Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and relevant, but could be more concise and polished. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Correct minor grammar (use '22-story', 'on the 10th floor') and avoid repeating ideas. Use a linking phrase to connect details smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes — there are several tall buildings near my home. For example, I live in a 22-story residential tower and my flat is on the 10th floor, with a few similar high-rise blocks surrounding the building.

Gợi ý: Good content and a clear example, but fix grammar and fluency. Use linking words and correct verb forms ('buildings', 'amaze me', 'for example, the CN Tower, which is striking'). Reduce filler words like 'uh' and make sentences flow (one topic sentence + supporting detail).

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I usually photograph buildings that I find architecturally striking; for example, the CN Tower in downtown Toronto often catches my eye, so I take many pictures of its exterior whenever I visit.

Gợi ý: The idea is good, but the answer is disfluent and contains repetitions and errors. Provide a clear topic sentence, then specific reasons linked logically. Remove hesitations, correct tense and phrasing ('I've been nearby many times but only seen it from outside', 'I've never been inside', 'there are great restaurants and I'd like to try the EdgeWalk'). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes — I would love to visit the CN Tower properly. Although I've seen it many times from the outside, I've never been inside; I want to try the restaurants at the top and experience the EdgeWalk for the view and excitement.

Gợi ý: This answer is confusing and contains many grammar and clarity issues. Begin with a clear topic sentence stating your position, then give one specific reason and an example. Correct grammar ('I'm living in a tall building right now', 'my flat is on the 10th floor', 'I'd like to move to a higher floor or a different high-rise'). Avoid unclear figures like 'around 20,000' unless explained.

Ví dụ: I currently live in a tall building, but I wouldn't mind living higher up. My flat is on the 10th floor, and I'd prefer to move to a higher floor or another high-rise for better views and less street noise.

× I live in a 22 story residential tower and my flat is on 10th floor and there are several similar high rise blocks nearby.

✓ I live in a 22-story residential tower and my flat is on the 10th floor, and there are several similar high-rise blocks nearby.

Plural and noun phrase formatting: '22 story' should be hyphenated as a compound adjective '22-story'; '10th floor' needs the definite article 'the' before ordinal floors; 'high rise' as an adjective should be hyphenated 'high-rise'. These changes make the noun phrases grammatically correct and idiomatic. Suggestion: Use hyphens for compound adjectives and include articles with ordinal numbers describing specific floors.

× I take photos of building which are architecturally wonderful or amazes me.

✓ I take photos of buildings which are architecturally wonderful or amaze me.

Article and subject-verb agreement: 'building' should be plural 'buildings' to match 'photos of' and the relative clause; the verb must agree with plural 'buildings', so 'amazes' should be 'amaze'. Also consider replacing 'which' with 'that' for restrictive clauses in speech, but 'which' is acceptable in informal use. Suggestion: Use plural nouns when referring to multiple items and match verb number to the noun.

× I take photos of building which are architecturally wonderful or amazes me.

✓ I take photos of buildings which are architecturally wonderful or amaze me.

Third-person singular: The verb 'amazes' is third-person singular and does not agree with the plural subject 'buildings'; change to 'amaze'. Suggestion: Identify the subject number (singular/plural) to choose the correct verb form.

× Uh, for example, the CN Tower which is really beautiful externally.

✓ For example, the CN Tower is really beautiful on the outside.

Incomplete sentence/fragment: The original lacks a main verb connecting the clause. Also 'externally' is awkward; 'on the outside' or 'externally' as an adverb requires restructuring. Suggestion: Provide a full clause with a verb (is) and use natural adverbial phrase 'on the outside'.

× I take a lot of pictures whenever I visit downtown Toronto.

✓ I take a lot of pictures whenever I visit downtown Toronto.

This sentence is correct; no change needed. Included here to indicate checked: noun usage and plurality are appropriate. Suggestion: None.

× Yes, definitely I would love to visit the CN Tower.

✓ Yes, definitely; I would love to visit the CN Tower.

Punctuation and sentence flow: Add a pause or connector between 'definitely' and the main clause to improve clarity. Grammatically acceptable but better with a semicolon or comma. Suggestion: Use punctuation to separate interjections from main clauses.

× I have been there so many times from but had a look only from outside, but I have never seen I have never been inside.

✓ I have been there many times but have only looked at it from outside; I have never been inside.

Multiple structural problems: 'from' is extraneous; tense and auxiliary verbs are repeated and misplaced ('had a look only from outside' is awkward); duplicate 'I have never' repeated. Rearranged to 'have been there many times' and 'have only looked at it from outside' and a clear second clause 'I have never been inside.' Suggestion: Remove unnecessary words, avoid repetition, and keep auxiliary verbs correctly placed for present perfect constructions.

× I I heard that or some wonderful restaurants up there and I would also try like to try the edge walk for the.

✓ I heard that there are some wonderful restaurants up there, and I would also like to try the EdgeWalk.

Pronoun and filler issues: Remove duplicated 'I'; insert 'there are' to introduce existence of restaurants; 'like to try' ordering fixed and remove extra 'try' and filler 'for the.' 'EdgeWalk' is the proper name and should be capitalized as one word. Suggestion: Avoid fillers and duplication, include verbs to introduce existence ('there are'), and use correct word order for 'would like to'. Use proper names accurately.

× I I am living in a tall winning right now but The thing is I am on my flat is on 10th floor.

✓ I am living in a tall building right now, but the thing is my flat is on the 10th floor.

Multiple errors: 'winning' should be 'building' (word choice), duplicate 'I', capitalization error 'The', and extraneous words 'I am on'. The phrase should be 'my flat is on the 10th floor' with 'the' before ordinal. Suggestion: Proofread for word choice and remove duplicate words; ensure articles before ordinals.

× So I would like to change my apartment which is in a high story building high rise building which is around 20,000.

✓ So I would like to change my apartment to one in a high-rise building that costs around 20,000.

Quantifier and sentence structure: 'which is in a high story building high rise building' is repetitive and ungrammatical; 'around 20,000' needs a unit (dollars, rupees, etc.) and a verb 'costs' to clarify meaning. Also hyphenate 'high-rise'. Suggestion: Specify the currency or unit for numbers and use clear clause structure with a verb (e.g., 'that costs around $20,000').