Food— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

What is your favourite food?

Thí sinh

My favorite food is rice because it can match various food and it is can make me feel less hungry.

Giám khảo

What kind of food did you like when you were young?

Thí sinh

When I was a child, uh, I like. Junk food bust because this is full of variety, tastes and it.

Giám khảo

Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?

Thí sinh

Yes, my flavors will change following my ages because when I was young in Junior School or Senior High School, I like eat spicy or.

Giám khảo

Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, my favorite food has changed as I got older. I want to eat more healthier and milder food to help me digest.

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Tổng: 5.5Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 5.5Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 5.5

Part 1

What is your favourite food?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更自然准确,避免语法错误和冗余。开头直接给出主题句,然后补充具体原因并用连接词衔接。可以把“it can match various food”改为更地道的表达,并把“it is can make me feel less hungry”改为正确语法并具体说明场景。注意句子不要超过5句。

Ví dụ: My favourite food is rice because it goes well with many dishes. For example, I often eat it with vegetables and meat, which makes meals satisfying. Also, rice keeps me full for longer, so I don’t snack between meals.

What kind of food did you like when you were young?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 回答需要更连贯并修正语法和词汇错误。避免口头语“uh”并完成句子结构。先给出主题句,然后用连接词列举原因或举例说明,如种类、味道或频率。控制在最多5句内。

Ví dụ: When I was young, I liked junk food because it came in many flavors and looked attractive. For example, I often ate chips and sweets after school, which felt exciting at the time. However, I didn’t think much about health then.

Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 回答应直接回应季节性饮食变化的问题。目前回答内容混淆“年龄”和“季节”。先说明是否随季节改变,再给出具体例子并用连接词衔接。修正时态和动词形式,提供具体季节性食物或习惯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do eat different foods at different times of the year. For example, in winter I prefer hot and hearty soups, while in summer I eat more salads and fruits to stay cool. These changes help me feel comfortable in different weather.

Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答整体清晰但需改进语法和用词以更自然准确。把“more healthier”改为“healthier”,并补充具体例子说明为何和如何改变。可以用连接词解释原因和结果。保持不超过5句。

Ví dụ: Yes, my favourite food has changed as I grew older. I now prefer healthier, milder foods because they are easier to digest and make me feel better. For example, I eat more steamed vegetables and lean proteins instead of fried snacks.

Ngữ pháp

13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× My favorite food is rice because it can match various food and it is can make me feel less hungry.

✓ My favorite food is rice because it can go with various foods and it can make me feel less hungry.

句中“match various food”用词不当。英语中常用“go with”或“match with”来表示“搭配”,且“food”应为复数“foods”以表示多种食物;另外有语法冗余“it is can”,应改为“it can”。建议:使用固定搭配“go with/match”,注意可数名词复数形式,去掉多余助动词。

5: Past tense issue

× When I was a child, uh, I like. Junk food bust because this is full of variety, tastes and it.

✓ When I was a child, I liked junk food because it was full of variety and tastes.

句子描述过去的情况,应使用过去时“liked/was”。原句有断裂且含拼写错误“bust”,应为“because”。去掉多余的“it”。建议:叙述过去事件时统一用过去时,并注意拼写和句子连贯。

6: Present tense issue

× Yes, my flavors will change following my ages because when I was young in Junior School or Senior High School, I like eat spicy or.

✓ Yes, my tastes have changed as I've gotten older because when I was in junior school or senior high school, I liked to eat spicy food.

原句混用了将来时和现在/过去时并且时态不一致。“will change following my ages”不自然,应表达已发生的变化用现在完成时“have changed”或表持续变化。描述过去应使用过去时“liked”。“I like eat”语法错误,应为“liked to eat”或“liked eating”,并补全“spicy food”。建议:保持时态一致,使用正确动词形式(like eating / liked to eat),并补全缺失名词。

6: Present tense issue

× Yes, my favorite food has changed as I got older. I want to eat more healthier and milder food to help me digest.

✓ Yes, my favorite food has changed as I have got older. I want to eat healthier and milder food to help my digestion.

第一句中描述从过去到现在的变化,应使用现在完成时“have got/have gotten”。第二句中“more healthier”是程度副词和比较级重复(错误用法),应为“healthier”而非“more healthier”;“help me digest”常用名词形式“help my digestion”或不定式“help me digest food”。建议:使用现在完成时表达随年龄变化,避免比较级重复,选择合适的句型(help + object 或 help + to + 动词)。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Full— Filled; Crowded with; Occupied; Replete; Comprehensive
High— Tall; High-ranking; Inflated; Strong; Favorable
Hungry— Ravenous; Eager
Various— Diverse
Young— Youthful; Immature; Fledgling; Offspring; Young people
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