Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and relevant with a direct topic sentence and supporting detail. To improve further, reduce redundancy (avoid repeating 'shopping') and add one linking phrase to make it more cohesive. Also use minor vocabulary corrections and punctuation: say 'multi-storey' or 'multi-story' consistently.

Ví dụ: Yes. Near my home there is a very tall, multi-storey complex that contains a large supermarket and a shopping mall. I visit it at least once a week for groceries, and I sometimes browse the shops there when I have time.

Gợi ý: Your answer answers the question but is repetitive and has grammatical errors. Make a clear topic sentence, avoid repeating the same idea, and add a specific reason or brief example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example' and correct adjective use (e.g., 'modern-looking').

Ví dụ: Yes, I often photograph buildings because I find modern architecture appealing. For example, I recently took photos of a glass-fronted office block whose reflections looked striking in the morning light.

Gợi ý: Your response is relevant but contains grammar and word-choice errors ('it's' instead of 'its'; unclear phrase 'pleasant and possible'; awkward 'a while afternoon'). Make the topic sentence direct, correct possessives, and provide specific activities with linking words. Keep it concise (max 5 sentences).

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit the large city shopping mall because its architecture is very impressive. It has many stores and cafes, so I could shop for clothes, try different cuisines, and spend an afternoon exploring the area.

Gợi ý: This is a strong, natural answer with a clear topic sentence and relevant supporting details. To improve further, add a linking word to strengthen coherence (e.g., 'also') and provide a brief specific example of what you mean by 'different kind of lifestyle' (e.g., using communal facilities or a rooftop garden).

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because I have never done so before and it would be an exciting new experience. I imagine the views from the upper floors would be fantastic, and I would enjoy communal facilities such as a gym or rooftop garden.

× Yes, near my home there is a very tall building that houses a large supermarket and a shopping mall.

✓ Yes, near my home there is a very tall building that houses a large supermarket and a shopping mall.

No grammatical change needed; sentence correctly uses 'there is' for a singular building. Keep as is.

× It is an impressive multi story complex and I visit it at least once a week for groceries and shopping.

✓ It is an impressive multisystem complex and I visit it at least once a week for groceries and shopping.

The original sentence intended 'multi-story' as a compound adjective; correct form is 'multi-storey' or 'multi-story' (hyphenated). However 'multisystem' was incorrectly suggested—correct correction should be 'multi-story'. Use 'multi-story' to modify 'complex'. Also keep hyphenation for clarity.

× Yes, I take many photos of buildings because some buildings are very beautiful and modern look, so I take many photos of some buildings.

✓ Yes, I take many photos of buildings because some buildings look very beautiful and modern, so I photograph them often.

The phrase 'modern look' is a noun phrase used incorrectly; use the verb 'look' with adjectives: 'buildings look very beautiful and modern'. Also avoid repeating 'take many photos of some buildings' — use 'photograph them often' for conciseness and naturalness.

× Yes, I would like to visit the big shopping mall in the city because it's architecture is very impressive and it has pleasant and possible.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit the big shopping mall in the city because its architecture is very impressive and it is pleasant and comfortable.

Use the possessive pronoun 'its' rather than 'it's' (contraction of 'it is'). The phrase 'has pleasant and possible' is ungrammatical; likely intended 'is pleasant and comfortable'. Replace with appropriate adjectives to complete the meaning.

× There are so many stores and cafes there that I could shop for clothes, try different foods and spend a while afternoon exploring it.

✓ There are so many stores and cafes there that I could shop for clothes, try different foods, and spend a whole afternoon exploring it.

Use parallel verb forms in the list and correct 'a while afternoon' to 'a whole afternoon'. Add the Oxford comma before 'and' for clarity. 'Exploring it' is acceptable referring to the mall.

× Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because I have never lived in one before and it would be an exciting new experience.

✓ Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because I have never lived in one before and it would be an exciting new experience.

This sentence is grammatically correct: verb tenses and structures are appropriate for expressing hypothetical desire and past experience.

× I imagine the views from high floors would be great and it would be interesting to try a different kind of lifestyle.

✓ I imagine the views from the high floors would be great, and it would be interesting to try a different kind of lifestyle.

Add the definite article 'the' before 'high floors' for naturalness when referring to specific floors of that building. Otherwise sentence structure and tense are appropriate.