Food— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make your response clearer and more natural by using a direct topic sentence, correcting grammar, and avoiding redundant or unclear phrases. Limit to 2–3 concise sentences, use linking words if adding details, and include a brief reason and an example of what you like in the burger.

Ví dụ: My favourite food is a burger because I love the soft buns and the juicy, well-seasoned patty. I also enjoy the creamy mayonnaise and crisp lettuce, which add texture and balance to the flavour.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words, and give specific examples. Use one linking phrase to add detail and keep it within 2–3 sentences. Correct vocabulary (gummy bears, soda) and avoid repeating the same idea.

Ví dụ: When I was young, I loved sweet foods. For example, I often ate chocolate, gummy bears and drank soda because I enjoyed the sugary taste.

Gợi ý: Speak more fluently and concisely: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific example for summer and one for winter using linking words like 'for example' or 'in winter'. Avoid hesitations and incorrect words (e.g. 'youth').

Ví dụ: Yes, I eat different foods at different times of the year. For example, in summer I often have salads and cold drinks, while in winter I prefer hot soups and stews to stay warm.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear, grammatical comparison between past and present tastes. Use one linking word (e.g. 'but' or 'now') to contrast, give specific examples of foods you liked before and now, and avoid invented phrases (e.g. 'taste bird'). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, my favourite foods have changed. When I was a child I preferred sweet treats like candy and chocolate, but now I enjoy sour and spicy dishes such as spicy noodles and pickled vegetables.

× My favorite food will be definitely with burger because the buns and the flavors mixture in that Patty bone is obviously it's so flavorful and so tasty.

✓ My favorite food is definitely a burger because the buns and the mixture of flavors in the patty are so flavorful and tasty.

The original used 'will be' incorrectly for a general present preference; use present simple 'is'. There are also subject-verb agreement issues ('mixture ... is' -> 'mixture of flavors ... are' because plural noun 'flavors' requires 'are' when referring to them) and awkward word order. Suggestion: use present simple for habits/preferences and reorder to 'the mixture of flavors in the patty are'.

× And I also liked Mayo's inside my burger very much.

✓ I also like mayonnaise in my burger very much.

The speaker used past tense 'liked' but is describing a current preference; use present simple 'like'. 'Mayo's' is incorrect possessive and informal; use the noun 'mayonnaise'. Suggestion: use 'I also like mayonnaise in my burger very much.'

× As we all know, when we were young, we like lots of sweets in it.

✓ As we all know, when we were young, we liked lots of sweets.

The time reference 'when we were young' requires past tense 'liked' rather than present 'like'. Remove the unnecessary 'in it'. Suggestion: match past time clause with past tense verb.

× So I used to like a lot of sweets.

✓ So I used to like a lot of sweets.

Sentence is already correct. 'Used to' correctly expresses past habitual action. No change needed.

× Uh, any kind of food or any kind of fruits that contain sweet in taste, like chocolates, umm, gummy beers and all, like cokes.

✓ Any kind of food or fruit that tastes sweet, like chocolate, gummy bears, and cola.

Use 'fruit' (uncountable or plural) instead of 'fruits' in this context, and 'tastes sweet' is the natural phrasing. Correct spelling: 'gummy bears' not 'gummy beers'; 'chocolate' and 'cola' are more natural. Suggestion: simplify to 'any kind of food or fruit that tastes sweet, like chocolate, gummy bears, and cola.'

× Yeah, I definitely, uh, eat different foods at different times of, uh, over a period of year because during, at the summer time I use uh, I eat a lot of cold foods and drinks, but well, as in winter I youth a bit hot with soup in it.

✓ Yes, I definitely eat different foods at different times of the year because in summer I eat a lot of cold foods and drinks, but in winter I prefer hot things like soup.

Tense is present simple for habitual actions. Remove redundant phrases 'of, uh, over a period of' and incorrect 'use' and 'youth a bit hot'. Use 'in summer' and 'in winter' idiomatically and 'prefer hot things like soup' for clarity. Suggestion: use concise present simple and correct vocabulary.

× Yeah, it has changed quite a lot because nowadays, uh, before I used to eat a Swiss so many sweetie flavoured things with uh, but now my taste bird had since few times or years ago, I like of it, uh, sour and spicy kind of food like noodles, et cetera.

✓ Yes, it has changed quite a lot. Before, I used to eat many sweet-flavored things, but a few years ago my taste changed and now I like sour and spicy foods, like noodles.

Multiple errors: use present perfect 'has changed' is fine; simplify sentence into two sentences. 'Before I used to eat...' is correct for past habit. Phrases like 'Swiss', 'sweetie flavoured', 'my taste bird had since few times' are incorrect or nonsensical. Use 'a few years ago my taste changed' and 'I like sour and spicy foods'. Suggestion: split into clearer clauses, use 'used to' for past habits and 'now I like' for current preference; correct vocabulary and word order.