Food— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and natural. Give one clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and exaggerated informal phrases like "I die for" in a formal test.

Ví dụ: I love Japanese food, especially sushi. For example, I often go to a sushi bar near my house and usually order about eight pieces because I enjoy trying different types like salmon and tuna. Because sushi is fresh and light, it's my favourite food.

Gợi ý: Use correct tense and reduce filler words. Start with a clear past-tense topic sentence, then give one specific reason or memory using a linking word. Avoid hesitation and repetition.

Ví dụ: When I was young, I loved eating eggs. For instance, my parents often made boiled eggs for breakfast, and I would sometimes have eggs for every meal because they were quick and tasty.

Gợi ý: Be specific and logical. Use linking words to contrast seasons and give clear examples. Avoid contradicting statements (e.g., hot food in summer) unless explained. Finish your sentence fully.

Ví dụ: Yes, I eat different foods depending on the season. For example, in summer I prefer light dishes such as salads and cold noodles, whereas in winter I enjoy hot meals like a spicy hot pot to keep warm.

Gợi ý: Use correct grammar and provide a clear comparison between past and present. Start with a topic sentence in present perfect or past simple, then explain why it changed with one specific reason or example.

Ví dụ: Yes, my favourite food has changed since childhood. I didn't try sushi when I was little, but after tasting it at a friend's birthday, I began to enjoy it because of its fresh flavours and variety.

× Sometimes I feel like I eat some 20 to 25 sushi at once.

✓ Sometimes I feel like I eat about 20 to 25 pieces of sushi at once.

Use of 'sushi' with a numeral requires a countable unit; 'sushi' is uncountable or treated as plural via 'pieces'. Also 'some 20 to 25' is awkward—use 'about'. Suggest saying 'about 20 to 25 pieces of sushi'.

× When when I was young I love to eat eggs.

✓ When I was young I loved to eat eggs.

The time expression 'When I was young' places the action in the past, so the verb should be past tense 'loved' not present 'love'. Remove duplicate 'when'.

× I know it's uh, sounds funny but I love eggs.

✓ I know it sounds funny, but I love eggs.

In this sentence 'it sounds' is present simple and should not be split by 'it's' plus another verb. Use 'I know it sounds funny' or 'I know it's funny'. Also add a comma before 'but'.

× Like sometimes I I just eat eggs everyday, not other food.

✓ Sometimes I just eat eggs every day and not other food.

Use present simple 'eat' is fine, but remove duplicated 'I'. 'Every day' should be two words when used as an adverb. 'Not other food' is awkward; connect clauses with 'and' or rephrase 'and not other food'.

× Yes, I eat different foods at different times of the year, like uh, uh, in summer I prefer to eat some hot kind of food like uh, hot pot.

✓ Yes, I eat different foods at different times of the year; for example, in summer I prefer to eat hot kinds of food, like hot pot.

Replace 'like uh, uh' with clearer linking phrase such as 'for example'. 'Some hot kind of food' is ungrammatical—use 'hot kinds of food' or 'hot food', and add punctuation to separate clauses.

× And when it's winter, I want to.

✓ And when it's winter, I want to eat warm food.

The original sentence fragments 'I want to.' lacks an object or verb complement making it incomplete. Complete the idea by specifying what the speaker wants to do: 'eat warm food' or 'eat hot dishes'.

× Yes, my favorite food change since I was child.

✓ Yes, my favorite food has changed since I was a child.

When describing a change that started in the past and continues to the present, use present perfect: 'has changed'. Also 'a child' needs the indefinite article. 'Was child' is incorrect; use 'was a child'.

× Like now I'm adult and I love sushi but when I was young I didn't try sushi so those times.

✓ Now I'm an adult and I love sushi, but when I was young I didn't try sushi back then.

Use the noun phrase 'an adult' with the article. 'Didn't try sushi so those times' is unidiomatic—use 'back then' or 'at that time'. Maintain past tense 'didn't try' for the younger period. Add comma before 'but'.