Food— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

What is your favourite food?

Thí sinh

I really like pasta, specifically the carbonara.

Giám khảo

What kind of food did you like when you were young?

Thí sinh

I'm still being young and my favorite food in this moment every bit is pasta and especially the carbonara because they have it helps a good taste and it's very creamy and it's delicious.

Giám khảo

Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?

Thí sinh

I don't think so because I live in Colombia and with the same food all the year and things like rice, potato, meat, chicken.

Giám khảo

Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?

Thí sinh

My favorite food never change. I used to liking the same since I was a child.

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Part 1

What is your favourite food?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: Tu respuesta es clara pero muy breve y podría ser más natural y efectiva si añades una oración de apoyo con detalles específicos (por ejemplo, por qué te gusta, cuándo lo comes). Asimismo, evita fragmentos muy cortos y procura usar una estructura: oración tema + detalles. Usa conectores si añades más información.

Ví dụ: My favourite food is pasta, especially carbonara. I like it because the sauce is rich and creamy, and it reminds me of dinners with my family. For example, we often make it on weekends when we have more time to cook together.

What kind of food did you like when you were young?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: La respuesta tiene errores gramaticales y es confusa. Debes responder directamente con una oración tema en pasado si la pregunta se refiere a la infancia, y luego dar detalles específicos. Evita traducciones literales y repeticiones. Usa conectores como 'when' o 'because' correctamente.

Ví dụ: When I was young, I liked simple foods, especially pasta like carbonara. I enjoyed it because the creamy sauce and bacon made it very tasty, and my parents often cooked it for special occasions.

Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: La idea es comprensible pero la gramática y el vocabulario son imprecisos. Mejora la naturalidad usando frases como 'not really' y estructura: oración directa + ejemplos específicos y un conector. Evita errores como 'all the year' y usa 'throughout the year' o 'all year round'.

Ví dụ: Not really. I eat mostly the same kinds of food throughout the year, such as rice, potatoes, meat and chicken. However, during certain seasons we might have more fruit or different vegetables depending on what's fresh.

Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: La respuesta tiene sentido pero contiene errores en tiempo verbal y forma. Responde directamente con una oración clara en presente o presente perfecto, y añade una breve razón o example. Mantén la respuesta dentro de 1-3 oraciones y usa conectores si amplías la idea.

Ví dụ: No, my favourite food hasn't changed since I was a child; I have loved carbonara for years. I think I still prefer it because of the creamy sauce and the comforting flavours it brings.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× I'm still being young and my favorite food in this moment every bit is pasta and especially the carbonara because they have it helps a good taste and it's very creamy and it's delicious.

✓ I'm still young and at the moment my favorite food is pasta, especially carbonara, because it has a great taste, it's very creamy, and it's delicious.

The sentence uses incorrect continuous 'being' for a state (use simple present 'am'), incorrect time expression 'in this moment every bit' (use 'at the moment'), and wrong pronoun 'they have it helps' (use 'it has' or 'it helps' is incorrect here). Also punctuation and clause linking need improvement. Use simple present for states: 'I am still young', and say 'my favorite food is...'. Combine adjectives correctly and use 'it has a great taste' or 'it tastes great.'

Present tense issue

× I don't think so because I live in Colombia and with the same food all the year and things like rice, potato, meat, chicken.

✓ I don't think so because I live in Colombia and eat the same foods all year, such as rice, potatoes, meat, and chicken.

The original uses an incorrect prepositional phrase 'with the same food all the year' and missing verb for the clause. Use simple present 'eat' for habitual actions and correct expressions: 'all year' not 'all the year', pluralize 'potato' to 'potatoes', and use 'such as' to introduce examples. Ensure subject-verb presence: 'I live... and eat...'.

Present tense issue

× My favorite food never change. I used to liking the same since I was a child.

✓ My favorite food has never changed. I have liked the same food since I was a child.

The first sentence needs present perfect 'has never changed' for a state continuing up to now. The second sentence mixes 'used to' with '-ing' incorrectly. Use present perfect 'have liked' for a preference that started in the past and continues, or 'I used to like' if it no longer applies. Here, since it continues, 'I have liked the same food since I was a child' is correct.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Good— Fine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
Young— Youthful; Immature; Fledgling; Offspring; Young people
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