Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there tall buildings near your home?
Thí sinh
No, I'm in a small town. Also there is only A2 Storey house or a old building so which is not more taller and I like the way it is because it is more quieter the place. The place is very peaceful without the tall buildings.
Giám khảo
Do you take photos of buildings?
Thí sinh
Yeah, sometime I take photos of high rises. If there is a old historical building or a modern designed architectural building, I love to take pictures of them and hold a precious memory to watch it till after and.
Giám khảo
Is there a building that you would like to visit?
Thí sinh
Yeah, of course I would love to visit Taj Mahal in Agra, which is a world famous architectural building and, uh, it's a quite a beautiful place, uh, where the people enjoy a lot and, uh, takes a picture.
Giám khảo
Do you want to live in a tall building?
Thí sinh
Absolutely, I want to live in a tall building, uh, because it contains of an old view from the top floor of a building relative to the ground floor and from the top floor, uh, I feel relaxed and freshman.
Are there tall buildings near your home?
Điểm: 52.0Gợi ý: Be concise and correct grammar: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct articles, comparatives, and word choice (e.g. 'two-storey', 'older', 'taller', 'quieter'). Avoid redundancy and limit to 3–4 sentences.
Ví dụ: No, there are no tall buildings near my home. I live in a small town with mostly two-storey houses and some older buildings. Because of that, the area is much quieter and more peaceful than the city, which I really appreciate.
Do you take photos of buildings?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: Give a clear direct answer, then provide specific examples and use correct tense and articles. Use linking words (for example, because, when) to organize details. Replace vague phrases like 'till after' with 'later' or 'to remember'. Keep to 2–3 sentences.
Ví dụ: Yes, I sometimes take photos of buildings, especially historical monuments and modern architectural designs. For example, when I visit an old church or a striking new tower, I photograph details like facades or decorations so I can remember the visit later.
Is there a building that you would like to visit?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Answer directly, then give specific reasons and use fewer fillers (uh). Mention what you would do there and why it appeals to you. Use correct adjectives and sentence structure, and keep response to 2–3 sentences.
Ví dụ: Yes, I would love to visit the Taj Mahal in Agra because it is a world-famous example of beautiful architecture. I want to see its intricate marble work and take photos, and I think visiting would be a memorable cultural experience.
Do you want to live in a tall building?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Provide a clear reasoned answer with correct vocabulary: say why you would like it and give concrete benefits (views, privacy, amenities). Fix awkward phrases ('contains of an old view', 'freshman') and avoid fillers. Keep to 2–3 concise sentences.
Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because the top floors offer great views of the city and feel more private. Living high up would help me relax and enjoy fresh air and natural light.
× Also there is only A2 Storey house or a old building so which is not more taller and I like the way it is because it is more quieter the place.
✓ Also there are only two-storey houses or an old building, so they are not very tall and I like it because the place is quieter.
Original sentence has singular/plural errors: 'there is only A2 Storey house' should be plural 'there are only two-storey houses' and number formatting 'A2' is incorrect. 'a old building' should be 'an old building' (article before vowel sound) — this also relates to article use but main problem is number agreement. 'which is not more taller' is incorrect comparative and redundancy; 'not very tall' or 'not taller' is correct. 'it is more quieter the place' misorders words and uses double comparative 'more quieter'; use 'the place is quieter' or 'quieter'. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement with plural subjects, use correct number words, use 'an' before vowel sounds, avoid double comparatives, and place adjectives before subjects.'},{