Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there tall buildings near your home?
Thí sinh
No, there are not too many tall buildings around my home because I live in a apartment and the highest floor is about 7 floors.
Giám khảo
Do you take photos of buildings?
Thí sinh
No, I'm not really keen on that to be honest. I always prefer to take a photo of a scenery, like the nature or something else, but not buildings.
Giám khảo
Is there a building that you would like to visit?
Thí sinh
Yes there is. It is in my campus and it is the library. I go to the library almost every day.
Giám khảo
Do you want to live in a tall building?
Thí sinh
No, I don't really want to live in a tall building because I live in the South of China so in summer there will be a lot of typhoon. Living in a high rise building will make me feel lack of security when there's a a a blast.
Are there tall buildings near your home?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答要更简洁并且注意细节准确性与流畅性。例如不要说“a apartment”,应为“an apartment”。开头可以直接回答然后补充一两句具体信息,句子不宜过长或重复。练习时注意发音连贯和冠词使用。
Ví dụ: No, there aren't many tall buildings near my home. I live in an apartment building that’s only about seven storeys high, so the area feels quite low-rise and residential.
Do you take photos of buildings?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然并使用更合适的词汇。避免口语填充词(例如“to be honest”可少用)并用具体例子说明你喜欢拍什么(如山、海或日落)。可以用连接词简洁表达原因。
Ví dụ: Not really. I prefer photographing landscapes, such as mountains, beaches or sunsets, because I enjoy capturing natural light and colours rather than architectural details.
Is there a building that you would like to visit?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答清晰但可更自然地扩展。先直接回答,再用一两句说明原因或细节,比如图书馆为什么吸引你(安静、资源丰富、氛围好)。注意连贯性的连接词。
Ví dụ: Yes — the library on my campus. I go there almost every day because it’s quiet and has a large collection of books and study spaces, which helps me focus on my work.
Do you want to live in a tall building?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答要更简洁、准确并避免重复或犹豫词(如“a a a”)。表达原因时用更恰当的词汇,例如concerned about safety during typhoons. 可提供一个替代选项说明个人偏好。
Ví dụ: No, I wouldn't. I live in the south of China where typhoons are common in summer, so I’m concerned about safety and prefer low-rise housing that feels more secure during storms.
× No, there are not too many tall buildings around my home because I live in a apartment and the highest floor is about 7 floors.
✓ No, there are not too many tall buildings around my home because I live in an apartment and the highest floor is about seven floors.
错误类型:冠词使用错误。“a apartment”中的名词apartment以元音音素开头,应使用不定冠词“an”。此外,数字在正式句子中最好用拼写形式“seven”。建议:在以元音音素开头的单词前使用“an”;在正式书写中将小于十的数字拼写出来。
× No, I'm not really keen on that to be honest. I always prefer to take a photo of a scenery, like the nature or something else, but not buildings.
✓ No, I'm not really keen on that to be honest. I always prefer to take a photo of scenery, like nature or something else, but not buildings.
错误类型:与形容词/名词搭配和冠词使用有关。“a photo of a scenery”不自然,“scenery”和“nature”是不可数名词,不要加不定冠词“a”或定冠词“the”(除非特指)。建议:不可数名词前不要随意使用“a/the”;说一般的风景用“scenery”,一般的大自然用“nature”。
× Yes there is. It is in my campus and it is the library. I go to the library almost every day.
✓ Yes, there is. It is on my campus and it is the library. I go to the library almost every day.
错误类型:固定搭配/介词使用错误。英文中通常说“on campus”表示在校园内,而不是“in my campus”。建议:使用固定搭配“on campus”;另句首在“Yes”后加逗号更自然。
× No, I don't really want to live in a tall building because I live in the South of China so in summer there will be a lot of typhoon. Living in a high rise building will make me feel lack of security when there's a a a blast.
✓ No, I don't really want to live in a tall building because I live in the south of China, so in summer there are a lot of typhoons. Living in a high-rise building would make me feel a lack of security if there were a storm.
错误类型包含冠词、复数与时态/语气使用问题: 1) “the South of China”可小写“the south of China”或更自然说“southern China”。 2) “a lot of typhoon”错误:typhoon为可数名词,应使用复数“typhoons”,并用“there are”。 3) “Living... will make me feel lack of security”中应使用不定冠词“a lack of security”。 4) 原句末尾“when there's a a a blast”不自然且有重复,改为“if there were a storm”更符合虚拟或假设语气。建议:注意可数/不可数名词的单复数与冠词,使用恰当的条件或虚拟语气表达担忧;删除重复词语并用更准确的词汇(storm/typhoon)。