Part 1
Giám khảo
What is your favourite food?
Thí sinh
My favorite food may be the noodles because noodle is very common in the northern of China and I come from Beijing, so I really like this kind of food. I eat it almost umm 3 * a week.
Giám khảo
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
Thí sinh
The so-called junk food like hamburgers, fried chickens and the BBQ I really enjoyed when I was in the junior and Senior High School. I really like to eat it with my friends.
Giám khảo
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
Thí sinh
Yeah, of course, like in the summer I may be tend to eat some light food, for example the vegetable salad or some rice and chickens, but.
Giám khảo
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yeah, that happens very often because, you know, children are very changeable. Uh, sometimes I like the Western food like hamburgers and chick fried chickens, and sometimes I miss the Chinese food.
What is your favourite food?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 在回答中要更自然并直接陈述观点,减少犹豫词(如 "may", "umm"),把句子简化并用连贯词连接细节。同时注意名词单复数和介词用法(例如 "noodle" -> "noodles", "in the northern of China" -> "in northern China")。可以给出具体的面条类型或吃法以增加内容的丰富性。
Ví dụ: My favourite food is noodles because I grew up in Beijing where noodles are a staple. I usually eat hand-pulled noodles or beef noodle soup about three times a week, especially when I want something warm and comforting.
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
Điểm: 64.0Gợi ý: 避免使用模糊或重复表达(比如 "the so-called"、重复的动词),注意名词单复数和大小写("fried chickens" 应为 "fried chicken")。可以更具体描述频率、场景或感受,并用连接词让句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: When I was young I enjoyed typical fast food such as hamburgers, fried chicken and barbecue. I often ate these with my friends after school because it was convenient and social.
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 回答应更完整,避免未完成的句子,减少口语犹豫。注意语法:不要说 "may be tend to",应说 "tend to";名词复数和搭配也要调整("chickens" -> "chicken")。可用对比连接词(e.g. "in summer... while in winter...")提供季节性差异的具体例子。
Ví dụ: Yes. In summer I tend to eat lighter foods like salads, cold noodles or steamed chicken, while in winter I prefer hot, hearty dishes such as soups and stews to keep warm.
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答要更直接并避免笼统或重复(如 "that happens very often")。注意词汇和语法错误("chick fried chickens" -> likely "fried chicken"),并给出具体对比说明为什么口味改变,例如健康、方便或文化影响等。使用连接词(e.g. "however", "because")使逻辑更清晰。
Ví dụ: Yes, it has changed. As a child I preferred Western fast food like hamburgers and fried chicken, but now I appreciate traditional Chinese dishes more because I value healthier, home-cooked meals.
× My favorite food may be the noodles because noodle is very common in the northern of China and I come from Beijing, so I really like this kind of food.
✓ My favorite food may be noodles because noodles are very common in the north of China and I come from Beijing, so I really like this kind of food.
错误类型:名词单复数。原句中“noodle”应使用复数“noodles”;并且“the northern of China”表述不自然,应为“the north of China”或直接“in northern China”。此外主语“noodles”需用复数动词“are”。建议:可将可数名词按语境选单数或复数,谈一般情况多用复数;地理位置用“north of China”或“northern China”。
× I eat it almost umm 3 * a week.
✓ I eat it almost three times a week.
错误类型:动词现在时搭配频率表达及数量表达。原句中“3 * a week”表达不规范,应写成“three times a week”来表示频率。建议:使用频率短语时用词语规范(times, a week等),数字用单词或阿拉伯数字均可,但口语常说“three times a week”。
× What kind of food did you like when you were young? / The so-called junk food like hamburgers, fried chickens and the BBQ I really enjoyed when I was in the junior and Senior High School.
✓ When I was young, I liked junk food such as hamburgers, fried chicken and barbecue. I really enjoyed it when I was in junior and senior high school.
错误类型:过去时使用与名词单复数。原句时态和名词形式混乱:“did you like”询问正确,但回答中应使用过去式“liked”。“fried chickens”不应使用复数,通常说“fried chicken”泛指这种食物;“the BBQ”改为“barbecue”或“barbecue food”。此外“junior and Senior High School”大小写/冠词不当,应写“junior and senior high school”。建议:叙述过去习惯用过去式,食物类名词用单数或不可数形式表达类别。
× I really like to eat it with my friends.
✓ I really liked eating it with my friends.
错误类型:动词形式(现在分词/不定式)与过去时态不一致。因为在描述过去的情况,动词应为过去式“liked”,并且常用“eat”或“eating”都可以,但“liked eating”更自然。建议:描述过去习惯用过去时,注意动词搭配。
× Yeah, of course, like in the summer I may be tend to eat some light food, for example the vegetable salad or some rice and chickens, but.
✓ Yeah, of course. In the summer I tend to eat lighter food, for example vegetable salad or some rice and chicken.
错误类型:情态动词与动词短语使用错误。原句中“may be tend to”是错误冗余,表示一种常态习惯应使用“tend to”;“light food”比较级可用“lighter food”;“the vegetable salad”中定冠词多余且“chickens”应为“chicken”。句尾的“but.” 不完整,应删除或补全。建议:不要把多个情态或辅助结构叠加,表示倾向用“tend to”,食物类名词用不可数或复数视语境。
× for example the vegetable salad or some rice and chickens, but.
✓ for example vegetable salad or some rice and chicken.
错误类型:名词形式与冠词使用。原句中“the vegetable salad”不需要定冠词,且“chickens”应为不可数或复数不常用此处,改为“chicken”。句尾“but.” 不完整。建议:常用食品类别时省略定冠词,选择不可数名词形式表达泛指。
× Has your favourite food changed since you were a child? / Yeah, that happens very often because, you know, children are very changeable.
✓ Yes, that has happened quite often because, you know, children's tastes change a lot.
错误类型:时态与表达习惯。回答中用一般现在“that happens very often”在谈从小到现在的变化时不够具体,使用现在完成时“has happened”更合适;“children are very changeable”表述不够地道,可改为“children's tastes change a lot”。建议:谈从过去持续到现在的变化使用现在完成时,描述“易变”用更自然的名词短语。
× Uh, sometimes I like the Western food like hamburgers and chick fried chickens, and sometimes I miss the Chinese food.
✓ Sometimes I liked Western food like hamburgers and fried chicken, and sometimes I missed Chinese food.
错误类型:时态与名词形式。句子在上下文中是在谈过去(小时候)或习惯,应统一使用过去时“liked/missed”。“chick fried chickens”是错误拼写与复数,应为“fried chicken”。建议:确保时态一致,注意单词拼写与不可数名词用法。