Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and accurate. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific details. Correct grammar (use 'near my home', 'a three‑storey mall', 'a large house'). Use linking words like 'for example' or 'also' sparingly to keep it natural. Limit to 2–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes. There are several tall buildings near my home. For example, there is a three‑storey shopping mall and a large, attractive house nearby, so I often enjoy looking at them when I walk around the neighbourhood.

Gợi ý: Organise your answer with a clear topic sentence and one or two specific reasons. Avoid fillers and repeated words. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to show reason and result. Keep sentences natural and under five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of interesting buildings because I like their shapes and details. For example, when I spot an unusual or impressive building I quickly take a picture and then share it with friends and family.

Gợi ý: Give one clear, correct description and a reason why you want to visit. Fix grammar (e.g. 'near my home', 'a large house made of glass', 'a big backyard with a swimming pool'). Use linking words like 'because' to explain your preference. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes. Near my home there is a large house made mostly of glass with a big backyard and a swimming pool. I would like to visit it because the architecture looks modern and I am curious to see the interior design.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and give one or two concise reasons. Correct grammar ('a tall building', 'I have never lived in one', 'experience what city living is like'). Avoid rhetorical questions; instead state reasons with linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because I have never tried it and I want to experience city living. I am curious about the views and the convenient facilities such buildings often offer.

× Yes, there are many tall buildings near about my home.

✓ Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home.

Using both 'near' and 'about' is redundant and ungrammatical; use 'near' or 'near my home' to show proximity. Suggestion: say 'near my home' or 'nearby.'

× One of the one of them is a mall that is 3 story building.

✓ One of them is a mall that is a three-story building.

The phrase 'One of the one of them' is repeated and incorrect. Also '3 story' needs an article and a hyphenated adjective 'three-story.' Suggestion: remove repetition and use 'a three-story building.'

× It is very good looking and also there is a home that is very beautiful and it is very big so I love to watch the tall buildings.

✓ It looks very good, and there is a very beautiful, very large house, so I love looking at the tall buildings.

Awkward coordination and repeated 'very' with unclear subject. Use clear clauses and consistent verb forms: 'looks' (present), 'there is' for existence, and 'love looking at' for habitual action. Combine adjectives correctly and avoid unnecessary repetition.

× Of course I love to take photos of the buildings.

✓ Of course I love to take photos of buildings.

Using 'the' before 'buildings' implies specific buildings previously identified; in general statement omit 'the.' Suggestion: remove the definite article for general habit.

× Whenever I see any tall buildings or the impressive 1 the the unusual buildings, I take the photo suddenly of that building and also I share it with my friends and the family members.

✓ Whenever I see tall or unusually impressive buildings, I suddenly take a photo of the building and share it with my friends and family.

Several issues: 'any' is unnecessary with 'whenever I see'; 'the impressive 1 the the unusual' is garbled; 'take the photo suddenly of that building' has wrong word order and article use; 'the family members' should be 'family.' Reorder to natural English and use 'a photo' for a single picture; place adverb 'suddenly' before verb.

× I love the photographs of the different buildings.

✓ I love photographs of different buildings.

Unnecessary 'the' and awkward 'the different buildings.' For general preference, omit 'the' and use 'different' without 'the.'

× Yes, there is a building that is near about my home.

✓ Yes, there is a building near my home.

'Near about' is incorrect and redundant; use 'near' or 'near my home.' Keep sentence concise.

× It is a big home which is all made-up of a glass and it is having a large background with the swimming pool in it.

✓ It is a large house made entirely of glass and has a spacious backyard with a swimming pool.

Word choices and forms are incorrect: 'big home' -> 'large house'; 'made-up of a glass' -> 'made entirely of glass'; 'having a large background' -> 'has a spacious backyard.' Use natural collocations and correct verb forms.

× I love to visit that building when one of my friend.

✓ I love to visit that building with one of my friends.

The phrase 'when one of my friend' is ungrammatical. Use 'with one of my friends' to indicate companionship; plural 'friends' required.

× We both love the tall buildings.

✓ We both love tall buildings.

Omit 'the' for general statement; 'the' makes it specific. Keep plural 'buildings' to match 'we both.'

× Uh yes I would like to live in a tall buildings because till now I didn't live in a tall building so I want to experience that.

✓ Uh yes, I would like to live in a tall building because I haven't lived in one until now, so I want to experience it.

Mix of singular/plural: 'a tall buildings' is wrong; use singular 'a tall building.' Tense and aspect: 'didn't live in' should be present perfect 'haven't lived in' for experience up to now; 'that' -> 'it.' Add commas and natural phrasing.

× How is the lifestyle living in a building that is too huge and I would also prefer to explore the different building.

✓ I wonder what the lifestyle is like living in such a huge building, and I would also like to explore different buildings.

The original mixes a question with a statement and has unnatural phrasing 'how is the lifestyle living in a building that is too huge.' Use 'I wonder what the lifestyle is like' for clarity; 'prefer to explore' -> 'would like to explore'; 'the different building' -> 'different buildings.'