Part 1
Giám khảo
What is your favourite food?
Thí sinh
My favorite food is noodles, they taste really good.
Giám khảo
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
Thí sinh
When I was young, I loved sweet snacks.
Giám khảo
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
Thí sinh
Yes, in winter I eat more hot food.
Giám khảo
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
Thí sinh
A little. I like more healthy food now.
What is your favourite food?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 回答直接但过于简短,缺少具体细节与连接词。建议给出原因、描述或例子,并使用连接词使回答更连贯。例如说明喜欢哪种面(如拉面、炒面)、口味、吃法或与记忆相关的细节,且总句数不超过五句。
Ví dụ: I love noodles, especially spicy ramen, because the broth is rich and comforting. For example, I often have a bowl of ramen after a long day, which helps me relax. Also, I like the chewy texture of the noodles, so I usually choose fresh noodles when possible.
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答简洁但笼统,缺乏具体例子和连接词。建议说明具体是哪类甜食、为什么喜欢、以及是否还有记忆或习惯关联,从而丰富内容。
Ví dụ: When I was a child I loved sweet snacks, especially chocolate biscuits and candy. I liked them because they were easy to share with friends after school. For instance, my grandmother used to give me a small chocolate cookie as a reward for finishing homework.
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
Điểm: 76.0Gợi ý: 回答符合问题但过于简短,缺少细节和连接结构。建议说明具体的“热食”类型、原因(如天气、体感)、以及对比其他季节的饮食变化,使用连接词提高连贯性。
Ví dụ: Yes, I do eat different foods depending on the season. For example, in winter I prefer hot soups and stews because they keep me warm, whereas in summer I eat more salads and cold noodles to stay refreshed. This change helps me feel comfortable throughout the year.
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
Điểm: 74.0Gợi ý: 回答直接但模糊,未具体说明如何变化、举例或原因。建议说明哪些食物发生了变化、为什么更注重健康(如营养、生活方式),并可举一两个具体替代品。
Ví dụ: It has changed a little; I eat more healthy food now. For example, I used to eat a lot of fried snacks, but now I prefer grilled chicken and vegetable salads because I want more protein and fewer unhealthy fats. This shift is mainly due to wanting to stay fit and have more energy.
× My favorite food is noodles, they taste really good.
✓ My favorite food is noodles. They taste really good.
原句是逗号拼接了两个独立句,属于逗号拼接错误(run-on sentence),应将其分为两个句子或用分号/连接词。建议把逗号改为句号(或使用连词 like "and"),以使句子结构清晰。
× What kind of food did you like when you were young? -> When I was young, I loved sweet snacks.
✓ When I was young, I loved sweet snacks.
原句时态正确(过去时),无需改动。该回答与提问时态一致,使用了过去式“loved”,表意明确。
× Do you eat different foods at different times of the year? -> Yes, in winter I eat more hot food.
✓ Yes, in winter I eat more hot food.
原句时态与提问(现在一般时)一致,表述正确。可以考虑更自然的表达如“eat more hot foods”或“eat hotter food”,但这属于词汇选择而非语法错误,不在需改正的类型列表中。
× Has your favourite food changed since you were a child? -> A little. I like more healthy food now.
✓ A little. I like healthier food now.
原句使用形容词+名词“more healthy food”在语法上可接受,但更地道的比较级形式应为比较级形容词“healthier”。因此将“more healthy food”改为“healthier food”。理由:多数单音节或双音节形容词用-er 形式表示比较级,'healthy' 常用 'healthier'。建议使用“healthier”以更自然准确地表达比较含义。