Food— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence and avoid redundancy. Use 2–4 supporting sentences with linking words and specific details (frequency, reasons, comparisons). Correct grammar (verb tenses and articles) and keep within five sentences.

Ví dụ: My favourite food is KFC fried chicken because I love its crispy coating and juicy meat. For example, I usually treat myself to it after finishing a big school project once or twice a month. Although it’s not very healthy, I enjoy it as an occasional reward rather than an everyday meal.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence, then give specific supporting details and correct grammar (verb forms, articles, and noun agreement). Use linking words to connect ideas and keep concise phrasing.

Ví dụ: When I was young, I loved sweet and sour desserts such as lime and orange sorbet. I enjoyed them especially after playing outside in the hot, humid weather because they were very refreshing and helped me cool down.

Gợi ý: Provide a direct topic sentence, then give two clear, specific examples with linking words and correct grammar (plural/singular, tense, articles). Briefly explain cultural reasons to enrich the answer.

Ví dụ: Yes, I eat different foods at different times of the year because of traditional festivals. For example, during Chinese New Year I eat long noodles to symbolise longevity, while at Christmas I often choose KFC for its convenience and festive popularity.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence about change, then use contrasting linking words and specific details (when/how often/how decisions changed). Correct grammar (tense consistency, articles) and avoid vague phrasing like “things I put into myself.”

Ví dụ: Yes, my favourite foods have changed since childhood. I used to prefer sweet and sour desserts because they tasted good, but now I choose healthier options such as salads and boiled eggs more often because I am concerned about long-term health and energy levels.

× The juicy and tender meat was really amazing and I usually treat myself with it once I accomplish something like my school project.

✓ The juicy and tender meat is really amazing and I usually treat myself to it once I accomplish something like a school project.

Tense consistency and verb usage: 'was' conflicts with present habits signaled by 'usually'. Change to present 'is'. Preposition and article: use 'treat myself to it' not 'with it', and 'a school project' is appropriate instead of 'my school project' for a general example.

× When I was young I loved sweet and sour desserts, for instance lime and orange sorbet because it helps refreshing after I play from outside which is really hot and humid.

✓ When I was young I loved sweet and sour desserts, for instance lime and orange sorbet, because they helped refresh me after I played outside when it was really hot and humid.

Verb forms and agreement: 'helps refreshing' is incorrect. Use past tense 'helped' to match 'was young' and 'refresh' should be base form or 'refresh me'. Subject agreement: 'sorbet' (plural idea) pairs with 'they' if referring to multiple flavors; alternatively use 'it' for singular. Prepositions and word order: 'play from outside' should be 'played outside', and add commas for clarity.

× Yes I do because different time of the year has different traditional festival.

✓ Yes, I do because different times of the year have different traditional festivals.

Number agreement: 'different time' should be plural 'different times' and 'festival' should be plural 'festivals' to match 'different'. Also adjust verb agreement: 'have' matches plural subject. Add commas for clarity.

× For instance at Chinese New Year's festival I have noodles as a festive food because it symbolized longevity.

✓ For instance, at Chinese New Year I have noodles as a festive food because they symbolize longevity.

Article and noun form: 'Chinese New Year's festival' is awkward; common phrasing is 'Chinese New Year'. Tense and agreement: 'symbolized' should be present 'symbolize' when stating a general fact; use plural pronoun 'they' to refer to 'noodles'.

× Whereas Christmas I would celebrate with KFC because it's convenient.

✓ At Christmas I would celebrate with KFC because it's convenient.

Preposition usage: use 'at Christmas' to indicate the occasion. 'Whereas' is inappropriate here because it introduces a contrast; 'At' correctly specifies the time.

× Yes, when I was a child, I loved sweet and sour desserts because it tastes good.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I loved sweet and sour desserts because they tasted good.

Tense and agreement: 'was' and 'loved' are past, so 'tastes' should be past 'tasted'. 'They' agrees with plural 'desserts' instead of 'it'.

× However, when I grow up, I have to consider the things that I put into myself.

✓ However, as I grew up, I had to consider the things that I put into my body.

Tense and word choice: 'when I grow up' is present/future, but context contrasts past childhood to later life, so use past 'as I grew up' and 'had to'. 'Put into myself' is unnatural; use 'put into my body'.

× So I have to choose the healthier options like salad or boiled eggs to make sure that I will live longer.

✓ So I had to choose healthier options like salad or boiled eggs to make sure that I would live longer.

Tense consistency with previous sentence: keep past modal 'had to' and conditional 'would' to match 'as I grew up'. Remove article 'the' before 'healthier options' for generalization. 'Salad' is acceptable; could pluralize to 'salads'.