Food— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Сформулируйте ответ более грамотно и кратко: начните с чётного утверждения, затем приведите 1–2 конкретные причины и пример. Избегайте повтора и ошибок в грамматике (например, «Are my favorite food» → «My favourite food is...»), используйте связки (because, for example, also).

Ví dụ: My favourite food is rice with chicken because it is comforting and easy to customise. For example, I often add vegetables like peas and carrots and seasonings such as soy sauce and garlic, which make the dish more flavorful.

Gợi ý: Сформулируйте в прошедшем времени и свяжите с настоящим: начните с темы в прошедшем (I liked...), затем сравните с нынешними предпочтениями, используйте связки (but, now, because) и конкретизируйте «healthy food». Уберите заполнители типа «uh» и «so».

Ví dụ: When I was young, I liked ice cream and cakes because sweets were popular among children. However, now I prefer healthier options such as salads and grilled fish because I want more balanced meals.

Gợi ý: Дайте ясный прямой ответ и приведите 2–3 конкретных примера с сезонными блюдами. Используйте связки (for example, in winter, in summer) и избегайте повторений и неточных выражений («something with meat, with flour or someone else»).

Ví dụ: Yes, I do eat different foods depending on the season. For example, in winter I prefer hearty dishes like lasagna and stews, while in summer I enjoy light salads with fruits and fresh vegetables.

Gợi ý: Отвечайте прямо: используйте правильные времена и структуру (Present Perfect или Present Simple с указанием периода). Дайте причину, почему предпочтение не изменилось, приведите одно конкретное качество блюда. Избегайте лишних слова и исправьте грамматику («do not change» → «has not changed», «since I were a child» → «since I was a child»).

Ví dụ: No, my favourite food has not changed since childhood because I have always loved lasagna. I still enjoy it for its rich layers of pasta, meat and cheese, which create a lot of flavor.

× Are my favorite food is rice with chicken because when you add some other vegetables in the dishes you can make a new spices or you can add other spices and for me add more delicious dish than other.

✓ My favorite food is rice with chicken because when you add vegetables to the dish you can create new flavors by adding different spices, and for me it becomes more delicious than other dishes.

The sentence contains several pronoun and reference errors: 'Are my favorite food is' is incorrect; use 'My favorite food is' (subject pronoun and verb agreement). 'in the dishes' should be 'to the dish' for correct preposition. 'you can make a new spices' mixes singular and plural; use 'create new flavors' or 'make a new spice'. 'for me add more delicious dish than other' lacks a subject and uses incorrect comparison; use 'for me it becomes more delicious than other dishes'. Suggestions: use clear subjects, match singular/plural, use appropriate prepositions, and keep consistent references (it/this/the dish).

× Uh, when I was young, I like ice cream and, uh, cakes.

✓ When I was young, I liked ice cream and cakes.

This is a past time reference ('when I was young') so the verb should be in the past tense: 'liked' not 'like'. Suggestion: use past simple for habits or preferences in the past (I liked).

× I think it's popular in when we were kids, so.

✓ I think it was popular when we were kids.

The phrase 'popular in when we were kids' is ungrammatical due to extra preposition 'in' and awkward structure. Use 'it was popular when we were kids' to place the time expression correctly after the verb. Suggestion: remove unnecessary prepositions and position time phrases after the verb or at the beginning of the clause.

× But now I prefer more healthy food than, uh, some cakes, ice cream and essentials.

✓ But now I prefer healthier food to cakes, ice cream and sweets.

Use comparative form 'healthier' (adjective form) rather than 'more healthy'. Also 'prefer X to Y' is the correct collocation, not 'prefer X than'. 'essentials' is incorrect in this context; likely 'sweets' or 'desserts'. Suggestion: use 'prefer X to Y' and comparative adjective forms.

× Yeah, I different foods at different times of the year.

✓ Yes, I eat different foods at different times of the year.

The original lacks a verb ('I different foods'). Add the appropriate verb 'eat' to complete the sentence. Suggestion: ensure every sentence has a verb to express the action.

× Like in winter I like lasagna and uh, in summer I like uh, different salads with, uh, fruits, with vegetables.

✓ For example, in winter I like lasagna, and in summer I enjoy different salads with fruits and vegetables.

Use 'for example' rather than 'like' to introduce examples formally. 'Different salads with, uh, fruits, with vegetables' has redundant prepositions and commas; use 'salads with fruits and vegetables'. Suggestion: simplify coordinating phrases and use 'and' to link items.

× And in the winter I like more something with meat, with flour or someone else.

✓ And in the winter I prefer dishes with meat or dough-based dishes.

The phrase 'I like more something with meat, with flour or someone else' is unclear and uses 'someone else' incorrectly. 'Flour' alone is odd; likely 'dough' or 'flour-based dishes' is intended. Use 'prefer' for comparison and clarify the options. Suggestion: replace vague pronouns and words with specific nouns and correct comparative structure.

× It's hard question for me, but I think, uh, my favorite food do not change things will since I were a child, uh, because in my childhood I like lasagna.

✓ It's a hard question for me, but I think my favorite food has not changed since I was a child because in my childhood I liked lasagna.

Multiple errors: missing article ('a hard question'), wrong verb form 'do not change things will' is ungrammatical—use present perfect 'has not changed' to describe a change from the past until now. 'I were a child' should be 'I was a child' (past tense). 'I like lasagna' should be past 'I liked lasagna'. Suggestion: use 'has/have + past participle' for actions continuing to present, correct past tense for time expressions, and include necessary articles.

× So now I'm 20 and I'm, uh, also like lasagna because it would have a lot of flavors, a lot of spice, spices at like it.

✓ So now I'm 20 and I also like lasagna because it has a lot of flavors and spices.

Use present tense 'like' for current preferences (I also like). 'It would have' is incorrect here; use simple present 'it has' to describe characteristics. 'a lot of spice, spices at like it' is redundant and ungrammatical; simplify to 'a lot of flavors and spices'. Suggestion: use simple present to describe general truths and preferences, and avoid redundant words.