Part 1
Giám khảo
What is your favourite food?
Thí sinh
My favorite food is, uh, today's No. This is in Vietnam and many people really like it. Umm is a clue. Have a beef noodle or chicken and a forgettable chili and lamb.
Giám khảo
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
Thí sinh
The kind of food I like when I were young is quick. I really like. I really liar sweet, like candy. Uh, Lion K Especially umm, especially umm.
Giám khảo
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do. I have, for example, Ted on tech on tech. I really like umm, uh, I really like uh, is with uh, my family like cook for umm, traditional dishes like.
Giám khảo
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have. I have uh, when, when I grow, I usually like umm, I usually eat chapter international disease like uh, pad Thai, umm, uh, beef, beef streak.
What is your favourite food?
Điểm: 28.0Gợi ý: Cải thiện: Nói rõ ràng và trực tiếp trả lời câu hỏi, tránh tiếng ậm ừ và lm lẫn. Cụ thể: (1) Bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề xác định món ăn yêu thích; (2) Thêm 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (tại sao bạn thích nó, thành phần hoặc cách ăn); (3) Giữ câu ngắn gọn, không quá 5 câu; (4) Dùng từ vựng đúng (ví dụ: 'beef noodle' -> 'beef noodle soup' hay tên món cụ thể như 'pho').
Ví dụ: My favourite food is pho, the Vietnamese beef noodle soup. I like it because the broth is rich and fragrant, and it usually comes with fresh herbs and lime that brighten the flavour. I often eat it for breakfast at a local stall, which makes it feel comforting and authentic.
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: Cải thiện: Trả lời ở thì quá khứ đúng ngữ pháp, tránh lặp và ậm ừ. Cụ thể: (1) Bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề ở quá khứ (I liked...); (2) Nêu ví dụ cụ thể về món/nguyên liệu; (3) Giải thích ngắn lý do hoặc hoàn cảnh; (4) Giữ cấu trúc mạch lạc và dùng linking words như 'because' hoặc 'when'.
Ví dụ: When I was young, I liked sweets, especially candies and chocolates. I ate them after school because they were an easy treat, and my parents sometimes rewarded me with them for good grades.
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: Cải thiện: Trả lời rõ ràng với ví dụ cụ thể về mùa hoặc lễ hội và món ăn truyền thống. Cụ thể: (1) Nêu có/không; (2) Đưa ra 1–2 ví dụ cụ thể (mùa/lễ hội + món); (3) Dùng linking words như 'for example' hoặc 'during' để liên kết ý; (4) Tránh tiếng ậm ừ và hoàn thiện phát âm tên món.
Ví dụ: Yes, I do. For example, during Tet (the Vietnamese New Year) my family cooks traditional dishes like banh chung and pickled onions. We usually eat these foods together, which makes the holiday feel special.
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
Điểm: 22.0Gợi ý: Cải thiện: Trả lời rõ ràng về thay đổi sở thích, nêu các món cụ thể và lý do. Cụ thể: (1) Dùng thì đúng (present perfect 'has changed'); (2) Nêu món lúc nhỏ và món bây giờ; (3) Giải thích ngắn vì sao thay đổi (ví dụ khám phá ẩm thực quốc tế); (4) Tránh phát âm sai tên món, giữ câu rõ ràng và mạch lạc.
Ví dụ: Yes, my favourite food has changed since I was a child. As a child I preferred sweets, but now I enjoy international dishes such as pad thai and grilled steak because I like trying different flavours and textures.
× My favorite food is, uh, today's No. This is in Vietnam and many people really like it. Umm is a clue. Have a beef noodle or chicken and a forgettable chili and lamb.
✓ My favorite food is pho, a traditional Vietnamese dish. Many people in Vietnam really like it. It can be made with beef or chicken and often served with chili and herbs.
The original contains fragmented sentences, incorrect references, and unclear phrases. Combine ideas into complete sentences and use correct nouns (pho) and modifiers. Suggestion: identify the actual dish name, use full sentences, and list ingredients with parallel structure.
× The kind of food I like when I were young is quick. I really like. I really liar sweet, like candy. Uh, Lion K Especially umm, especially umm.
✓ The kind of food I liked when I was young was sweet food. I really liked candy, especially lollipops.
Use past tense for habits in the past: 'liked' and 'was' instead of 'like' and 'were'. Also correct 'were' to 'was' for the first person singular and fix vocabulary errors ('liar' -> 'liked', 'Lion K' likely 'lollipops'). Suggestion: use simple past to describe childhood preferences and choose correct nouns.
× Yes, I do. I have, for example, Ted on tech on tech. I really like umm, uh, I really like uh, is with uh, my family like cook for umm, traditional dishes like.
✓ Yes, I do. For example, during holidays my family and I like to cook traditional dishes together.
Original is fragmented and unclear. Use a clear time expression ('during holidays') and correct subject-verb structure ('my family and I like to cook'). Suggestion: form complete sentences with a clear subject and verb and avoid filler words.
× Yes, I have. I have uh, when, when I grow, I usually like umm, I usually eat chapter international disease like uh, pad Thai, umm, uh, beef, beef streak.
✓ Yes, it has changed. As I have grown, I usually eat more international dishes, such as pad Thai and beef steak.
Use present perfect to indicate change ('it has changed') and present simple or present perfect for habits that continue ('I have grown' / 'I usually eat'). Fix vocabulary errors ('chapter international disease' -> 'international dishes', 'beef streak' -> 'beef steak'). Suggestion: choose correct tense for life changes and use accurate nouns for foods.