Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid hesitations and redundant phrases, and give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct common errors (e.g., 'they don't have' → 'There aren't', 'low lights building' → 'low-rise buildings').

Ví dụ: There aren't any tall buildings near my home because I live in a small town. For example, most houses are low-rise and there is plenty of open space, which makes the area quiet and peaceful.

Gợi ý: Improve sentence structure and verb forms. Give a clear topic sentence, then use linking words (e.g., 'especially', 'both', 'because') and specific examples. Avoid repetition and correct collocations (e.g., 'take photos of buildings', 'historical buildings').

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of buildings, especially when I travel. For example, I like photographing historical sites like old cathedrals as well as modern skyscrapers, and I usually share the best shots on social media.

Gợi ý: Make your answer fluent and precise. Start with a direct statement, then give specific reasons using linking words (e.g., 'because', 'so that'). Avoid unclear phrases ('see the accusation', 'have the remember').

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit the Eiffel Tower in Paris because it is an iconic landmark. I want to see the views from the top and take photos to remember the experience.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear topic sentence and two specific reasons with correct grammar. Reduce hesitations and improve word choice ('relax and feel comfortable', 'rural area with nature' → 'rural area surrounded by nature').

Ví dụ: No, I wouldn't like to live in a tall building. I prefer a small house in a rural area because the green surroundings are peaceful and help me relax and feel comfortable.

× No, they don't have tall buildings near my home because I live in a small town and it's a lot of the house and the low lights building or apartment is umm quite quieter and have a lot of space.

✓ No, there are no tall buildings near my home because I live in a small town; most houses and low-rise buildings or apartments are quite quiet and have a lot of space.

The original sentence has multiple plural/singular and structure problems. 'They don't have tall buildings' incorrectly uses 'they' to refer to the area; use 'there are no' for existence. 'a lot of the house' is ungrammatical — use 'most houses' or 'many houses.' 'low lights building' should be 'low-rise buildings.' 'is umm quite quieter and have a lot of space' mixes singular and plural verbs and comparative incorrectly; use 'are quite quiet and have a lot of space.' Suggestion: use 'there are' for existence, match noun pluralization, and ensure verb agreement with plural subjects.

× Absolutely yes. I prefer take photos of building especially when I travel the building.

✓ Absolutely. I prefer taking photos of buildings, especially when I travel.

After 'prefer' when speaking about a general activity, use the gerund form 'taking.' Also 'photos of building' needs plural 'buildings.' 'when I travel the building' is redundant and incorrect; use 'when I travel.' Suggestion: use 'prefer' + gerund and pluralize countable nouns appropriately.

× Both of the own historical building or the modern building is interest me to take a photo and I prefer to share the photo through the social media.

✓ Both historical buildings and modern buildings interest me for taking photos, and I prefer to share the photos through social media.

'Both of the own historical building or the modern building' is incorrect in number and word order. Use plural 'buildings' and parallel structure: 'Both historical buildings and modern buildings.' 'is interest me' is wrong; use 'interest me.' 'to take a photo' should be 'for taking photos' or 'to photograph.' 'the social media' should be 'social media' without 'the.' Suggestion: use parallel plural nouns, correct verb form 'interest,' and remove unnecessary articles.

× Yes, I have building that I would like to visit.

✓ Yes, I have a building that I would like to visit.

The countable noun 'building' needs an article when singular: 'a building.' Suggestion: use 'a' with singular countable nouns.

× This building is the Eiffel Tower in Paris.

✓ This building is the Eiffel Tower in Paris.

This sentence is acceptable, but ensure 'the Eiffel Tower' uses the definite article because it is a unique landmark. No correction needed besides keeping the article; included for completeness.

× It's very famous place and I want to have the remember for that space and, uh, see the accusation.

✓ It's a very famous place, and I want to have memories of that site and, uh, see the attraction.

Multiple vocabulary and structure errors: 'very famous place' needs article 'a.' 'have the remember for that space' is ungrammatical — use 'have memories of that site' or 'make memories there.' 'see the accusation' is a wrong word; likely intended 'see the attraction' or 'see it in person.' Suggestion: use correct nouns ('memories,' 'site,' 'attraction') and articles, and simplify the structure.

× No, I don't want to live in a tall building, I prefer live in a small house in the uh, rural area with the nature because it's quite umm, peaceful and green space that's help me to relax and comfort.

✓ No, I don't want to live in a tall building; I prefer to live in a small house in a rural area surrounded by nature because it's quite peaceful and green, which helps me to relax and feel comfortable.

After 'prefer' when followed by an infinitive, use 'to live' (or use gerund consistently). 'the uh, rural area' incorrectly uses 'the' and fillers; use 'a rural area.' 'with the nature' should be 'surrounded by nature.' 'green space that's help me' mixes singular/plural and verb form; use 'which helps me to relax and feel comfortable.' Suggestion: choose consistent verb forms ('prefer to live' or 'prefer living'), use correct articles, and ensure subject-verb agreement in relative clauses.