Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答が曖昧で文法や語彙の誤りが多く、主語と表現が不自然です。まず直接的な主文で答え、具体的な情報（建物の数・種類・特徴）を1〜2文で付け加えましょう。つなぎ言葉（e.g. “also”, “for example”）を使って論理を明確にし、発音や文法の基本（主語と動詞の一致、冠詞の使用）を意識してください。発音が不明瞭な場合は簡潔な語句で練習すると効果的です。

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home. For example, several modern apartment towers and a few office skyscrapers dominate the skyline, and I especially like the building with the artistic facade because it looks very beautiful.

Gợi ý: 意図は伝わりますが、文の構造が混乱しており、語順や動詞の使い方に誤りがあります。簡潔に理由を述べ、必要なら具体例を加えるとよいです。接続詞（e.g. “because”, “so”, “for example”）を正しく使い、過去形や現在形を混同しないように注意してください。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I like taking photos of buildings because I enjoy capturing their shapes and details. For example, I often photograph facades and windows when I walk around the city.

Gợi ý: 答えは2つの場所を挙げていますが、言い換えや文法が不自然です。まず一つの明確な主文で答え（I would like to visit X），続けて理由や特徴を1〜2文で示しましょう。比較や理由を述べる際は接続語（e.g. “first”, “second”, “because”）を使って構成を整えてください。

Ví dụ: Yes, there are two places I would like to visit. First, Tokyo because it is a famous, very large city with modern architecture. Second, Kyoto because it has many historic temples and beautiful traditional buildings.

Gợi ý: 設問は「住みたいか」を尋ねていますが、回答は訪問したいという内容にずれています。設問に直接答え（Yes/No + 理由）し、もし訪問の話をするなら“visit”と“live”を区別して説明しましょう。具体的な利点・欠点（眺め、便利さ、騒音など）を1〜2文で補足するとよいです。

Ví dụ: No, I would not want to live in a very tall building, because I prefer quieter, low-rise neighborhoods. However, I would like to visit Dubai to see its impressive skyscrapers and modern architecture.

× Yes, I am. I have so my house near Dubai uh the expression buildings uh this building is uh very big and beautiful uh artistic.

✓ Yes. I live near Dubai. The buildings here are very big, beautiful, and artistic.

The student used 'I am' incorrectly instead of 'I live' (verb choice and subject-predicate mismatch). 'My house near Dubai' lacks a verb. Pronouns and noun phrases were unclear. Use 'I live near Dubai' for location and pluralize 'buildings' to match context. Combine adjective list with commas for clarity.

× Yes I do because uh I it takes the pictures is uh I have been demise myself for pictures so I prefer to take in picture.

✓ Yes, I do, because I like taking pictures. I have been interested in photography for a long time, so I prefer to take my own photos.

The original contains pronoun confusion ('I it'), incorrect verb forms ('takes the pictures', 'have been demise myself'), and unclear structure. Correct subject-verb agreement and use gerund 'taking' after 'like'. Express interest using 'have been interested in photography' and 'take my own photos' for clarity.

× Yes, so I have two a spot my favorite spot. So once Tokyo, Tokyo is a very big city is a famous all the world and 2nd Kyoto, Kyoto is a big city and have a memorized.

✓ Yes, I have two favorite places. First, Tokyo: it is a very big city and famous throughout the world. Second, Kyoto: it is a historic city with many memorable sites.

Pronoun and article usage were incorrect ('two a spot my favorite spot'). Use 'favorite places' for plural. Use 'it is' for referring to cities. 'Famous throughout the world' is the correct idiom. Replace 'have a memorized' with a clear description like 'have many memorable sites'.

× I want to visit Dubai. So Dubai is a big city and the most of building on the high building in the all or the world. So I want to visit Dubai.

✓ I want to visit Dubai because it is a big city with many tall buildings; it is known for some of the tallest buildings in the world.

The original repeats 'I want to visit Dubai' and uses incorrect comparative phrasing ('the most of building on the high building in the all or the world'). Use 'many tall buildings' and 'some of the tallest buildings in the world' to express the intended meaning. Keep tense consistent for future intention with 'I want to visit'.