Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be clearer and more concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid fillers (uh, um) and grammar mistakes (singular/plural, word order).

Ví dụ: Yes. There are many tall buildings near my home because I live in Shenzhen, a fast-developing city with numerous skyscrapers. However, I dislike them because they block natural light and overshadow the trees in my neighborhood.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and use correct verb forms. Use linking words to contrast preferences and give a specific example of an ancient building you photographed. Avoid vague phrases like 'beauties' and unclear grammar.

Ví dụ: Not usually. I prefer photographing natural scenery such as mountains and rivers because I enjoy capturing wide landscapes. However, I sometimes photograph historic buildings, for example an ancient temple, because they have unique details and a lot of character.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence naming the building correctly, and provide brief reasons why you want to visit. Pronunciation/word choice errors (name of building) matter—use the correct name (Sagrada Família) and one or two specific reasons.

Ví dụ: Yes. I would love to visit the Sagrada Família in Barcelona because its architecture is very unique and intricate. The church was designed by Antoni Gaudí, and I want to see the colorful facades and unusual shapes in person.

Gợi ý: Respond directly and give a concise, specific reason. Improve grammar (singular/plural, article use) and avoid repetition. Add one or two supporting details such as safety concerns or preference for garden space.

Ví dụ: No, I wouldn't. I prefer living in a low-rise house because I feel unsafe in high places and I like having a garden and more outdoor space. Tall buildings make me anxious and offer less private outdoor area.

× Yes, there are definitely so many tall buildings near my home because I live in Shenzhen, uh, is uh, more than a fast-paced developed city which means there are so many skyscrapers.

✓ Yes, there are definitely many tall buildings near my home because I live in Shenzhen, which is a very fast-paced, developed city and has many skyscrapers.

Issues: incorrect clause structure and awkward verb use ('is uh, more than a fast-paced developed city' is ungrammatical). Use 'which is' to introduce a relative clause describing Shenzhen. Replace 'so many' with 'many' for natural phrasing and combine ideas with 'and' to show consequence. Also add articles/commas for clarity and correct adjective order (fast-paced, developed).

× But I don't like tall buildings because it hide the light and the uh trees.

✓ But I don't like tall buildings because they hide the light and the trees.

Error: 'it hide' mismatches plural subject. 'Tall buildings' is plural, so use 'they hide'. Also 'the trees' needs the definite article for specific trees mentioned; remove filler sounds.

× I don't like take photos of beauties.

✓ I don't like taking photos of beautiful things.

Error: after 'like' use gerund form 'taking'. 'Beauties' is a noun but unnatural here; use 'beautiful things' or 'beautiful subjects'. Gerund required when expressing preferences: 'like taking'. Also adjust vocabulary for naturalness.

× Actually I prefer take photos of a natural sceneries like mountains or rivers, umm but sometimes I take photos of ancient buildings because they are very special and uh, old.

✓ Actually I prefer taking photos of natural scenery like mountains or rivers, but sometimes I take photos of ancient buildings because they are very special and old.

Error: after 'prefer' use gerund 'taking'. Use uncountable 'scenery' instead of 'a natural sceneries'. Remove article 'a' and plural mismatch. Clean filler words and keep tense consistent.

× Yes, there are building I definitely want to visit which is the. Send the tongue and speak in Barcelona, Spain, because it's a very unique and special buildings designed by a talented designer.

✓ Yes, there is a building I definitely want to visit: the Sagrada Familia in Barcelona, Spain, because it's a very unique and special building designed by a talented architect.

Multiple errors: 'there are building' mixes plural verb with singular noun; use 'there is a building'. Name correction: likely 'Sagrada Família' (not 'Send the tongue and speak'). Use singular 'building' to match 'a building' and singular verb 'is'. Use 'architect' rather than 'designer' for a person who designs buildings. Remove extra words and fix article use.

× No, I don't want to live in a tall buildings at all because I prefer to live in a a lower. House because tall buildings are very dangerous for for me, I'm afraid of something very high and.

✓ No, I don't want to live in a tall building at all because I prefer to live in a lower house; tall buildings are dangerous for me because I'm afraid of heights.

Errors: 'a tall buildings' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'a tall building' or 'tall buildings' without 'a'. 'a a lower. House' is fragmented; use 'a lower house' or better 'a low house' but 'house on lower floors' is more natural. Remove duplicate 'for'. Express fear correctly: 'afraid of heights' instead of 'afraid of something very high and.' Ensure sentence has proper verb and completes the idea.