Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 発音と文法の正確さを改善してください。特に単数・複数の一致（"building"→"buildings"）、冗長な語句（"it's a it's an"）や躊躇表現（"Umm"）を減らすことに注意しましょう。また、理由を述べる際は一文で明確にし、接続詞（because, so, whichなど）を適切に使って流れを良くしてください。具体的には、主文→理由の順で答え、理由は具体的な状況（例：near the station causes strong winds that make walking uncomfortable）を示すと効果的です。

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several tall buildings near my home. For example, beside the station there is a large residential tower, and because of its height it funnels strong winds along the street, which makes walking there unpleasant.

Gợi ý: 発言の明確さと簡潔さを改善しましょう。繰り返し（"I I"）、冗長な表現（"unpleasant to take photos of the sky"）を避け、理由を論理的に述べます。接続詞（because, so, therefore）や比較表現（rather than）を使うと自然です。短くて具体的な例（好きな空の写真のタイプ）を付け加えると説得力が上がります。

Ví dụ: I don't usually photograph buildings; I prefer taking pictures of the sky instead because I like capturing colorful sunsets and cloud formations rather than man-made structures.

Gợi ý: 流暢さと文法を改善して、目的と具体例をはっきり示してください。繰り返し（"the of the of", "which I want to which I want"）を避け、動詞の目的語を整理しましょう。訪問理由（学びたいこと、職場の雰囲気を知りたい等）を一つ加えると内容が豊かになります。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit the offices of companies where I hope to work in the future. For example, I'd love to tour a consulting firm's headquarters to see their work environment and learn about how teams collaborate.

Gợi ý: 発言の構成と語彙の選択を改善してください。理由をシンプルにまとめ（because there would be many unfamiliar people）、感情表現は自然なフレーズ（"I find that intimidating"）に置き換えましょう。不要な繰り返しや未完の文を避け、例を一つ付けて具体性を出すと良いです。

Ví dụ: No, I wouldn't like to live in a tall building because there would be many neighbours I don't know, and I find that a bit intimidating. For example, I prefer a smaller community where it's easier to get to know people.

× Yes, there are tall building near my home.

✓ Yes, there are tall buildings near my home.

The noun 'building' must be plural because it follows 'are' which indicates plural; use 'buildings' to agree with the plural verb. Improve by matching noun number to the verb and context: 'there are' + plural noun.

× For example, near my station there is a tall building.

✓ For example, near my station there is a tall building.

This sentence is correct; 'there is' matches the singular noun 'a tall building'. Keep subject-verb agreement: 'there is' for a single building.

× Umm, it's a it's an accommodation and it makes very strong wind which is very unpleasant.

✓ Umm, it's accommodation and it creates very strong winds, which are very unpleasant.

'Accommodation' as a general noun often does not need an article; alternatively 'an accommodation' is uncommon in this context. 'Makes very strong wind' is unnatural: use 'creates' or 'causes' and use plural 'winds'. Also add comma and plural verb 'are' for 'which are very unpleasant.' Improve by choosing correct verb collocation and matching plural/singular forms.

× I don't really take photos of the building because I prefer to take pictures of the sky.

✓ I don't really take photos of buildings because I prefer to take pictures of the sky.

Using 'the building' implies a specific building; if speaking generally, use plural 'buildings' or 'a building'. Match article use to intended meaning: general habits use plural without article.

× So I I think that tall buildings are unpleasant to take photos of the sky.

✓ So I think that tall buildings make it unpleasant to take photos of the sky.

Original sentence structure is incorrect: 'tall buildings are unpleasant to take photos of the sky' is ungrammatical. Use a clause showing cause: 'tall buildings make it unpleasant to take photos of the sky.' This clarifies subject, verb, and object.

× Yes, I'd like to visit the buildings of the of some companies which I want to which I want to do my jobs in the future.

✓ Yes, I'd like to visit the buildings of some companies where I would like to work in the future.

Remove duplicate 'of the of' and use 'companies' plural matches 'buildings'. Use 'where' to refer to the place you want to work and 'work' is more natural than 'do my jobs'. Keep conditional/future intent with 'would like'.

× For example, I like to visit the company of consultants.

✓ For example, I would like to visit a consulting company.

'The company of consultants' is unnatural. Use 'a consulting company' or 'a company of consultants' is odd. Also use 'would like' to match polite intent. Use correct article 'a' for a non-specific company.

× I don't want to live in the tall buildings because there are so many people who I don't know.

✓ I don't want to live in tall buildings because there are so many people I don't know.

Use 'in tall buildings' without 'the' for general statement. Also 'people who I don't know' is acceptable but more natural to omit 'who' in spoken English: 'people I don't know.'

× It's a very which is very scary thing scary.

✓ It's a very scary thing.

Original contains redundant and disordered fragments ('a very which is very scary thing scary'). Simplify to 'It's a very scary thing.' Maintain normal adjective-noun order and avoid repetition.

× I think, for example, there are.

✓ I think, for example, there are many such people.

Sentence is incomplete ('there are' with no complement). Provide a noun or phrase after 'there are' to complete the sentence, e.g., 'many such people.' Ensure sentences have necessary elements (subject/complement).