Food— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cevap daha doğal ve akıcı olmalı. Önce net bir konu cümlesi söyleyin (favori yemeğinizin adı), ardından kısa bir açıklama verin: yemeğin ne olduğu, kökeni ve neden sevdiğiniz. Dil bilgisi hatalarını düzeltin (örneğin ‘month’ kelimesi muhtemelen yanlış; doğru adı kullanın, fiil çekimlerini ve artikelleri düzeltin). Cümle sayısını 3–4'te tutun ve gereksiz tekrarları çıkarın.

Ví dụ: My favourite food is mantı, a traditional Turkish dumpling that my mother makes every week. I love it because the combination of spiced meat and yogurt is comforting, and it reminds me of family meals at home.

Gợi ý: Cümle yapısı ve zaman kullanımı karışık. Geçmişte neyi sevdiğinizi açık bir konu cümlesiyle belirtin, sonra nedenini veya bir örnekle destekleyin. Geçmiş zaman formlarını doğru kullanın ve gereksiz kelimeleri kaldırın. Bağlaçlar kullanarak cümlenizi bağlayın (for example, because, so).

Ví dụ: When I was young, my favourite food was the omelette my mother made every morning because it was warm and tasty. For example, she always added fresh tomatoes and herbs, which made it special.

Gợi ý: Cevap çok dağınık ve zaman ifadeleri karışık. Soruyu yılın farklı zamanlarında yemek alışkanlıklarıyla ilgili olarak cevaplayın (seasons, holidays). Eğer bir deneyimi anlatıyorsanız, olayları kronolojik ve net bağlaçlarla bağlayın (first, then, now). Tekil/çoğul ve fiil çekimlerini düzeltin.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. For example, in winter I prefer hearty stews, while in summer I usually eat lighter salads. When I was at college, a Japanese friend introduced me to sushi; I tried it at first and now I love it.

Gợi ý: Cümlede zaman uyumsuzluğu ve anlatım bozukluğu var. Net bir konu cümlesiyle başlayın (evet veya hayır), sonra geçmiş alışkanlığınızı ve şimdi ne değiştiğini açıklayın. Neden değiştiğini kısa bir nedenle destekleyin. Kısa, doğru gramerli cümleler kurun.

Ví dụ: Yes, it has changed. When I was a child I ate a lot of fries, but as I grew older I preferred healthier and more varied dishes because I got bored of fast food.

× My favorite food is month. Month is traditional food in Turkey my mother make every week.

✓ My favorite food is manti. Manti is a traditional food in Turkey that my mother makes every week.

The student used 'month' which is likely a misspelling of 'manti' (a Turkish dish) — this is lexical, but grammar issues include missing articles and relative clause markers and subject-verb agreement. Add the indefinite article 'a' with 'traditional food', insert the relative pronoun 'that' to connect clauses, and change 'make' to 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'my mother'. Also use correct noun spelling. Suggestions: use 'a traditional food', add 'that' before 'my mother', and use third-person singular verb form 'makes'.

× When I was young, first my favorite food still my mother cooking for me every single breakfast.

✓ When I was young, my favorite food was whatever my mother cooked for me for every single breakfast.

The sentence has tense and number problems: 'first' is misplaced, 'still' is incorrect, and verb forms are wrong. Use past tense 'was' to match 'When I was young', change 'my mother cooking' to past 'my mother cooked', and use 'for every single breakfast' for correct prepositional phrase. Suggest rewriting clearly: 'my favorite food was whatever my mother cooked for me for every single breakfast.'

× Yes, in college there is a Japanese girl and made made for US sushi.

✓ Yes, in college there was a Japanese girl who made sushi for us.

Use past tense 'was' to describe college time. Add the relative pronoun 'who' to introduce the clause. Correct 'made made' to single 'made'. Use lowercase 'us' and correct preposition order 'made sushi for us'. Suggestions: use 'there was', include 'who', and avoid repeating verbs.

× Every year when I was first tried taste different but now I'm getting addicted.

✓ The first time I tried it, the taste was different, but now I'm getting addicted.

Mixes past and present awkwardly. Use past simple 'tried' with 'the first time' to indicate initial experience. 'Taste different' needs linking verb 'was'. Keep present progressive 'I'm getting addicted' to describe current state. Suggest splitting into two clauses and using 'it' to refer to the food.

× I'm getting mature and when I was young I'm eating lots of fries. That's make to get bored.

✓ I've become more mature, and when I was young I used to eat lots of fries. That used to make me bored.

Tense inconsistency: 'I'm getting mature' is awkward; use present perfect 'I've become more mature' for change. 'When I was young I'm eating' mixes past and present — use 'used to eat' for habitual past. 'That's make to get bored' is ungrammatical: use 'That used to make me bored' with correct past habit marker and object pronoun. Suggestions: use 'used to' for past habits, correct verb forms, and include the object 'me'.