Part 1
Giám khảo
What is your favourite food?
Thí sinh
Food. My favourite food is. How sausages? And. Roast boot. So let that kebab. And it salads.
Giám khảo
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
Thí sinh
When, when I was young, When I was young.
Giám khảo
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
Thí sinh
I eat different foods at different times of the year. In the summer I. I eat a lot of fruits. And in the winter, I eat meat.
Giám khảo
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes. I have a favorite food. Changed. Since my, I was a child. I really like to meet my mom, SC. A top. Cook.
What is your favourite food?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答缺乏连贯性和清晰性,句子断断续续,词汇和发音错误较多。建议先给出一句明确的主题句(例如:My favourite food is kebabs),然后用1–2个支持性细节(如口味、吃法或何时吃)并使用连接词(and, also, because)保持流畅。每次回答控制在最多5句内,注意发音和单词拼写(sausage, roast beef, salad)。
Ví dụ: My favourite food is kebabs because they are flavorful and easy to eat. I usually enjoy them with fresh salad and a bit of spicy sauce. I prefer lamb kebabs, but sometimes I choose chicken for a lighter option.
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: 回答没有提供任何内容或细节,只重复了问题。建议先用一句主题句回答(如:When I was young I liked...),然后给出1–2个具体例子或原因,使用连接词(for example, because)来扩展。注意不要重复问题文本。
Ví dụ: When I was young, I liked simple foods like rice and steamed vegetables. For example, my mother often cooked plain rice with boiled broccoli and carrots because it was healthy and easy to prepare.
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答结构基本清楚,包含主题句和支持细节,但句子有碎片化倾向,连接词使用可以更自然。建议把句子连成2–3个完整句,用因果或对比连接词(for example, in contrast, because)并给出更具体的例子(哪些水果、哪种肉、做法或理由)。
Ví dụ: Yes, I eat different foods depending on the season. In summer I eat a lot of fruits like watermelon and peaches because they are refreshing. In contrast, during winter I prefer hearty dishes with meat such as stews and roasted chicken to keep warm.
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答断断续续且含糊不清,信息不完整。建议用一至两句直接回答是否改变,然后说明原因并给出具体细节(who cooks it, when you eat it, why you like it)。使用连接词(because, since, now)使表达更连贯。注意发音或打字错误(meet → meat? mom cooks)。
Ví dụ: Yes, my favourite food has changed since I was a child. When I was young I liked very simple foods, but now I prefer dishes my mother cooks, such as her roasted chicken, because she uses special spices and it tastes comforting.
× Food. My favourite food is. How sausages? And. Roast boot. So let that kebab. And it salads.
✓ My favourite foods are sausages, roast beef, kebabs and salads.
句子结构混乱、断句不完整,原句由多个不完整的片段组成,缺少完整主谓结构且名词单复数不一致,导致意思不清。建议将分散的词语连成一个完整句子,使用复数形式列举多样的食物并用逗号和连词连接。
× When, when I was young, When I was young.
✓ When I was young.
重复出现相同的从句导致冗余并破坏句子结构。建议只保留一次完整的时间状语从句以表达过去的习惯或喜好。
× I eat different foods at different times of the year. In the summer I. I eat a lot of fruits. And in the winter, I eat meat.
✓ I eat different foods at different times of the year. In the summer I eat a lot of fruit, and in the winter I eat meat.
原句存在句子片段("In the summer I.")结构不完整,同时“fruits”在此语境通常用不可数名词“fruit”来表示大量水果的总称。建议合并为完整句,并用正确的名词形式和连词连接。
× Yes. I have a favorite food. Changed. Since my, I was a child. I really like to meet my mom, SC. A top. Cook.
✓ Yes, my favourite food has changed since I was a child. I really like it when my mom cooks because she is a great cook.
原句多处断句和词序错误,时态混用不当(应使用现在完成时表示自过去至今的变化),并有拼写或词语错误("meet"应为"eat"或"it when","SC. A top. Cook."不通)。建议使用现在完成时说明变化,并用完整从句解释原因,修正动词和词序以确保通顺和语法正确。