Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise and correct grammar; start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and give one specific detail. Use linking words for clarity.

Ví dụ: No, there aren’t many tall buildings near my home because I live in a small town. Most buildings are only a few storeys high; in fact, the tallest building nearby is only about six storeys. Therefore the skyline is quite low and suburban.

Gợi ý: Begin with a direct yes/no and then give specific examples and short reasons. Correct word choice and avoid repetitions. Use linking words to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often photograph buildings, especially historic ones like temples and old palaces because they have interesting details. I also enjoy photographing modern landmarks such as the Oriental Pearl Tower and the Oriental Gate, as their shapes and lights are very impressive.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence, then add specific reasons and use linking words. Correct collocations (spare time, live broadcast/recordings) and avoid repeating "I really want".

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit the CCTV Tower in Beijing because it has a unique design and offers great views. Also, I’ve heard they sometimes have live recordings inside, so I’d like to see the studios and take some photographs from the observation areas.

Gợi ý: State your position clearly, then add one specific reason and a short example. Use natural phrases (live in a high-rise, spectacular view, watch the sunrise above the clouds) and finish the sentence fully.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to live in a high-rise because it would provide spectacular views of the surrounding area. For example, from an upper floor I could watch the sunrise above the clouds and see the city light up in the morning.

× As I said, I live in a small town, so there are real rare tall buildings near my home.

✓ As I said, I live in a small town, so there are really few tall buildings near my home.

Issue: incorrect use of adverb/adjective and quantifier. Replace 'real rare' with 'really few' or 'very few' to correctly modify countable plural noun 'buildings'. 'Really' is an adverb modifying 'few'. Use 'few' (not 'rare') for small quantity of countable nouns.

× All of them are very flat.

✓ All of them are very short.

The word 'flat' describes level or smooth surface; likely intended meaning is 'not tall'. This is a word choice error rather than a strict grammar error, but it affects correctness. Use 'short' to describe lacking height.

× The tallest 1 is not higher than the 6th floor.

✓ The tallest one is not higher than the sixth floor.

Use the word 'one' rather than numeral '1' in sentence context. Also spell ordinal numbers in normal text as 'sixth'. This corrects formality and clarity. The meaning: the tallest building is no higher than the sixth floor.

× Yes, I mainly take photos of historical buildings such as Temples Palace, but I also travel to other places and visit more than buildings such as the Oriental Pearl Tower and the the Oriental Gate.

✓ Yes, I mainly take photos of historical buildings such as temples and palaces, but I also travel to other places and visit other buildings such as the Oriental Pearl Tower and the Oriental Gate.

Multiple errors: capitalization and pluralization for 'temples' and 'palaces'; 'more than buildings' is incorrect — use 'other buildings'; duplicate 'the the' is a typo. Also use 'and' between plural nouns.

× They are really impressive.

✓ They are really impressive.

This sentence is grammatically correct. No change needed. It is kept for completeness.

× Yes, I really want to spare time to visit the CCTV tower in Beijing.

✓ Yes, I really want to make time to visit the CCTV Tower in Beijing.

'Spare time' as a verb phrase is awkward; native speakers say 'make time' or 'find time'. Also capitalize 'Tower' as part of the proper name. This improves naturalness; modal/verb choice corrected.

× It is high and I heard that there are some real scene of recording television programs, so I really want to visit it and I like to take some beautiful pictures of it.

✓ It is tall, and I heard that there are real recording studios where television programs are filmed, so I really want to visit it and take some good pictures.

Multiple issues: use 'tall' rather than 'high' for buildings. 'Real scene of recording television programs' is ungrammatical — 'real recording studios' or 'actual recording studios' is correct. Use 'where television programs are filmed' for clarity. 'I like to take' should be 'I want to take' to match desire. Simplify 'some beautiful pictures' to 'some good pictures' or 'some beautiful pictures' is fine; kept as 'good pictures' for naturalness.

× Yes, maybe because I think living in a tall height will give me a spectacular view of the sceneries around me.

✓ Yes, maybe because I think living at a great height will give me a spectacular view of the scenery around me.

Use 'at a great height' not 'in a tall height'. 'Scenery' is an uncountable noun; use singular 'the scenery' not 'the sceneries'.

× For example, I can watch the sunrise in the cloud.

✓ For example, I can watch the sunrise in the clouds.

Use plural 'clouds' ('in the clouds') to describe being among clouds. Also 'watch the sunrise from the clouds' can be used if meaning observation point; corrected to natural prepositional phrase.

× I think that would be.

✓ I think that would be wonderful.

Sentence is incomplete and lacks a complement. Add an adjective (e.g., 'wonderful' or 'nice') to complete the thought and make the sentence meaningful.