Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Clarify ideas, fix grammar and word choice, and reduce redundancy. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words (for example, "for instance" or "also"). Correct vocabulary errors (e.g., "matches" → "facilities", "open Skype" → "open space", "cast on shadows" → "cast shadows"). Keep to no more than 4–5 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes. There are several tall buildings near my home, mainly modern apartment blocks and one office tower about a ten-minute walk away. For instance, they include shops and elevators, which make daily life more convenient. However, they also cast shadows over a nearby park in the afternoon, so the green space gets less sunlight.

Gợi ý: Make the answer more fluent and correct grammar and collocations. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give a specific reason and a clear example, using linking words like "for example" and "also." Fix awkward phrases ("capturing on that window of modern class panel" → "capturing modern glass-panel windows"). Keep it concise and coherent.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of buildings because I enjoy their architectural details and façades. For example, I like capturing the reflections in modern glass-panel windows when I walk around the city. Also, photographing buildings helps me document the places I visit and remember unique designs.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear, accurate answer with correct names and details. Begin with a direct statement naming the building (Sagrada Família), then give two specific supporting details (architect, style, reason for interest) linked coherently. Correct factual and grammatical errors ("Salarada" → "Sagrada Família", "Anthony Gaudi" → "Antoni Gaudí"). Limit to 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes. I would love to visit the Sagrada Família in Barcelona. It was designed by Antoni Gaudí and is famous for its unique blend of Gothic and modernist architecture, with intricate façades and towers. I want to see the interior light and the extraordinary architectural details in person.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence and two specific supporting reasons with correct vocabulary and grammar. Use linking words ("for example", "also") and avoid repetition ("noise" twice). Replace unclear words ("trade noise", "pitchful") with accurate terms ("street noise", "bright/comfortable"). Keep response within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because it usually offers more privacy and better views. For example, living on a higher floor can reduce street noise and receive more natural light. Also, high-rise buildings often have useful amenities such as elevators and security, which makes living there more convenient.

× They provide convenience and matches like shops and and elevators too.

✓ They provide conveniences and amenities like shops and elevators too.

The sentence uses 'convenience' and 'matches' incorrectly. 'Conveniences' (plural) matches multiple items; 'matches' is wrong word choice — 'amenities' fits context. Also remove duplicate 'and'. Use plural nouns to agree with 'they'. Suggestion: Use 'amenities' for facilities and ensure nouns match plural subject.

× an office tower about 10 minutes walk away.

✓ an office tower about a 10-minute walk away.

The phrase needs the article 'a' and a hyphenated compound adjective '10-minute' before 'walk'. Use 'a 10-minute walk away' to express distance correctly. Suggestion: Use 'a' plus hyphenated time adjective.

× I sometimes miss the open Skype because they cast on shadows in the afternoon.

✓ I sometimes miss the open space because the buildings cast long shadows in the afternoon.

'Open Skype' is incorrect; likely intended 'open space'. 'They' is unclear; specify 'the buildings'. 'Cast on shadows' is incorrect collocation — use 'cast long shadows'. This fixes word choice and sentence clarity. Suggestion: Use precise nouns and correct verb collocations.

× Buildings, Yes.

✓ Yes, I do.

'Buildings, Yes.' is ungrammatical. A concise answer to 'Do you take photos of buildings?' is 'Yes, I do.' or 'Yes, I often take photos of buildings.' This provides proper subject-verb structure. Suggestion: Use a full clause for clarity.

× I often take photos of buildings because I find architectural details and facades visually interesting.

✓ I often take photos of buildings because I find architectural details and facades visually interesting.

This sentence is correct; no preposition error. No change necessary. Suggestion: Keep as is.

× For example, I like capturing on that window of modern class panel when I walk around the city.

✓ For example, I like capturing the windows of modern glass panels when I walk around the city.

'Capturing on that window' is incorrect; use 'capturing the windows'. 'Modern class panel' is a misspelling and wrong word order — should be 'modern glass panels'. Adjust to plural if referring generally. Suggestion: Use correct noun ('glass') and proper object of 'capturing'.

× Also, photographing buildings help me document place I visit.

✓ Also, photographing buildings helps me document places I visit.

Subject 'photographing buildings' is singular (gerund phrase), so the verb should be 'helps'. 'place' should be plural 'places' to match general meaning, and include 'I' before 'visit' to 'I visit'. Suggestion: Ensure subject-verb agreement with gerund subjects and pluralize nouns when referring generally.

× Yes, there are.

✓ Yes, there is one I would like to visit.

Answer 'Yes, there are.' is incomplete and misuses 'there are' without a referent. The question asks 'Is there a building that you would like to visit?'—use 'Yes, there is' or specify the building. Provide a full clause. Suggestion: Use 'Yes, there is' or 'Yes, there is one' to respond to 'Is there' questions.

× I would love to visit Salarada.

✓ I would love to visit Sagrada Familia.

'Salarada' is a misspelling/nonstandard name. The famous basilica in Barcelona is 'Sagrada Família' (commonly 'Sagrada Familia'). Use correct proper noun spelling. Suggestion: Use accurate names for landmarks.

× Familiar in Barcelona is an extraordinary basilica designed by Anthony Gaudi families for its unique brand of Gothic and I know where.

✓ The Sagrada Familia in Barcelona is an extraordinary basilica designed by Antoni Gaudí, famous for its unique style combining Gothic and Art Nouveau elements.

Original sentence has multiple errors: 'Familiar' incorrect for 'Sagrada Familia'; 'Anthony Gaudi' misspells 'Antoni Gaudí'; 'families' is wrong; 'brand of Gothic' is awkward; 'I know where' is unclear and unnecessary. Rephrase to provide clear subject, correct names, and accurate stylistic description. Suggestion: Use correct proper nouns and clear clause structure; avoid extraneous fragments.

× Yes, I would like to live in a tall building 'cause it often offers great use and more privacy compared to low rise housing.

✓ Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because it often offers greater convenience and more privacy compared to low-rise housing.

Informal ''cause' should be 'because'. 'Great use' is unclear — 'greater convenience' or 'more benefits' is better. Use comparative 'greater' to compare properly. Hyphenate 'low-rise'. Suggestion: Use full conjunctions in formal speech and choose precise nouns for benefits.

× For example, living on a higher floor can reduce trade noise, noise and providing natural light which make the apartment more pleasant and pitchful.

✓ For example, living on a higher floor can reduce traffic noise and provide more natural light, which makes the apartment more pleasant and peaceful.

'Trade noise, noise' is redundant and likely meant 'traffic noise'. Change 'providing' to base verb 'provide' to match 'can reduce'. Relative clause needs 'which makes' with singular 'apartment'. 'Pitchful' is not a word; likely 'peaceful'. Suggestion: Avoid redundancy, ensure parallel verbs after modal 'can', and use correct adjectives.