Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and coherent: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific details. Avoid unclear or irrelevant phrases and grammatical errors. Use linking words for flow (for example, "however", "for example").

Ví dụ: Yes. There are several tall buildings near my condominium. The tallest one has about 24 floors, while my building is much lower with only three floors. Overall, the neighborhood has mostly modern high-rises.

Gợi ý: Good concise answer and clear reason. Improve by tightening language, avoiding redundancy, and adding a linking phrase and a brief example to make the response more natural.

Ví dụ: Not really. I rarely photograph buildings because I prefer natural scenes and landscapes. For example, I have only about ten photos of architecture on my smartphone, mostly from trips.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear topic sentence, correct word choices, and concise supporting details. Avoid incorrect words like "see", "days", or "paranormal" and replace them with accurate vocabulary (e.g., "tower", "deck", "panoramic"). Use one linking phrase to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes. I would like to visit the tallest building in Thailand, which is in central Bangkok and is famous for its glass façade. I would love to go up to the observation deck to enjoy the panoramic views of the city, especially at sunset.

Gợi ý: Answer directly, then give one clear reason with correct vocabulary. Remove repeated words and unclear phrases like "low light condominium" or "highlights"; use "low-rise" and "high-rises" instead. Keep to two or three short sentences and include a linking word such as "because".

Ví dụ: No, I would not. I prefer a low-rise condominium rather than a tall building with ten or more floors because high-rises tend to be noisy and feel crowded, with less private space.

× Yes, there are several tall buildings around my condominium. The tallest nearby, has about 24 floors.

✓ Yes, there are several tall buildings around my condominium. The tallest nearby has about 24 floors.

Remove the unnecessary comma between the subject phrase 'The tallest nearby' and the verb 'has'. This is not a singular/plural change but punctuation created a sentence fragment feel; keeping subject and verb together fixes the sentence structure and agrees singular subject 'The tallest' with singular verb 'has'.

× Why? My building is much lower, It only has Air Force.

✓ Why? My building is much lower; it only has a few floors.

Original includes incorrect phrase 'Air Force' which seems irrelevant and a comma splice between clauses. Change to 'a few floors' to make sense in context and replace comma with semicolon or period and lowercase 'it' to fix sentence structure and punctuation.

× Most of the highlights are modern.

✓ Most of the buildings are modern.

The word 'highlights' is incorrect in this context; 'buildings' is the intended noun. Replace the adjective-noun pairing to make the sentence semantically and grammatically correct.

× Not really. I rarely take photos of building architectures because I prefer photographing natural scenes or landscapes.

✓ Not really. I rarely take photos of building architecture because I prefer photographing natural scenes or landscapes.

Use uncountable noun 'architecture' rather than plural 'architectures'. 'Building architecture' as a general concept should be singular/uncountable.

× I have only a few pictures of architecture on my smartphone, maybe about 10.

✓ I have only a few pictures of architecture on my smartphone, maybe about ten.

Spelling out small numbers in text is stylistic; main issue was fine. Provide number in words to match formal tone; no grammatical change needed beyond style.

× Yes, I would like to visit the tallest building in Thailand see, which is in central Bangkok and famous for its glass architecture.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit the tallest building in Thailand, which is in central Bangkok and famous for its glass architecture.

Remove the extraneous word 'see' and place a comma before the non-defining relative clause 'which is in central Bangkok...' to correct sentence structure.

× I would love to go up to the observation days to enjoy the paranormal views of the city, especially at the sunset.

✓ I would love to go up to the observation deck to enjoy the panoramic views of the city, especially at sunset.

Several wrong words: 'observation days' should be 'observation deck'; 'paranormal' should be 'panoramic'; 'at the sunset' should be 'at sunset'. These corrections restore proper collocations and meaning.

× No, I would not like to live in the in a tall building be especially one with 10 or more floors.

✓ No, I would not like to live in a tall building, especially one with ten or more floors.

Remove duplicated articles 'the in a' and stray word 'be'. Spell out the number 'ten' for style consistency. Use comma before 'especially' to set off the clause.

× I prefer a low light condominium because highlights tend to be noisy and clouded with less space for.

✓ I prefer a low-rise condominium because tall buildings tend to be noisy, crowded, and have less space.

Correct 'low light' to 'low-rise' for building type; replace 'highlights' with 'tall buildings'; 'clouded' is wrong here—use 'crowded'; complete the final phrase to 'have less space'. This fixes word choice and sentence completeness.