Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and grammatical: begin with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid filler and incomplete phrases.

Ví dụ: No, there aren't any tall buildings near my home. I live in a small town where most people live in detached houses or low-rise apartments of three or four storeys. Therefore the skyline is quite low and there is a lot of open space.

Gợi ý: Use correct verb forms and make sentences clearer: start with a direct statement, then add a specific reason and one concrete example, connected with linking words like 'because' or 'for example.'

Ví dụ: Yes, I sometimes take photos of buildings, especially when they have interesting architecture. For example, I like to photograph facades with unusual shapes or decorative details because they make striking images.

Gợi ý: Reduce hesitation and give a clear reason with one or two specific details. State the building clearly, then explain why you want to visit using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid repetition and filler words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit the Burj Khalifa in Dubai. I want to see it because it is the tallest building in the world and its modern design and engineering would be fascinating to experience up close.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence and then two specific reasons connected with linking words. Use correct noun forms and avoid unfinished sentences. For example, mention privacy, access to garden, or maintenance issues as concrete reasons.

Ví dụ: No, I wouldn't want to live in a tall building. I prefer a detached house because I like being close to the ground and having a garden, and high-rise living often brings more maintenance and noise problems.

× Since I live in a small town, people live in houses or just tree or four story apartments and instead of the.

✓ Since I live in a small town, people live in houses or just three- or four-story apartments.

The sentence has pluralization and number-word errors: 'tree' should be 'three'; 'or four story apartments' needs hyphens for compound adjective 'four-story' and parallel structure requires 'three- or four-story apartments'. Remove the trailing fragment 'and instead of the.' Suggestion: use parallel structure and correct number spelling and hyphenation.

× Yes I captured buildings if they be amazing or has some interesting architecture.

✓ Yes, I take photos of buildings if they are amazing or have interesting architecture.

The original mixes past participle 'captured' and incorrect subjunctive 'if they be' and wrong verb form 'has'. For habitual present actions (do you take photos?), use present simple: 'I take photos' and use 'are' for plural 'they' and 'have' for plural subject. Also add commas for clarity.

× I also like take photos from facades of building like some.

✓ I also like to take photos of the facades of buildings.

Incorrect preposition 'from' should be 'of' when photographing facades. Missing infinitive marker 'to' before 'take'. 'Building' should be plural 'buildings' to match 'facades', and word order 'facades of buildings' is natural. Remove vague 'like some'.

× Yes, I'd like to visit some famous building like umm, Burj Khalifa.

✓ Yes, I'd like to visit some famous buildings, like Burj Khalifa.

'Some famous building' is incorrect number agreement; use plural 'buildings' with 'some', or say 'a famous building such as the Burj Khalifa'. Also add comma and article 'the' optional before iconic building name; natural phrasing: 'like Burj Khalifa' or 'such as the Burj Khalifa'.

× I uh, because they are really famous and have unusual, uh, uh, architecture, uh, that, that, that get me a sense of modernity and.

✓ Because they are really famous and have unusual architecture that gives me a sense of modernity.

Pronoun and verb agreement: 'that get me' is wrong for singular noun 'architecture' (use 'gives'). The sentence is also a fragment; remove filler words and the trailing 'and'. Use 'architecture that gives me a sense...' Clarify structure: 'Because they are really famous and have unusual architecture' then main clause 'I want to visit them' if needed.

× No, I prefer to live in a detached houses or a la Royce apartment because I like to be close there to ground.

✓ No, I prefer to live in a detached house or a low-rise apartment because I like to be close to the ground.

Mix of singular/plural: 'a detached houses' should be 'a detached house' (singular). 'la Royce' appears to be a misspelling of 'low-rise'. Preposition 'close there to ground' is incorrect; correct is 'close to the ground'.

× Leaving a high rise apartment has really too much for me because they are really more problems when.

✓ Living in a high-rise apartment is too much for me because there are more problems.

'Leaving' is wrong verb; intended meaning is 'living'. Use 'is too much for me' rather than 'has really too much'. 'High-rise' needs a hyphen. Use 'there are more problems' for existence (There be issue), not 'they are really more problems when' which is ungrammatical and incomplete. Complete the thought by removing 'when' or adding explanation.