Food— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 문장이 자연스럽지 못하고 중복 표현과 문법 오류가 있습니다. 답변은 주제 문장으로 바로 시작하고, 추가 설명은 연결어를 사용해 간결하게 2~3개의 문장으로 이어가세요. 예를 들어 'I almost eat fruits every day' 대신 'I eat fruit almost every day'로 고치고 'it gives me it gives me a lot of happiness'의 중복을 제거하세요. 또한 구체적인 예시(어떤 계절 과일을 좋아하는지, 어떻게 먹는지)를 한두 가지 추가하면 점수가 올라갑니다.

Ví dụ: My favourite food is fruit. I eat fruit almost every day, especially blueberries and seasonal peaches. Eating fruit makes me feel healthy and cheerful, and I usually have it as a snack or with yogurt in the morning.

Gợi ý: 시제와 문법 오류가 있고 의미가 불분명한 표현들이 있습니다. 과거를 말할 때는 과거형을 사용하세요 ('I really loved'). 또한 'chewy'와 맛의 설명을 더 자연스럽게 연결하고 마지막 문장은 의도한 의미(자신이 지금도 좋아하는지, 자녀가 좋아하는지)를 명확히 하세요. 더 구체적인 이유(특별한 추억이나 식감)와 연결어를 사용해 보세요.

Ví dụ: When I was young, I loved eating jajangmyeon. I think I liked it because the sauce was sweet and savory and the noodles had a satisfying chewiness. I still enjoy it now, and my child likes it too, so it’s a dish that brings back fond family memories.

Gợi ý: 문장이 길고 어순 및 문법 오류가 있습니다. 핵심 문장으로 시작하고 이유는 연결어로 간결하게 덧붙이세요. 'they have vitamin for peoples every season' 같은 표현 대신 'they are rich in vitamins'처럼 자연스럽게 표현하세요. 구체적인 예시(봄에는 딸기, 가을에는 사과 등)를 추가하면 좋습니다.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I try to eat seasonal fruits and vegetables because they’re fresher and richer in vitamins. For example, I eat strawberries in spring and apples in autumn, which helps me vary my diet throughout the year.

Gợi ý: 문장 구성과 의미 전달이 혼란스럽습니다. 먼저 직접적인 답(Yes/No)을 말하고 그 이유를 부연하세요. 'Not the same musically' 같은 부적절한 단어 사용을 피하고, 과거와 현재의 취향 변화를 명확히 비교하세요. 연결어(However, Nowadays 등)를 사용해 논리적으로 이어주면 더 좋습니다.

Ví dụ: My favourite food has changed somewhat since childhood. When I was young I had a sweet tooth and loved snacks and ice cream. However, nowadays I prefer bitter and salty flavours, such as coffee and grilled vegetables, probably because my tastes have matured.

× My favorite food is fruits.

✓ My favorite foods are fruit.

'Fruit' as a general category is usually uncountable in English, so use 'fruit' (uncountable) or 'fruits' with plural only when referring to different kinds. Also 'favorite food' (singular) conflicts with plural 'fruits'. Change to 'My favorite foods are fruit' or 'My favorite food is fruit' for correctness.

× I almost eat fruits every day like blueberries or seasonal foods, and it gives me it gives me a lot of happiness.

✓ I almost eat fruit every day, like blueberries or other seasonal foods, and it gives me a lot of happiness.

Use 'fruit' as uncountable for general daily consumption. Remove the duplicated phrase 'it gives me'. Keep singular verb 'gives' agreeing with the singular subject 'it' (referring to eating fruit), or better use 'they give me happiness' if referring to 'foods'. Also add 'other' to clarify 'seasonal foods'.

× I really love to eat jajangmyeon when I was young.

✓ I really loved eating jajangmyeon when I was young.

The sentence mixes present tense 'love' with past time 'when I was young'. Use past tense 'loved' and change verb pattern to 'loved eating' for natural phrasing.

× I don't know the reason but the taste is very sweet and salty and very chewy.

✓ I don't know the reason, but the taste was sweet, salty, and quite chewy.

Because this refers to childhood taste, keep past tense 'was'. Use commas to separate adjectives and avoid repeating 'very'—use 'quite' for variety and naturalness.

× That's why I love dusting milk and even my kid love to eat jajangmyeon now.

✓ That's why I love mixing it with milk, and even my child loves to eat jajangmyeon now.

'Kid' is informal; 'child' is clearer. 'Love' must agree with 'my child' so use 'loves'. 'Dusting milk' is ungrammatical—likely meant 'mixing it with milk' or 'adding milk'.

× Yes, as time goes by I get older I try to eat seasonal fruit and vegetables because they are healthy and they have vitamin for peoples every season.

✓ Yes. As I get older, I try to eat seasonal fruits and vegetables because they are healthy and contain vitamins for people in every season.

Add punctuation and restructure: 'As I get older' fits present tense. Use plural 'fruits and vegetables'. Use verb 'contain' for vitamins. 'Peoples' is incorrect—use 'people'. Clarify 'in every season'.

× Not the same musically when I was young as a child I have a sweet tooth but now I don't like snacks and ice cream either.

✓ It wasn't the same when I was young; as a child I had a sweet tooth, but now I don't like snacks or ice cream.

Original is ungrammatical and mixes tenses. Use past tense 'wasn't' and 'had' for childhood. Replace 'either' with 'or' in negative coordination. Remove 'musically' which seems incorrect here.

× I don't know why but I prefer the bitter and salty things now.

✓ I don't know why, but I prefer bitter and salty foods now.

Use 'foods' rather than 'things' for clarity. Keep present tense 'prefer' for current habit. Add comma after introductory clause for readability.