Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the response clearer and grammatically correct. Start with a direct topic sentence, use linking words to connect ideas, correct verb forms and article usage, and avoid run-on sentences. Add one specific detail (e.g., how many or a landmark) to enrich the answer.

Ví dụ: Yes. I live in a big city, so I am surrounded by many skyscrapers. For example, there are several office towers near my apartment, and I even know a couple of people who live in one of them. Because of this, the area feels very busy and modern.

Gợi ý: Be concise and natural. Begin with a direct answer, then give one clear reason and a specific example. Avoid filler words and awkward phrases like 'urbanistic thought' — use 'urban design' or 'architecture'. Use correct verb forms and prepositions.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I often photograph buildings because I admire their architecture and how they shape the city. For instance, I recently took photos of a newly renovated library to study its façade later.

Gợi ý: Fix grammar and provide specific details. Start with a direct yes/no, then name the building correctly, give one or two precise reasons to visit (a particular exhibition, painting, or architectural feature), and avoid vague phrases like 'and etcetera.'

Ví dụ: Yes. I would like to visit the National Museum in my city. It hosts important exhibitions and famous paintings, and I am particularly interested in its 19th-century art collection and the museum's grand central hall.

Gợi ý: Clarify the meaning and correct grammatical errors. If you meant 'on the 50th floor', say so. Give one clear reason (e.g., view, less noise) and a short example of what you would enjoy. Avoid vague endings and run-on sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would. I dream of living on the 50th floor of a tall building because the view of the city would be amazing. For example, I imagine sitting by a large window in the evening and watching the lights while I relax and reflect.

× Yes, I live in the big city therefore I'm surrounded by skyscrapers they usually used as an offices, but also I know couple of people that are renting a place to live there.

✓ Yes, I live in a big city; therefore I'm surrounded by skyscrapers. They are usually used as offices, but I also know a couple of people who rent a place to live there.

Multiple article errors and related structure issues: 'the big city' implies a specific city; use 'a big city' for a general statement. 'They usually used as an offices' is missing auxiliary and uses incorrect article: correct passive needs 'are usually used as offices' (no 'an' before plural 'offices'). 'I know couple of people' missing the article 'a' before 'couple' -> 'a couple of people'. Also 'that are renting a place to live there' is awkward for present simple; use 'who rent a place to live there'. Use punctuation or sentence breaks to avoid run-on sentences.

× They usually used as an offices, but also I know couple of people that are renting a place to live there.

✓ They are usually used as offices, but I also know a couple of people who rent a place to live there.

Subject-verb agreement and verb form: 'They' (plural) requires auxiliary 'are' in passive present. 'Used' needs 'are used'. Also 'an offices' is incorrect — plural 'offices' takes no 'an'. 'That are renting' is present continuous; for habitual fact 'who rent' (present simple) is more natural. Ensure verb forms agree with subjects and intended meaning.

× Yes I do, my phone is full of gorgeous pictures of those buildings because in my opinion it is a peak of urbanistic thought.

✓ Yes, I do. My phone is full of gorgeous pictures of those buildings because, in my opinion, they are a peak of urbanistic thought.

Tense and reference agreement: 'it is a peak' incorrectly uses singular 'it' to refer to plural 'buildings'; use 'they are a peak'. Also separate clauses into sentences and add commas for clarity. Maintain present simple for general opinions.

× And uh, by picturing them I save them for future.

✓ And, by photographing them I save them for the future.

'Picturing' is grammatically possible but 'photographing' is more natural. Also 'for future' needs the article 'the' -> 'for the future'. The gerund phrase 'by photographing them' is correct; ensure correct noun/article usage after it.

× Yes, in my city we have give National Museum.

✓ Yes, in my city we have the Giv(e?) National Museum.

This sentence contains article and word-choice issues. Likely intended name 'National Museum' requires 'the' before proper institution: 'we have the National Museum'. 'give' appears to be a typo; if the museum's name includes 'Giv' or 'Give', use correct capitalization and spelling. Use present simple 'we have' for existence.

× It is museum that hosts exhibitions, paintings and etcetera.

✓ It is a museum that hosts exhibitions, paintings, etc.

Article error: before countable singular noun 'museum' require 'a museum'. 'and etcetera' is redundant; use 'etc.' and comma before it. Keep concise phrasing.

× Not only does this place looks good from outside, but inside it is gorgeous.

✓ Not only does this place look good from the outside, but inside it is gorgeous.

After 'does' the main verb must be in base form: 'does look' not 'does looks'. Add 'the' before 'outside' for natural expression.

× Yes, I would say so actually. It is my dream to live in the 50s though, to be able to foreseen the view of the city and being able to just sit in front of the window and think about everything by.

✓ Yes, I would say so, actually. My dream is to live on the 50th floor, though, to be able to foresee the view of the city and to be able to just sit in front of the window and think about everything.

Several tense and word choice issues: 'live in the 50s' is ambiguous; likely '50th floor' is intended. 'Foreseen' is past participle; use 'foresee' for infinitive 'to be able to foresee'. 'Being able to just sit' should be parallel infinitive 'to be able to just sit' or 'and to just sit'. Ending 'think about everything by' is incorrect; remove 'by'. Ensure parallel structure with infinitives and correct verb forms.