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Part 1

Giám khảo

What is your favourite food?

Thí sinh

My favorite food is cheesecake because I like sweet food. I think it can make me feel happy and always stay me in a good mood. I usually eat it twice a week, especially after a very tired and the tired day.

Giám khảo

What kind of food did you like when you were young?

Thí sinh

Why were the children? My favorite food was candy, I remembered. I enjoy it twice a week. Sometimes parents regard it as a gift to me.

Giám khảo

Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?

Thí sinh

Yes, I prefer have hot pot in winter especially in during the lunar festival. In our family gathering we always have a hot pot when the summer we prefer it BBQ.

Giám khảo

Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?

Thí sinh

No, I like sweet food all the time. For me, sweet food has become a very important part in my life because it can, uh, reduce my stress and make me happy.

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

What is your favourite food?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: 回答需要更自然、句子更简洁并纠正语法错误;提供一到两个具体细节,并用连接词衔接。注意不要重复表达“tired”。建议控制在3-4句内。

Ví dụ: My favourite food is cheesecake because I love sweet desserts. It always lifts my mood after a long day, so I usually have a slice twice a week. I especially enjoy it on weekends when I relax with a cup of coffee.

What kind of food did you like when you were young?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答应直接回应问题并修正语法与用词错误;不要出现无关疑问句(如 “Why were the children?”)。提供具体情境(比如喜欢的糖果类型或什么时候吃)并用连接词。保持简短。

Ví dụ: When I was a child, I loved candy, especially chewy fruit sweets. I remember getting them as a treat from my parents, usually on weekends or special occasions.

Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更有条理,使用连接词(for example, while, however)并修正语法(时态和冠词)。说明具体时间和原因,避免句子拼接错误。控制在3-4句内。

Ví dụ: Yes. For example, I prefer hot pot in winter, especially during the Lunar New Year, because it keeps everyone warm and is great for family gatherings. In summer we usually have barbecues outdoors because the weather is nice.

Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?

Điểm: 68.0

Gợi ý: 回答总体清楚但需更自然并减少语气词(uh);给出具体例子或短解释并用连接词。可用一两句说明原因并举例。保持简洁。

Ví dụ: No, my favourite type of food hasn't changed—I still love sweet foods. They help me relax after a stressful day, for example I often eat a small dessert like chocolate or cheesecake to cheer myself up.

Ngữ pháp

13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× I think it can make me feel happy and always stay me in a good mood.

I think it can make me feel happy and always keep me in a good mood.

原句中使用了動詞短語 'stay me',這是不正確的搭配。英語中表示“讓我保持某種狀態”應使用 'keep someone + adjective'。因此應將 'stay me in a good mood' 改為 'keep me in a good mood'。建議:記住常見搭配,如 keep someone happy/angry/safe 等。

6: Present tense issue

× I usually eat it twice a week, especially after a very tired and the tired day.

I usually eat it twice a week, especially after a very tiring day.

原句時態和詞類混用,且形容詞使用不當。'a very tired day' 不合適,因為 day 不能感到疲倦,應使用現在分詞形容詞 'tiring' 來表示使人感到累的事物。且不需要冠詞 'the'。建議:用現在分詞作形容詞(tiring)來描述讓人感到某種狀態的事物。

26: Sentence structure errors

× Why were the children?

What did you like as a child?

原句 'Why were the children?' 結構不正確且與問題語意不符。考官問的是“你小時候喜歡什麼食物?”,正確的提問應為 'What did you like when you were young?' 或學生回答應直接陳述。此處學生應改為完整回答,例如 'When I was a child, my favorite food was candy.' 建議:回答兒時喜好時使用 'When I was a child/young, ...' 並用過去時描述過去習慣。

5: Past tense issue

× My favorite food was candy, I remembered.

My favorite food was candy, I remember.

句子時間參照混亂。學生說的是過去的喜好,應使用過去時 'was',但是 'I remembered' 顯示回憶動作的過去,與語境不自然。更自然的表達是 'My favorite food was candy, I remember.' 或把整句改為過去敘述 'I remember liking candy.' 建議:注意說話時若在回憶,可以用現在時 'I remember' 或使用過去完成/過去式描述過去行為。

6: Present tense issue

× I enjoy it twice a week.

I enjoyed it twice a week.

此句談論的是過去(小時候)的習慣,應使用過去時 'enjoyed' 而不是現在時 'enjoy'。建議:描述過去習慣時使用過去時(used to / would / past simple)。

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× Sometimes parents regard it as a gift to me.

Sometimes my parents gave it to me as a gift.

原句中 'regard it as a gift to me' 用法不自然且時態錯誤。'Regard' 表示認為,不適合表達“把某物當作禮物送給我”。更自然的表達是 'gave it to me as a gift'(過去習慣)。建議:根據語意選擇合適動詞和介詞短語,例如 'give something to someone' 或 'give someone something'。

8: Verb + -ing form

× Yes, I prefer have hot pot in winter especially in during the lunar festival.

Yes, I prefer having hot pot in winter, especially during the Lunar Festival.

動詞 prefer 後面可接動名詞或不定式,但口語中常用 'prefer doing'。原句 'prefer have' 是錯誤形式。另外 'in during' 多餘且冗餘,應只用 'during'。建議:記住 'prefer doing' 或 'prefer to do' 的正確用法;不要連用介詞 'in' 和 'during'。

26: Sentence structure errors

× In our family gathering we always have a hot pot when the summer we prefer it BBQ.

At our family gatherings we always have hot pot. In summer we prefer to barbecue.

原句結構混亂,時態與連接詞使用不當。應將兩個想法分成兩句:家庭聚會時吃火鍋,夏天則更喜歡燒烤。'prefer it BBQ' 不正確,應為 'prefer to barbecue' 或 'prefer barbecue'。建議:把不同時間的習慣分句表達,動詞後使用不定式或動名詞作偏好表達。

6: Present tense issue

× No, I like sweet food all the time.

No, I've liked sweet food all my life.

回答關於從小到現在是否改變,應使用現在完成時表示從過去延續到現在的狀態:'I've liked...' 而不是單純一般現在 'I like'(雖然口語也可,但更精確為現在完成時)。建議:表示從過去持續到現在的狀態使用現在完成時(have/has + past participle)。

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× For me, sweet food has become a very important part in my life because it can, uh, reduce my stress and make me happy.

For me, sweet food has become a very important part of my life because it can reduce my stress and make me happy.

固定短語應為 'part of my life' 而非 'part in my life'。其餘結構基本正確。建議:注意介詞搭配,記住常見短語 'part of'。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
HappyCheerful; Glad; Fortunate
HotHeated; Very warm; Feverish; Spicy; Fierce
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
SweetSugary; Fragrant; Dulcet; Pleasant
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