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Part 1

Giám khảo

What is your favourite food?

Thí sinh

My favorite food is mango.

Giám khảo

What kind of food did you like when you were young?

Thí sinh

I'd like Mango when I was young, but I still like it until I'm an adult.

Giám khảo

Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?

Thí sinh

Yeah, sure. I eat different foods at different times of the year.

Giám khảo

Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?

Thí sinh

My favorite food never change since I was so because.

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Part 1

What is your favourite food?

Điểm: 68.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更自然并稍微展开,说明原因或描述,以展示词汇和流利度。例如可以说为什么喜欢、吃法或口感。注意语句要完整,句子数不要超过5句。

Ví dụ: My favourite food is mango because it's very sweet and juicy. I usually eat it fresh or add it to smoothies, and I especially enjoy it in summer when it's perfectly ripe.

What kind of food did you like when you were young?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 注意时态和语法,使用过去时描述童年喜好,用现在时说明现在的情况。句子要连贯并用连接词(e.g. but, and)清楚衔接。避免重复词汇,可补充具体回忆或例子。

Ví dụ: When I was young, I liked mangoes a lot because my grandmother used to give me slices after school. I still enjoy them now, although I also try other fruits like strawberries and peaches.

Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?

Điểm: 72.0

Gợi ý: 回答可以更具体,给出季节性食物的例子并说明原因,用连接词让回答更连贯。保持自然口语但用词多样。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. In summer I eat more fruits like mangoes and watermelons to stay cool, while in winter I prefer warm soups and stews to keep warm.

Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 句子语法和表达不完整,需使用正确时态和完整句子回答。直接回应并简洁说明原因或例外。如果没有改变,用过去完成或现在完成时态并给出原因或例子。

Ví dụ: No, my favourite food hasn't changed since I was a child because I have always loved the sweet taste of mangoes and the memories of eating them with my family.

Ngữ pháp

Verb tense / modal use / agreement errors (multiple)

× I'd like Mango when I was young, but I still like it until I'm an adult.

I liked mangoes when I was young, and I still like them now that I'm an adult.

包含多处语法问题: 1) 时态问题(Grammar Problem Type ID 5/6/7):原句混用了过去与现在时态,应将过去习惯用过去式 liked 表示“我小时候喜欢”。 2) 单复数问题(ID 1):mango 应用复数形式 mangoes 表示一般性喜好(复数或不可数都可,但此处用复数更自然)。 3) 代词使用/指代问题(ID 12):it 指单个芒果,不恰当,改为 them 指代复数的芒果或一般意义上的“芒果”。 4) 连接词和时间表达问题(ID 26/6):原句用 but I still like it until I'm an adult 混乱,应改为 and I still like them now that I'm an adult,或 simply “and I still like them now”。 改进建议:把描述过去习惯用过去式,表示现在持续用现在时,名词根据语境用复数,代词与先行词保持一致。

Present tense / agreement and word choice

× My favorite food never change since I was so because.

My favorite food has never changed since I was young.

存在多重问题: 1) 现在完成时与时间状语搭配(ID 6/5):句子要表达自过去到现在持续的状态,应使用现在完成时 has never changed 而不是现在时或原形 change。 2) 主谓一致(ID 27):favorite food 主语单数,谓语需用 has(与现在完成时一起)或 changes(一般现在时),但因表示从过去持续到现在,用 has changed。 3) 词汇/结构错误(ID 26/11):原句末尾 since I was so because 是不通的片段,应为 since I was young 或者 since I was a child。 改进建议:当表示从过去某时直到现在的持续变化或不变,优先使用现在完成时;注意用正确的时间短语(young / a child)并移除多余无意义词 like so because。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

DifferentDissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
YoungYouthful; Immature; Fledgling; Offspring; Young people
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