼용된 시제를 단일 시제로 정리하세요. ‘Not familiar area’ 대신 ‘in unfamiliar areas’처럼 자연스러운 표현을 쓰세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos, especially of buildings. When I travel to unfamiliar areas, I often photograph interesting architecture to remember the trip and practice my photography skills.

Gợi ý: 주제문으로 직접 답한 뒤 이유와 구체적 기대를 연결어로 명확히 제시하세요. ‘I guess that building is highest architecture’ 같은 모호한 표현 대신 사실이나 확신을 표현하고, ‘landscape’ 대신 ‘view’나 ‘cityscape’가 더 자연스럽습니다. 문장을 끝까지 완성해 ‘and’로 끊지 마세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit Lotte Tower. It is one of the tallest buildings in Korea, so I want to go to the observation deck to enjoy the panoramic city views and take photos of the skyline.

Gợi ý: 명확한 주제문으로 시작한 뒤 이유를 완전한 문장으로 구체적으로 설명하세요. ‘which is 1 only have one flower’ 같은 뜻이 불분명한 부분은 제거하거나 명확히 바꾸고, ‘I want to leave a house’→‘live in a house’ 등 단어 선택 오류를 고치세요. 또한 이유를 연결어(for, because)로 연결하고 문장을 끝까지 완성해 주세요.

Ví dụ: No, I don't. I prefer living in a detached house because I want a backyard for my dog and some private outdoor space. A house like that would give me more room and a quieter environment than a tall apartment.

× Yes, they are all tall building and buildings near my home.

✓ Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home.

The sentence incorrectly mixes singular and plural forms. 'They are all tall building and buildings' is ungrammatical. Use 'there are' for existence and plural noun 'buildings' to match 'many'. Use 'many tall buildings' to express quantity. Suggested improvement: Identify whether noun should be singular or plural and make the verb and determiners agree.

× It is the building of my university and hospital named Korea University Hospital.

✓ One of them is the building of my university, Korea University Hospital.

The structure is awkward and misuses 'It is' for identifying which building. Use 'One of them is' to specify one building among many. Place the name after the noun with commas for clarity. Suggested improvement: Use 'One of them is' or 'It is called' when identifying a particular item among others.

× I usually.

✓ I usually do.

This fragment lacks a complete verb phrase; 'I usually' is incomplete. Add a verb to complete the thought (for example, 'I usually visit' or 'I usually take photos'). Suggested improvement: Ensure each sentence contains a subject and a verb; expand fragments into full sentences.

× Yes, I enjoy take photos.

✓ Yes, I enjoy taking photos.

After the verb 'enjoy', use the gerund form (verb+ing), not the base form. 'Enjoy take' is incorrect; 'enjoy taking' is correct. Suggested improvement: Memorize verbs followed by gerunds (enjoy, avoid, consider, etc.).

× I enjoy taking photos of buildings, umm, particularly when I went to when I go to travel some.

✓ I enjoy taking photos of buildings, particularly when I travel to new places.

Mixes past ('went') and present/future ('when I go to travel') and uses awkward phrasing 'travel some'. Use simple present 'when I travel' to express habitual action and 'new places' for unfamiliar areas. Suggested improvement: Keep tense consistent for habitual actions and use clear phrases like 'new places' or 'unfamiliar areas'.

× Not familiar. Area.

✓ I mean areas that are not familiar to me.

These fragments are incomplete and disjointed. Combine into a full clause to convey the intended meaning. Suggested improvement: Avoid short fragments; connect ideas into complete sentences.

× Yes, I would like to visit Lotte Tower, top of Lotte tower because I guess that building is highest architecture in Korea.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit Lotte Tower, especially the top, because I think that building is the tallest in Korea.

Use 'especially the top' for clarity, 'I think' is more natural than 'I guess', and 'the tallest' is the correct superlative form. 'Highest architecture' is incorrect phrase; use 'tallest building' or 'tallest structure'. Suggested improvement: Use proper superlative forms and natural collocations like 'tallest building'.

× Umm, so I want to see landscape, uh, and.

✓ I want to see the view from the top.

The original is an unfinished sentence and 'see landscape' is awkward in this context. 'View from the top' or 'the skyline' are clearer. Suggested improvement: Finish sentences and choose idiomatic nouns like 'view' or 'skyline'.

× Actually I don't.

✓ Actually, I don't want to.

The fragment 'Actually I don't' is incomplete; it needs an object or verb phrase to indicate what the speaker does not want. Add 'want to' to complete the response to 'Do you want to live in a tall building?'. Suggested improvement: Complete negative responses with the appropriate verb phrase.

× I want to live in a detached house which is 1 only have one flower which have only one flower.

✓ I want to live in a detached house that has only one floor.

'1 only have one flower' seems to attempt 'one floor' but uses numerals and 'flower' incorrectly. Use 'that has only one floor' with correct spelling and grammar. Suggested improvement: Check homophones and ensure quantifiers and nouns match the intended meaning.

× Umm because I want to leave a house with a backyard so I can have a dog and.

✓ Because I want to live in a house with a backyard so I can have a dog.

Uses 'leave' instead of 'live' (wrong word) and ends with 'and' leaving the sentence incomplete. Also 'a house with a backyard' fits context. Correct the verb and complete the sentence. Suggested improvement: Proofread for incorrect homophones (leave vs live) and avoid trailing conjunctions; finish the thought.