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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are there tall buildings near your home?

Thí sinh

Yes, there are a lot of modern building near the place I live in my neighborhood there be a lot of apartment in syphon more.

Giám khảo

Do you take photos of buildings?

Thí sinh

Yeah, I usually go for a walk near my neighborhood and take photo with the new buildings, which I feel beautiful.

Giám khảo

Is there a building that you would like to visit?

Thí sinh

There are a lot of famous construction in the world that I would like to visit, especially the the Taiwan 101 tower, which is the highest tower in Taiwan and I feel the magnificent structure of the tower.

Giám khảo

Do you want to live in a tall building?

Thí sinh

I would like to live in a house on the crowd in the future because I see that some it is a con more convenient to me to live in the crowd.

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Part 1

Are there tall buildings near your home?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: Make the response grammatically correct, concise, and add one clear supporting detail. Use a topic sentence, one linking word, and specific example. Avoid redundancy and keep within 1–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many modern buildings near my home. For example, my neighborhood has several tall apartment blocks along Syphon Road, which were built in the last five years.

Do you take photos of buildings?

Điểm: 56.0

Gợi ý: Start with a direct topic sentence, correct verb forms, and include a reason or brief detail using a linking word. Keep it natural and not repetitive.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of buildings when I go for a walk. I especially like photographing new developments because their modern design looks beautiful and changes the skyline.

Is there a building that you would like to visit?

Điểm: 64.0

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence naming a specific building, then add one or two specific reasons using linking words. Correct article use and reduce repetition.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit Taipei 101 in Taiwan because it was once the tallest building in the world and its engineering and panoramic views look impressive. Also, I would enjoy seeing how the building blends modern design with local culture.

Do you want to live in a tall building?

Điểm: 42.0

Gợi ý: Answer directly whether you want to live in a tall building, use correct phrases (e.g. "in a high-rise"), and give one clear reason with a linking word. Fix vocabulary errors and be concise.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to live in a high-rise apartment in the future because it is more convenient for me, as shops and public transport are often within walking distance.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× Yes, there are a lot of modern building near the place I live in my neighborhood there be a lot of apartment in syphon more.

Yes, there are a lot of modern buildings near the place I live. In my neighborhood there are a lot of apartments in Xinfeng (or correct place name).

The sentence contains singular/plural mismatches: 'building' should be plural 'buildings' because 'a lot of' requires a plural count noun; 'apartment' should be 'apartments'. Also 'there be' is incorrect (see another entry) but the primary issue here is pluralization. Suggestion: ensure nouns agree in number with quantifiers (a lot of + plural noun). Use shorter sentences to avoid run-ons.

There be issue

× Yes, there are a lot of modern building near the place I live in my neighborhood there be a lot of apartment in syphon more.

Yes, there are a lot of modern buildings near the place I live. In my neighborhood there are a lot of apartments in Xinfeng (or correct place name).

The construction 'there be' is ungrammatical in standard English. The correct existential form uses 'there is' or 'there are' depending on number. Because 'apartments' is plural, use 'there are'. Also correct place name and split into two sentences to improve clarity.

Verb + -ing form

× Yeah, I usually go for a walk near my neighborhood and take photo with the new buildings, which I feel beautiful.

Yeah, I usually go for a walk around my neighborhood and take photos of the new buildings, which I find beautiful.

'Take photo' is wrong; use the plural 'take photos' or 'take a photo'. Preposition 'with' is incorrect for the object of taking photos; use 'of'. 'Feel' is not used to describe perceiving visual beauty; use 'find' or 'think' + adjective. Also 'near my neighborhood' is less natural than 'around my neighborhood'.

Singular and plural issue

× Yeah, I usually go for a walk near my neighborhood and take photo with the new buildings, which I feel beautiful.

Yeah, I usually go for a walk around my neighborhood and take photos of the new buildings, which I find beautiful.

Pluralization: 'photo' should be 'photos' when speaking generally. Ensure noun forms match intended meaning: use plural for repeated action.

Singular and plural issue

× There are a lot of famous construction in the world that I would like to visit, especially the the Taiwan 101 tower, which is the highest tower in Taiwan and I feel the magnificent structure of the tower.

There are a lot of famous constructions in the world that I would like to visit, especially the Taipei 101 tower, which is the tallest tower in Taiwan, and I admire its magnificent structure.

'Construction' as a countable noun needs plural 'constructions' when referring to many structures. 'The the Taiwan 101' contains a duplicated article; correct name is 'Taipei 101'. 'Highest' is relative but 'tallest' is more natural for height comparison among buildings. 'I feel the magnificent structure' is unnatural; use 'I admire its magnificent structure'.

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× There are a lot of famous construction in the world that I would like to visit, especially the the Taiwan 101 tower, which is the highest tower in Taiwan and I feel the magnificent structure of the tower.

There are a lot of famous constructions in the world that I would like to visit, especially Taipei 101, which is the tallest tower in Taiwan, and I admire its magnificent structure.

Using 'highest' is grammatically correct but 'tallest' is the usual adjective for buildings. 'I feel the magnificent structure' uses 'feel' incorrectly; 'admire' or 'appreciate' are appropriate verbs when describing opinion about appearance.

Present tense issue

× I would like to live in a house on the crowd in the future because I see that some it is a con more convenient to me to live in the crowd.

I would like to live in a house in the city in the future because I think it is more convenient for me to live in a crowded area.

The original mixes incorrect phrases: 'on the crowd' should be 'in the city' or 'in a crowded area'. 'I see that some it is a con more convenient' is ungrammatical and mixes words; use 'I think it is more convenient for me'. Maintain present/future tense consistency: 'would like' + explanation in present tense opinion 'I think'. Also adjust prepositions and word order for clarity.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BeautifulAttractive
FamousWell known
ModernPresent-day; Fashionable
NewRecently developed; Novel; Different; Additional; Reinvigorated
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