Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Ngắt câu và diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn; dùng câu chủ đề ngắn rồi thêm chi tiết cụ thể; tránh từ lặp và tiếng ậm ừ. Ví dụ: nêu vị trí, mô tả vài đặc điểm (chiều cao, kiểu dáng), và tiện ích gần đó. Sử dụng từ nối như "also", "for example" để mạch lạc.

Ví dụ: I live in the city centre, so there are many tall buildings nearby. Many of them have modern designs influenced by international styles. Also, the area is full of shops and supermarkets, which makes daily life very convenient.

Gợi ý: Trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích ngắn gọn lý do; tránh lặp từ và sửa ngữ pháp (thì, danh từ số nhiều/ít). Thêm liên từ như "when", "because" để nối ý. Hãy cho ví dụ cụ thể về khi nào bạn chụp và mục đích.

Ví dụ: Yes, I sometimes take photos of buildings when I visit new places. I usually photograph unique entrances or facades because they help me remember the trip. For example, I took several pictures of the old cathedral last month to keep as souvenirs.

Gợi ý: Trả lời rõ ràng tên địa điểm và lý do cụ thể; tránh câu rời rạc và thiếu ngữ pháp. Nên dùng cấu trúc như "I would like to visit... because..." và bổ sung một hoặc hai chi tiết (ví dụ: tầm nhìn, dịch vụ, kiến trúc).

Ví dụ: I would like to visit Landmark 81 because it is the tallest building in my country. I want to see the observation deck and enjoy the panoramic views of the city. I have also heard there are luxury shops and restaurants that are interesting to explore.

Gợi ý: Nói trực tiếp "No" hay "Yes" rồi nêu 2 lý do ngắn gọn với ví dụ minh họa; sửa lỗi từ vựng (ví dụ "risk of fire", "lose closeness to nature"). Dùng liên từ "because" và "also" để mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: No, I don't want to live in a tall building because I worry about safety issues such as the risk of fire and difficulty evacuating. Also, living high up would make me feel far from nature and less comfortable, since I prefer having a garden or trees nearby.

× Umm so yours is I live in center of city so here is a lot of tall buildings with a variety of design form to umm, many countries.

✓ I live in the center of the city, so there are a lot of tall buildings with a variety of designs influenced by many countries.

The original sentence has multiple structure issues: missing articles ('the center'), incorrect demonstrative ('yours is' is irrelevant), wrong word order, and noun form ('design form' should be 'designs'). Use 'there are' for existence of plural items (There be issue and subject-verb agreement). Suggestion: break into clear clauses, use definite article for specific places, pluralize countable nouns, and use 'influenced by' to express origins.

× Beside in here is also integrate to many business like uh market or grocery is so convenient.

✓ Also, this area is integrated with many businesses like markets and groceries, so it is very convenient.

Errors: awkward adverb placement, wrong verb form ('is also integrate' should be passive 'is integrated'), incorrect noun forms ('market or grocery' should be plural), and missing articles. Use 'is integrated with' to show connection and pluralize countable nouns. Place adverbs at appropriate positions.

× Umm, as a little bit sometime I go with new, uh, go with new place.

✓ Sometimes, I go to new places a little bit.

Problems: incorrect adverb placement and preposition ('go with new place' should be 'go to new places'), and awkward modifier sequence. Use 'sometimes' for frequency, 'go to' for movement to places, and pluralize 'places' for general meaning.

× I see the uh tow buildings have a entrance, right? I also take a photo.

✓ If I see two buildings that have an entrance, I also take a photo.

Issues: spelling ('tow' -> 'two'), article use ('a entrance' -> 'an entrance'), and conditional/time clause needed to connect actions. Use 'if' or 'when' to indicate occasion and correct articles before vowel sounds.

× It's like a mark to that is the uh travel.

✓ It's like a memento of the trip.

Problems: incorrect collocation and redundant words. 'Mark to that is the travel' is ungrammatical. Use 'memento of the trip' to express a keepsake from traveling.

× I umm, I travel is like a memory.

✓ Traveling is like a memory for me.

Original mixes subject forms: 'I travel is' is incorrect. Use the gerund 'traveling' as subject and clarity 'for me' to show personal feeling.

× Umm, I wish to uh go to a landmark 81 because I hear it about is the highest in my country.

✓ I wish to go to Landmark 81 because I heard it is the tallest building in my country.

Issues: tense consistency ('hear' should be past 'heard' when referring to a past report), article/name formatting ('a landmark 81' -> 'Landmark 81'), and word choice ('highest' better as 'tallest building'). Use past tense when reporting information previously received.

× Beside in here is also have a world class people of umm every country have the wealthy is umm live in here and I wish I one of the.

✓ Also, many world-class people from different countries and wealthy people live here, and I wish I could be one of them.

Multiple pronoun and agreement errors: 'people of every country have the wealthy' is nonsensical. Need plural subjects and correct pronoun/object 'one of them'. Use modal 'could' to express desire and correct word order.

× I think not because in the top buildings offer have a potential ancient like a fire.

✓ I don't think so because high buildings have a potential risk, such as fire.

Errors: awkward negation ('I think not' -> 'I don't think so'), incorrect noun 'ancient' used instead of 'accident' or 'risk', and word order. Use 'have a potential risk' or 'pose a potential risk' and give example 'such as fire'.

× When it's have a fire it's hard to assist.

✓ When there is a fire, it is hard to get assistance.

Original uses incorrect contraction and structure ('it's have a fire'). Use 'there is' for existence and 'get assistance' or 'evacuate/receive help' for clarity.

× Beside in here also is umm lost the close to nature so it's make me umm uncomfortable.

✓ Also, living here means being far from nature, so it makes me uncomfortable.

Problems: 'lost the close to nature' is ungrammatical and incorrect word choice. Use 'far from nature' to express distance from natural environment, and ensure subject-verb agreement 'it makes me'.