Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Clarifiez et structurez votre réponse. Commencez par une phrase directe répondant à la question, puis ajoutez un ou deux détails précis (par exemple le nombre d'étages ou le type de bâtiment). Évitez les répétitions et les hésitations. Travaillez la grammaire (pluriel, concordance) et la fluidité pour rester naturel en moins de 5 phrases.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several tall buildings near my home. I live in a large building with nine apartments, and many neighboring blocks are similarly high. The area feels quite urban because of these multi-storey buildings.

Gợi ý: Soyez plus précis et concis. Répondez d'abord par une phrase claire, puis donnez un ou deux exemples concrets en évitant hésitations et répétitions. Utilisez des nombres et des noms de lieux correctement et ouvrez la phrase avec un lien si nécessaire (e.g. "When I travel...").

Ví dụ: Yes, I often photograph buildings when I travel. For example, in Casablanca I took pictures of a 17-floor office tower and several hotels that are about 23 or 24 storeys high.

Gợi ý: Répondez directement puis ajoutez des détails spécifiques et organisés. Nommez correctement le bâtiment et décrivez pourquoi vous voulez le visiter (vue, café, emplacement). Évitez les hésitations et les répétitions, et utilisez des connecteurs pour la cohérence.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit the Hotel Mansour in Casablanca. It is in the city centre and offers sea views, a pleasant café and attractive public spaces, which is why I want to go there.

Gợi ý: Structurez la réponse: commencez par une affirmation claire, puis expliquez brièvement vos raisons avec un exemple concret. Évitez les hésitations et les contradictions (Burj Khalifa vs 9-floor building). Restez naturel et limitez-vous à 2–3 phrases bien liées.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because I enjoy the views and the modern facilities. For instance, living in a high-rise like the Burj Khalifa would offer remarkable city and sea panoramas and convenient amenities.

× Yes, absolutely near my home where I have many tall building because I I live in a building have 9 apartments, not small apartment, it's large.

✓ Yes, absolutely. Near my home there are many tall buildings because I live in a building that has nine apartments; it's not a small apartment, it's large.

The student used singular 'building' where plural 'buildings' is required and omitted necessary articles and relative pronoun. Use 'there are' for existence with plural (Grammar problem type 3 and 1) and 'a building that has nine apartments' to link clauses. Also remove the duplicated 'I' and correct article use. Suggestion: identify countable nouns and ensure singular/plural agreement, include relative pronouns ('that') for defining clauses, and use 'there is/there are' for existence. Note: Although multiple issues exist, corrections follow the allowed problem types by focusing on singular/plural and related structure.

× Well, to be honest, when I travel to Casablanca, I take some photos for tall building, have, uh has UH-17 floor and uh, sometimes for uh, some hotels have I think 23 or 24 floor.

✓ Well, to be honest, when I travel to Casablanca, I take some photos of tall buildings; one has 17 floors and sometimes some hotels have, I think, 23 or 24 floors.

Use 'photos of' not 'photos for' to indicate the object of the photograph. Also pluralize 'building/buildings' and 'floor/floors' to match the quantities. Use 'one has 17 floors' to refer to a specific building and include commas for clarity. Suggestion: use 'of' with 'take photos' and ensure nouns agree in number with their numbers.

× Yes, I like to visit hotel or wild Mansour is a tall building located in the city center of Casablanca.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit the hotel 'Wild Mansour', which is a tall building located in the city center of Casablanca.

Use article 'the' before a specific hotel and add a relative clause introducer 'which' to connect the two ideas. Also use conditional 'would like' for polite desire. Proper nouns for names should be capitalized and optionally quoted. Ensure noun forms and articles are correct.

× It has a view, uh, the sea and uh, have a good, uh, have a good cafe and uh, surface.

✓ It has a view of the sea and a good cafe and terrace.

Use 'a view of the sea' (preposition 'of' required). Replace repetitive and incorrect phrases with natural nouns: 'a good cafe and terrace' or 'a good cafe and an outdoor area' instead of 'surface'. Suggestion: learn common collocations like 'a view of' and avoid repeating 'have' within the same clause.

× Honestly, yes, uh, I want to live in a tall building like uh, Burj Khalifa or uh, or some building have 9 floors.

✓ Honestly, yes. I want to live in a tall building like the Burj Khalifa or in a building that has nine floors.

Use 'the' before world-famous building names like 'the Burj Khalifa'. Use 'a building that has nine floors' to form a correct relative clause and ensure agreement between noun and verb. Modal 'want to' is fine; the main error is article and relative clause structure. Suggestion: include definite articles for unique landmarks and use 'that has' when describing features.

× But now I uh, I try to adapt my life and after that I think uh.

✓ But now I am trying to adapt to this life, and after that I think I will...

The student used simple present 'I try' where present continuous 'I am trying' better expresses an ongoing action. Include 'adapt to' with correct preposition. The trailing 'I think' needs completion; using 'I think I will' indicates future intention. Suggestion: use present continuous for ongoing processes and remember required prepositions (adapt to).