Food— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and use clearer grammar. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid filler sounds (umm, and) and repetition. Also vary vocabulary (e.g., 'comfort food', 'treats', 'desserts') and link ideas with simple connectors like 'because' and 'for example'.

Ví dụ: My favourite food is chocolate because I love its rich, sweet flavour and it always cheers me up. For example, I often choose chocolate desserts after a stressful day because they make me feel comforted and relaxed.

Gợi ý: Begin with a clear past-tense topic sentence and give a concise, specific reason. Reduce repetition and avoid unclear phrases. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect cause and effect, and correct tense and wording (e.g., 'I liked cupcakes a lot' and 'they helped me forget problems').

Ví dụ: When I was young, I liked cupcakes a lot because they were sweet and comforting. For instance, after stressful days at school I would eat a cupcake to cheer myself up and forget minor worries.

Gợi ý: Make the answer specific and directly address seasonal differences if asked. If you mean mood rather than season, say so clearly. Use conditional forms correctly and fewer fillers. Provide one clear example of seasonal or mood-related change and use linking words ('for example', 'instead', 'also').

Ví dụ: I don't change my diet much by season, but I do choose foods based on my mood. For example, in winter I prefer warm, spicy dishes to feel cosy, whereas in summer I opt for light salads and fruits to stay refreshed.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and use clearer language to explain reasons. Say 'No, it hasn't changed' then give one or two concise reasons with correct phrasing. Avoid vague or awkward expressions like 'control up my can lighten my life' and reduce repetition.

Ví dụ: No, my favourite food hasn't changed — I still prefer sweet flavours because they lift my mood. For example, after a difficult day I often have a dessert to relax and feel happier.

× Umm my favorite food and snacks probably is chocolate because I like the chocolate flavor and also umm eating chocolate could release some hormones that could make me happy and so chocolate is my comfort food and and also many dessert could be chocolate flavor and it's pretty sweet.

✓ Umm my favorite food and snacks are probably chocolate because I like the chocolate flavor, and eating chocolate can release hormones that make me happy, so chocolate is my comfort food. Also, many desserts can be chocolate-flavored and they're pretty sweet.

Subject-verb agreement and noun number: 'food and snacks' is a plural subject and requires 'are' not 'is'. Use 'dessert' plural 'desserts'. Use 'can' instead of 'could' for general ability/effect. Use hyphenated adjective 'chocolate-flavored' and plural pronoun 'they're' to match 'desserts'. Combine clauses with commas and periods for clarity.

× I like cupcakes a lot because I always feel sad and exhausted umm under high pressure lifestyle so eating them could make me feel more happy and and just forgets back bad things in the past and or present so I don't like it umm.

✓ I liked cupcakes a lot when I was younger because I often felt sad and exhausted under a high-pressure lifestyle, so eating them made me feel happier and helped me forget bad things in the past or present.

Tense consistency: The question asked about childhood, so use past tense ('liked', 'felt', 'made', 'helped'). 'Could' is replaced with 'made' for a specific past effect. 'More happy' -> 'happier'. 'Forgets back bad things' is incorrect; use 'helped me forget bad things'. Use article 'a high-pressure lifestyle' and remove redundant words for clarity.

× Probably yes, I eat a lot of food in a year. I think it depends on my mood. When I was very sad I would probably try umm eating sweets that could make me happy and when I was so boring I would eat something spicy flavor. So I think it depends on my choice.

✓ Probably yes, I eat a lot of different foods throughout the year. I think it depends on my mood. When I am very sad I will probably try eating sweets that make me happy, and when I am bored I will choose something spicy. So I think it depends on my choice.

Gerund use: 'try eating' is acceptable, but tense and word choices needed correction. Use present/future reference for general habit ('am', 'will'). 'So boring' is incorrect; use 'bored'. 'Something spicy flavor' should be 'something spicy' or 'a spicy dish'. 'In a year' -> 'throughout the year' for natural phrasing.

× No, I still like food in sweet flavor because I think umm food could make me feel happy. So I may choose something good that might control up my can lighten my life and just forget the bad thing and tough tough things happened in the past so I still like.

✓ No, my favourite food hasn't changed; I still like sweet foods because I think food can make me feel happy. I may choose things that can brighten my life and help me forget bad or difficult things that happened in the past, so I still like them.

Tense and modal use: Use present perfect 'hasn't changed' to link past to present. 'Food could make' -> 'food can make' for general truth. 'Something good that might control up my can lighten my life' is ungrammatical; replace with 'things that can brighten my life'. Use 'help me forget bad or difficult things that happened' and make pronouns consistent ('them' refers to 'sweet foods').