Food— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Reduce repetition and small grammar errors, make one clear topic sentence and add a brief specific example. Use linking words to organise points and correct verb/number agreement (e.g., "it contains"). Aim for 2–3 sentences only.

Ví dụ: My favourite food is soup because it is light and easy on the stomach. For example, I often make a vegetable broth with carrots, spinach and chicken, which I can prepare in under 20 minutes and which contains lots of vitamins.

Gợi ý: Avoid filler words and repetition, correct past tense usage and phrasing ("when I was young"). Begin with a clear topic sentence, then add a concise specific detail and linkers if needed.

Ví dụ: When I was young, I loved fast food, especially french fries. I often ate them with ketchup and mayonnaise, and they were my favourite treat after school.

Gợi ý: Good structure and specific details. Improve fluency by removing fillers ("uh"), use plural/singular correctly ("dishes") and choose more natural collocations ("hot, warming meals" -> "warm, hearty meals"). Keep it concise.

Ví dụ: Yes. In summer I prefer cold, refreshing dishes like salads and chilled soups, while in winter I choose warm, hearty meals such as noodle soup because they are comforting and filling.

Gợi ý: Clarify phrases and correct vocabulary errors ("didn't care for myself" -> "didn't pay attention to my diet"; "task force" is incorrect). Use one clear contrast sentence and give a concrete example of changes you made.

Ví dụ: When I was a child I ate a lot of fast food and didn't pay much attention to my diet. However, now I avoid too much sugar and sugary drinks and try to eat more home-cooked meals and vegetables.

× Well, particularly in my case my favorite food is soup because because it is a light meal and stomach friendly meal and you can prepare it in a short time and moreover it contain a lot of vitamins.

✓ Well, particularly in my case, my favorite food is soup because it is a light and stomach-friendly meal, you can prepare it in a short time, and moreover it contains a lot of vitamins.

Pronoun/subject-verb agreement and word form: 'contain' should be 'contains' to agree with singular subject 'it'. Also 'stomach friendly meal' should be hyphenated as 'stomach-friendly meal' (adjective form). Remove the duplicated 'because'. Add commas for clarity. Suggestion: ensure verb agrees with the subject (add -s for third-person singular) and use hyphenation for compound adjectives before a noun. ID:12,27,13

× Well, when I was a young, I loved fast foods especially, especially for potatoes.

✓ Well, when I was young, I loved fast food, especially french fries.

Article and noun form: 'a young' is incorrect; use 'young' without an article for the age phrase 'when I was young'. 'Fast foods' is better as uncountable 'fast food' in this context. 'Potatoes' as a general preferred item is better expressed as 'french fries' or 'fried potatoes' for clarity. Suggestion: omit the article with 'young' and use the uncountable form 'fast food' when talking generally. ID:22,1

× You know, I always mixed up potatoes with ketchup and mayonnaise.

✓ You know, I always mixed potatoes with ketchup and mayonnaise.

Incorrect phrasal usage: 'mixed up' can mean 'confused'; here the intended meaning is combining foods, so use 'mixed' not 'mixed up'. Suggestion: choose the correct verb to convey combining rather than confusing. ID:26

× So it's it was my favorite one.

✓ So it was my favorite.

Redundancy and tense clarity: 'it's it was' contains conflicting forms; since speaking about the past preference, use past 'it was'. Remove 'one' which is unnecessary. Suggestion: keep tense consistent and avoid redundant words. ID:26

× In summer I prefer cold or refreshing dish like salads and chilled soups.

✓ In summer I prefer cold or refreshing dishes like salads and chilled soups.

Number agreement: 'dish' should be plural 'dishes' to match 'salads and chilled soups'. Also 'cold or refreshing' modifies plural noun. Suggestion: match singular/plural of nouns with examples and keep parallel structure. ID:1,13

× But in winter I choose hot warming meals such as uh noodle soups because they are more comforting and filling.

✓ But in winter I choose hot, warming meals such as noodle soups because they are more comforting and filling.

Word choice and punctuation: remove filler 'uh' and add comma between 'hot' and 'warming'. 'Noodle soups' is fine; ensure adjectives are separated by comma for clarity. Suggestion: avoid fillers and punctuate adjective pairs. ID:12,20

× Well, when I was a child I loved fast foods and I didn't care for myself.

✓ Well, when I was a child I loved fast food and I didn't take care of myself.

Vocabulary and collocation: 'care for myself' can mean 'like myself' or 'provide care'; the intended meaning 'didn't take care of myself' (i.e., didn't look after health) is clearer. Also use uncountable 'fast food'. Suggestion: use common collocations like 'take care of myself' to express self-care. ID:5,14

× However, right now I try to protect myself from task force, especially sugars and some drinks.

✓ However, right now I try to protect myself from junk food, especially sugary foods and certain drinks.

Word choice and collocation: 'task force' is incorrect; likely meant 'fast food' or 'junk food'. 'Sugars' is better as 'sugary foods' and 'some drinks' clarified as 'certain drinks'. Suggestion: choose correct lexical items and use adjectives to describe food types. ID:13,14