Food— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be clear and direct: name a real food (e.g. a dish), avoid filler words and unclear references, use a topic sentence then 1–2 specific supporting details with linking words. Also correct basic grammar (e.g. subject-verb agreement) and choose precise vocabulary (nutrition, ingredients). Keep answers to under five sentences.

Ví dụ: My favourite food is chicken biryani. It is flavorful and comforting, and I especially enjoy the blend of spices and tender meat. Furthermore, it includes rice and vegetables, so it feels like a complete meal.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence about past preferences, avoid invented words and filler, use past tense consistently, and give 1–2 concrete examples and a brief reason for the change. Use linking words such as 'when' and 'but' to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: When I was young, I liked oily fried foods, especially french fries and fried chicken, because they tasted good and were easy to eat. However, as I grew older, I started eating more balanced meals for health reasons.

Gợi ý: This answer is relevant but needs clearer structure and vocabulary. Begin with a direct topic sentence, then explain with specific examples and linking words (e.g. 'in winter', 'however'). Avoid fillers and correct word choice (e.g. 'cold-weather foods', 'seasonal fruits'). Keep it concise (max 4 sentences).

Ví dụ: Yes. We have four seasons, so I change my diet accordingly. In winter I prefer hearty, high-calorie foods like stews and roasted meats to stay warm. In spring and summer I eat more salads, seasonal fruits and lighter dishes to feel refreshed.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence stating yes/no, then give concise reasons for the change and specific examples. Use correct tense and avoid repetition. Use linking words like 'because' or 'now' to show contrast.

Ví dụ: Yes, my favourite foods have changed. As a child I preferred fried and oily snacks, but now I choose fresh vegetables, fruits and simple grilled dishes because I am more health-conscious.

× My favorite, uh, food is Monday because food, uh, because Monday is very delicious, also yummy food.

✓ My favorite food is mandu because mandu is very delicious and yummy.

The student used 'Monday' (a day) incorrectly instead of the food name 'mandu' or similar; also repeated 'food' and misused articles. Replace incorrect word and remove unnecessary commas and repetitions. Use 'my favorite food is X' as standard structure.

× And in others also, uh, it has a lot of, uh, nutritions and uh, healthy products like vegetables and meat and coloring products are there.

✓ It also has a lot of nutrients and healthy foods like vegetables and meat, and natural coloring agents.

Use the noun 'nutrients' not 'nutritions'. 'Healthy products' is better as 'healthy foods'. 'Coloring products' is vague; 'natural coloring agents' or omit. Keep parallel structure and proper plural nouns.

× Well, in my childhood I like it only foods picked Oily fools.

✓ Well, in my childhood I liked only oily foods.

Childhood is past time, so use past tense 'liked' not present 'like'. Also 'oily foods' is correct noun phrase; remove 'picked' and wrong word 'fools'.

× Oily fools feels like delicious and yummy.

✓ Oily foods tasted delicious and yummy.

Use plural noun 'foods' and past tense 'tasted' to match past context. 'Feels like' is incorrect for describing taste; use 'tasted' or 'were'.

× But now, not now and I use it.

✓ But now I don't eat them.

Original is ungrammatical and unclear. Use negative present 'don't eat' to express current habit and 'them' to refer to oily foods.

× I get used to eat oily foods with bread.

✓ I used to eat oily foods with bread.

Use 'used to' + base verb to describe a past habitual action. 'Get used to eat' is incorrect; correct form would be 'got used to eating' but 'used to eat' is simpler and idiomatic.

× How I and I don't remember how can I?

✓ I don't remember how I started.

Original is confused and lacks clear verb structure. Use 'I don't remember how I started' or 'I don't remember how I got used to them' to convey the intended meaning.

× Uh, yes, uh, in we have a four season.

✓ Yes, we have four seasons.

Remove extraneous 'in' and use plural 'seasons' without article when speaking generally. Correct present tense 'we have'.

× That's why I, uh, I change my food, uh, menu in, especially in the winter, I try to eat oily and coldry foods, but in spring and summer hot days, I, uh, I usually eat vegetables, fruits.

✓ That's why I change my menu. Especially in winter I try to eat oily and hearty foods, but in spring and hot summer days I usually eat vegetables and fruits.

Fix subject-verb flow and punctuation by splitting into sentences. 'Coldry' is not a word; likely 'hearty' or 'heavy' foods. Use 'in winter' or 'especially in winter' and parallel structure 'vegetables and fruits'.

× I guess when I was a child I prefer to oily and fry it foods meals but now I I choose vegetables and fruits also not fried, not oily foods and the normal foods I like and it changes.

✓ I guess when I was a child I preferred oily and fried foods, but now I choose vegetables and fruits and prefer foods that are not fried or oily; my tastes have changed.

Use past tense 'preferred' for childhood. Use 'fried foods' not 'fry it foods meals'. Simplify and parallel 'not fried or oily'. End with clear statement 'my tastes have changed'.