Food— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cevabınızı daha doğal ve akıcı hale getirmek için gereksiz tekrarları azaltın, cümleleri daha düzgün yapın ve kısa bir konu cümlesi ile ardından 1–2 destekleyici detay verin. Bağlaçlar (for example, sometimes, mostly) kullanarak akışı güçlendirin. Ayrıca dilbilgisi hatalarını düzeltin (ör. "I don't have just one favourite food", "it can be").

Ví dụ: I don't have just one favourite food; I enjoy several dishes. For example, I sometimes like French fries or a burger, and I also enjoy sushi. Mostly I prefer hot food that is mildly seasoned, although occasionally I like it spicier.

Gợi ý: Cevabınızı doğrudan ve net bir konu cümlesiyle verin, ardından geçmiş alışkanlıklar hakkında kısa bir açıklama ve örnek ekleyin. Şu an ve geçmiş arasındaki benzerlikleri/ farkları karşılaştırmak için bağlaçlar kullanın. Ayrıca dilbilgisi ve kelime seçimine dikkat edin (ör. "I was young" yerine "when I was younger").

Ví dụ: When I was younger I liked many of the same foods I enjoy now. For instance, I often ate burgers and fries, and I also liked sushi occasionally, so my tastes haven't changed much.

Gợi ý: Cümlenizi daha doğal ve doğru ifade edin; gereksiz tekrarları çıkarın ve spesifik örnekler verin. Mevsimlere göre hangi yiyeceklerin değiştiğini belirtin ve bağlaçlarla (for example, because, so) mantıklı bir akış oluşturun. Dilbilgisi hatalarını düzeltin (ör. "like everyone does", "we don't eat the same food all year").

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. For example, in summer I prefer lighter foods like salads and cold noodles, while in winter I eat more soups and stews because they are warming.

Gợi ý: Daha doğal bir yapı kullanın: kısa bir konu cümlesi ile başlayıp neden değiştiğini açıklayın ve bir veya iki örnek ekleyin. Gereksiz tekrarları kaldırın ve dilbilgisi hatalarını düzeltin (ör. "Our tastes have changed", "I have changed"). Bağlaçlarla neden-sonuç ilişkisi kurun.

Ví dụ: Yes, my favourite foods have changed as I've grown older. For instance, I used to prefer very sweet snacks as a child, but now I enjoy more savoury and spicy dishes because my tastes have developed.

× It depends because I don't have a just one favorite food and I have a lot of favorite food.

✓ It depends because I don't have just one favorite food and I have a lot of favorite foods.

The definite/indefinite article and plural form are incorrect: 'a just one' is wrong order and unnecessary 'a' before 'just one'. 'Favorite food' should be plural 'favorite foods' when referring to many. Suggestion: remove 'a' and change to 'just one', make 'food' plural when indicating multiple items.

× So it's can be sometimes a French fries, obviously a burger, a sushi, a lot of them.

✓ So it can sometimes be french fries, obviously a burger, sushi, and many others.

Incorrect word order 'it's can be' should be 'it can be'. Use of articles: 'a French fries' is wrong because 'fries' is plural; 'a sushi' is wrong because 'sushi' is uncountable or a mass noun. Also 'a lot of them' is informal; 'many others' is clearer. Suggestion: fix word order and use correct article or none for uncountable/plural nouns.

× But mostly I choose the thing with hot, not too spicy but sometimes spicy and with seasoning.

✓ But mostly I choose things that are hot, not too spicy but sometimes spicy, and well seasoned.

Awkward phrasing 'the thing with hot' is incorrect; use plural 'things' and a relative clause 'that are hot'. 'With seasoning' is better as 'well seasoned'. Suggestion: use natural adjective phrases and correct noun forms.

× I'm still a young person so the foods would be the same.

✓ I'm still young, so the foods are the same.

Mixing present 'I'm' with conditional 'would be' is inconsistent. Use present tense 'are' to agree with 'I'm still young'. Also 'a young person' is verbose; 'young' is sufficient. Suggestion: use consistent present tense.

× Of course I do, like every people do.

✓ Of course I do, like every person does.

'People' is plural and cannot follow 'every' which requires a singular noun 'person'. Also verb should be 'does' to agree with singular subject. Suggestion: use 'every person does' or 'like most people do'.

× We are not eating just one kind of food in the air.

✓ We do not eat just one kind of food all year round.

The phrase 'in the air' is incorrect for meaning 'throughout the year'. Use 'all year round' or 'throughout the year'. Also present simple 'do not eat' is more natural than 'are not eating' for habitual actions. Suggestion: use correct time expression and tense for habits.

× But it depends on the weather because every food has a weather to eat.

✓ But it depends on the weather because certain foods are better in certain seasons.

Awkward literal translation 'every food has a weather to eat' is incorrect in English. Use 'certain foods are better in certain seasons' to express suitability. Suggestion: replace literal phrase with natural English expression.

× Of course it changed. We've grown up.

✓ Of course it has changed. We've grown up.

Use of simple past 'it changed' is acceptable, but present perfect 'has changed' better links past change to the present. 'We've grown up' correctly uses present perfect. Suggestion: use present perfect for changes that relate to now.

× We change ideas, our flavor in our mouth.

✓ Our tastes and preferences have changed.

Unnatural literal phrasing 'We change ideas, our flavor in our mouth' is unclear and ungrammatical. 'Tastes and preferences' is the natural collocation. Use present perfect 'have changed' to show change over time. Suggestion: use standard expressions for taste and preference.

× It's change.

✓ It has changed.

'It's change' is ungrammatical: 'change' is a noun or base verb; to indicate that something changed use 'It has changed' or 'It changed'. Suggestion: use correct auxiliary for tense ('has' + past participle) or simple past.

× Maybe a lot of people are done, but mine has changed.

✓ Maybe many people haven't changed, but mine has.

Original 'are done' is incorrect meaning; likely intended 'are the same' or 'haven't changed'. 'A lot of people are done' is wrong; use 'many people haven't changed'. Keep 'mine has' (present perfect) to show personal change. Suggestion: choose appropriate verb and tense to express contrast.