Food— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your favourite food, avoid fillers (uh, um), correct vocabulary (use names of dishes correctly), and limit to about 2–4 sentences. Use one linking phrase to explain why you like it and give a brief specific example.

Ví dụ: My favourite food is Indian cuisine, especially home-cooked curries and dals. I like them because they use a variety of spices and fresh ingredients, which I find both tasty and healthy. For example, I often eat dhokla or a simple dal with rice when I want something comforting and nutritious.

Gợi ý: Answer with a clear contrast between past and present. Use one linking word (e.g., ‘however’, ‘but’) to show change. Use correct tense and countable/uncountable forms (junk food, not junk foods). Keep it to 2–3 sentences and avoid repetitions.

Ví dụ: When I was young, I preferred junk food such as pizza and burgers because I thought they were convenient and tasty. However, as I grew up I realised they are unhealthy, so now I choose more nutritious options like salads and home-cooked meals.

Gợi ý: Be specific to the question about seasonal or annual changes; mention seasons, festivals or travel clearly. Avoid vague phrases like ‘allowed to explore’ and unnecessary hesitations. Use one or two concrete examples (season or festival) and correct dish names (e.g., 'vada pav' rather than 'Vodafone').

Ví dụ: Yes. In winter I prefer hot, comforting dishes like lentil soups and stews, while in summer I eat lighter foods such as salads and fruits. Also, when I travel within India I try local specialties—for example, last month in Maharashtra I tried vada pav, a famous street snack.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence stating whether it changed, then briefly explain why and give one specific example of a new favourite. Use correct grammar (I adopted -> I now eat/adopt), reduce hesitation and repetition, and keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, my favourite foods have changed. As a child I loved pizza and burgers, but now I prefer salads and home-cooked meals because I value nutrition and overall well-being—for instance, I often eat a mixed-vegetable salad with grilled chicken for lunch.

× There are certain different means which I consume and I love to have in my daily routine and uh, where from, uh, definitely from Indian cuisine because I, I think they are very healthy and having a variety of spices like namely, uh, dhokra and common.

✓ I eat a variety of foods in my daily routine, and I prefer Indian cuisine because I think it is very healthy and uses a variety of spices such as dhokla and common dishes.

The student used awkward pronouns and relative clauses ('which I consume', 'where from') that do not fit English usage. 'They' incorrectly refers to 'Indian cuisine' (singular); use 'it' for cuisine. Also 'having a variety of spices' should be an active clause 'uses a variety of spices'. Suggestion: simplify sentences, keep subject-verb agreement ('cuisine' is singular -> 'it is'), and use clear vocabulary ('dhokla' instead of 'dhokra').

× Honestly, when I was a child at that time, I usually prefer to have a junk foods like pizza and burger because I think they are very healthy at that time.

✓ Honestly, when I was a child, I usually preferred to have junk food like pizza and burgers because I thought they were very tasty then.

The sentence mixes past time reference ('when I was a child') with present tense verbs ('prefer', 'think'). Use past tense for habits in the past: 'preferred', 'thought'. Also 'junk foods' should be 'junk food' (uncountable) and plural forms for items: 'burgers'. Suggestion: match tense to time frame and use correct countable/uncountable nouns.

× But nowadays as I grew up, I came to know that it is non healthy and having a healthy food in a on a daily basis, uh, is very, uh, healthy.

✓ But nowadays, as I have grown up, I have come to know that it is unhealthy and eating healthy food on a daily basis is very important.

Tense and form errors: 'as I grew up' requires present perfect 'as I have grown up' when contrasting with 'nowadays'. 'Came to know' -> 'have come to know'. 'Non healthy' should be 'unhealthy'. 'Having a healthy food in a on a daily basis' is ungrammatical; use 'eating healthy food daily'. Suggestion: use present perfect for life changes and correct adjective forms.

× Obviously, it's allowed to explore the different cuisines of different nation.

✓ Obviously, it is good to explore the cuisines of different nations.

'It's allowed to' is unnatural here; use 'it is good to' or 'it is possible to'. 'Different nation' should be plural 'different nations'. Suggestion: choose appropriate collocations ('explore the cuisines') and correct number for nouns.

× So whenever I, uh, I plan to, uh, to migrate from one city to another, at the time, I usually prefer to, uh, taste their authentic food.

✓ So whenever I plan to move from one city to another, I usually try the local authentic food.

Redundant words ('to, uh, to migrate', 'at the time') and wrong verb 'migrate' (use 'move' for city-to-city). 'Taste their authentic food' is awkward; use 'try the local authentic food'. Suggestion: remove fillers and use natural verbs and word order.

× I remember vividly about one month ago, I visited, uh, Maharashtra over there, I tried, uh, Vodafone, which is authentic food and famous all over the world.

✓ I remember vividly that about one month ago I visited Maharashtra, and I tried vada pav, which is an authentic local food famous across the region.

Errors: 'vividly about one month ago' should be 'vividly that about one month ago'. 'Visited, uh, Maharashtra over there' has redundancy; 'over there' unnecessary. 'Vodafone' is incorrect word; likely 'vada pav'. Also 'which is authentic food and famous all over the world' is exaggerated and ungrammatical; use 'an authentic local food famous in the region'. Suggestion: check vocabulary, remove redundancy, and use correct article forms ('an authentic').

× Certainly when I was a child, at that time, I most, my, my most favorite food was pizza and burger.

✓ When I was a child, my favourite foods were pizza and burgers.

Redundancy ('certainly', 'at that time', repeated 'my most') and wrong number agreement: 'food' singular vs multiple items; use plural 'foods' and plural verb 'were'. Also 'most favorite' is nonstandard; use 'favourite'. Suggestion: simplify and ensure subject-verb agreement and correct comparative words.

× But nowadays I, as I grew up, I, I knew about how nutritious and healthy food are beneficial for physical and mental well-being.

✓ But nowadays, as I have grown up, I have learned how nutritious and healthy food is beneficial for physical and mental well-being.

Tense mismatch: use present perfect 'have grown' and 'have learned' for changes up to now. 'Food are' is incorrect; 'food' (uncountable) takes singular verb 'is'. Suggestion: match tense and ensure subject-verb agreement with uncountable nouns.

× And also I adapt, uh, uh, certain salads and home cooked food in my daily routine.

✓ I also include certain salads and home-cooked food in my daily routine.

Use of 'adapt' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'include' or 'adopt'. 'Home cooked' should be hyphenated as 'home-cooked' when used as an adjective. Use preposition 'in' or 'as part of' correctly: 'include ... in my daily routine'. Suggestion: choose correct verb and hyphenate compound adjectives.