Part 1
Giám khảo
What is your favourite food?
Thí sinh
My favorite food is the fruit. There are a lot of fruits I like such as bananas, apples and some other fruits which is full of nutrition and can keep me healthy, so I like eating fruit.
Giám khảo
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
Thí sinh
Candice, when I was a child I didn't like to eat fruit. For example, although apples was full of nutrition, but I thought it is not tasty, so I don't didn't willing to eat it. But I really liked eating candies.
Giám khảo
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
Thí sinh
Yes I do, when I was a child I preferred to eating candies which can make me feel the sweet after a long study. But when I grow up I'd like to eating fruits which is healthy.
Giám khảo
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course. When I grow up, I don't like eating candies because which is not good for my teeth. I prefer to eat some fruit such as apples and bananas, which can make me healthy.
What is your favourite food?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 在回答中注意主谓一致、时态和词形变化,避免重复表达,并用连词使句子更连贯。可以用一到两句概括喜好,然后用具体原因和举例支持观点,句子控制在不超过5句。
Ví dụ: My favourite food is fruit because it is nutritious and helps me stay healthy. For example, I often eat apples and bananas; apples are full of fiber, while bananas give me quick energy. Therefore I usually choose fruit as a snack instead of unhealthy options.
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 避免不必要的称呼(如人名),注意语法(时态和否定)、主谓一致和词序。可先给出主题句,再用一两句具体说明原因和举例。使用连接词如Although或However以增强逻辑性。
Ví dụ: When I was young, I didn’t like fruit and preferred sweets. Although I knew apples were healthy, I thought they tasted bland, so I often chose candy because it was much sweeter and more appealing to me then.
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 问题问的是不同季节是否吃不同食物,回答偏题且时态混乱。应直接回答季节性饮食变化,并给出具体例子与原因,使用连词保持连贯。注意动词形式和时态一致。
Ví dụ: Yes, my diet changes with the seasons. In winter I tend to eat warmer, heavier foods like soups and stews, while in summer I eat more fresh fruits and salads because they are refreshing and seasonal fruits are available.
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 总体回答明确但应修正语法错误并精简表达。用一两句说明变化并给出原因,避免不自然的从句(如“which is not good”应指代明确)。
Ví dụ: Yes, my favourite food has changed. As a child I loved candy, but now I prefer fruits like apples and bananas because they are healthier and better for my teeth and overall well‑being.
× My favorite food is the fruit.
✓ My favorite food is fruit.
句子中不需要定冠词“the”。在表达喜欢的食物种类时,通常使用不可数名词或复数形式而不加“the”。改为“My favorite food is fruit.”更自然。建议:表示一般概念时不使用定冠词。
× There are a lot of fruits I like such as bananas, apples and some other fruits which is full of nutrition and can keep me healthy, so I like eating fruit.
✓ There are a lot of fruits I like, such as bananas and apples, and some other fruits which are full of nutrients and can keep me healthy, so I like eating fruit.
原句中“which is full of nutrition”主语是复数“some other fruits”,所以谓语应为复数“are”。另外“nutrition”常用复数搭配“nutrients”。建议:复数主语用复数动词,注意可数/不可数搭配。
× What kind of food did you like when you were young?
✓ What kind of food did you like when you were young?
该句为考官提问,无需更改。时态正确:询问过去的喜好使用过去式“did...like”。(此条仅确认无误,未做修改)
× Candice, when I was a child I didn't like to eat fruit.
✓ When I was a child, I didn't like to eat fruit.
句首出现人名“Candice,”显得多余且不符合上下文,可能是误加的呼语。移除后句子更自然。建议:如果不是在直接称呼对方,就不要随意加入人名或呼语。
× For example, although apples was full of nutrition, but I thought it is not tasty, so I don't didn't willing to eat it.
✓ For example, although apples were full of nutrients, I thought they were not tasty, so I wasn't willing to eat them.
存在多处错误:复数主语“apples”应搭配复数动词“were”;“nutrition”改为“nutrients”;不能同时使用“although”与“but”二者二选一,保留“although”即可;时态需保持过去,用“thought they were not tasty”;否定和意愿表达应为“wasn't willing to”。代词要一致,复数用“they/them”。建议:注意主谓一致、时态一致、代词一致以及不重复使用连词和否定结构。
× But I really liked eating candies.
✓ But I really liked eating candy.
“candies”可用但在此处更自然用不可数名词“candy”表示“糖果”这一类。时态过去式“liked”正确。建议:对于总称或类别,使用不可数形式更常见。
× Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
✓ Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
该考官提问无误,使用一般现在时询问习惯正确。(此条仅确认无误)
× Yes I do, when I was a child I preferred to eating candies which can make me feel the sweet after a long study.
✓ Yes I do. When I was a child I preferred eating candy, which could make me feel sweet after a long study.
“prefer to eating”结构不正确,应为“prefer doing”或“prefer to do”;将“preferred to eating”改为“preferred eating”。“candies”改为不可数“candy”更自然。“can”因描述过去习惯应改为过去“could”。“feel the sweet”应为“feel sweet”。建议:注意动词搭配习惯(prefer 后接 -ing 或 to + 动词原形),以及时态一致和固定表达。
× But when I grow up I'd like to eating fruits which is healthy.
✓ But when I grew up I liked to eat fruit, which is healthy.
原句时态混用、不一致:“when I grow up”应改为过去“when I grew up”或“as I grew up”;“I'd like to eating”结构错误,应为“liked to eat”或“would like to eat”;“fruits which is healthy”中“fruits”与“is”不一致且“healthy”更适用于不可数“fruit”。建议:保持时态一致,使用正确动词搭配(like to do / like doing),主谓一致时名词与动词形式匹配。
× Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
✓ Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
考官提问句无误,使用现在完成时询问从过去到现在的变化正确。(此条仅确认无误)
× Yes, of course. When I grow up, I don't like eating candies because which is not good for my teeth.
✓ Yes, of course. When I grew up, I didn't like eating candy because it was not good for my teeth.
时态应为过去“grew up/didn't like”;“don't like”要改为过去式“didn't like”。“because which is not good for my teeth”中不能用“which”引导原因状语,改为“because it was not good for my teeth”。“candies”改为不可数“candy”。建议:时态一致并使用正确的连接词引出原因,代词指代清晰。
× I prefer to eat some fruit such as apples and bananas, which can make me healthy.
✓ I prefer to eat fruits such as apples and bananas, which can keep me healthy.
“prefer to eat some fruit”在此语境可改为“prefer to eat fruits”更自然;“which can make me healthy”搭配不当,常用“keep me healthy”。保持主谓一致并用更自然表达。建议:注意可数与不可数用法,选择更常用的动词搭配如“keep healthy”。