Food— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng, sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và tránh lặp từ. Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn gọn, sau đó nêu 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (vì sao thích, khi nào ăn) và dùng liên từ thích hợp. Lưu ý dùng thì đúng (e.g., "my mother cooks it every week") và tránh lặp như "I feel I feel".

Ví dụ: My favourite food is fried chicken. My mother cooks it for our family every week, and I love it because the skin is crispy while the meat stays juicy. As a result, I always feel very happy after eating it.

Gợi ý: Cần trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng về quá khứ, dùng thì quá khứ đúng (e.g., "I liked"). Tránh câu lộn xộn và lặp từ. Nên cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể (mùi vị, kỷ niệm) và sử dụng liên từ để mạch lạc. Ví dụ sửa lỗi "realized" sang "liked", sửa cấu trúc câu để dễ hiểu.

Ví dụ: When I was a child, I liked the pork my mother cooked. She made it almost every week, and I remember the rich, savory flavour and how it made our family meals feel special.

Gợi ý: Cần trả lời rõ ràng và chính xác; sửa lỗi từ vựng ("my shoe" là sai — có thể bạn muốn nói một món ăn truyền thống). Dùng thì hiện tại đơn cho thói quen, nêu ví dụ cụ thể cho từng mùa và dùng liên từ như "for example" hoặc "in summer". Tránh lặp từ và hoàn chỉnh câu.

Ví dụ: Yes, we eat different foods depending on the season. For example, in spring my mother often cooks a traditional dish that our family enjoys, while in winter we prefer hot soups and stews to keep warm.

Gợi ý: Trả lời câu hỏi trực tiếp (Yes/No) và dùng cấu trúc hoàn chỉnh: "No, it hasn't" hoặc "Yes, it has." Sử dụng thì phù hợp và tránh lặp từ; nêu lý do ngắn gọn và cụ thể (hương vị, kỷ niệm). Sử dụng liên từ như "because" để giải thích rõ ràng.

Ví dụ: No, my favourite food hasn't changed. I loved my mother's pork dishes as a child and I still love them because of their rich flavour and the happy memories they bring.

× Personally, I like fried chicken the most. My mother cooks every week and I feel I feel over the moon after eating and my this food is so delicious because my mom is cooked very well.

✓ Personally, I like fried chicken the most. My mother cooks it every week and I feel over the moon after eating because my mom cooks it very well.

The sentence has incorrect verb forms and redundant words. Use 'cooks' (simple present) for habitual actions and 'cooks it' to refer to fried chicken; remove duplicate 'I feel' and 'my this food'. Also use 'cooks' not 'is cooked' when describing what the mother does. Suggestion: say concise sentences and keep subject-verb consistency.

× When I was a child I realized pork my mom cooked it every week and I feel so happy when my mom cooked there and my my 1st is so delicious for me and I feel it's made me feel over the noon after that.

✓ When I was a child I liked the pork my mom cooked every week and I felt so happy when she cooked it because it tasted very delicious to me and it made me feel over the moon afterwards.

Mixed and incorrect tense usage and awkward phrasing. Use past simple 'liked', 'cooked', 'felt', 'made' for past events. Remove redundant words and fix idiom 'over the moon'. Replace 'realized' with 'liked', 'there' is unnecessary, 'my my 1st' is unclear and removed. Use 'afterwards' not 'after that' for smoother flow.

× I think it depends on the season because in spring, my mom, my mom often cook my shoe for my family because my shoes is a traditional cuisine in my in my country and it's so good. It's so.

✓ I think it depends on the season because in spring my mom often cooks 'shu' for my family because 'shu' is a traditional dish in my country and it's very good.

Pronoun and noun references are confused and duplicated. Use 'cooks' (third person singular) and correct pronoun/ noun agreement: 'shu' (or the dish name) should be treated as a singular noun, so 'is' is correct. Remove repeated words and clarify the dish name. Suggestion: keep one clear noun for the food and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× No I have because when I was a child I really like pork and now I I still love pork because my this food which my mom cook is so delicious and tasty I it make me feel over the moon after eating.

✓ No, it hasn't changed because when I was a child I really liked pork and now I still love it because the food my mom cooks is so delicious and it makes me feel over the moon after eating.

Tense inconsistency and pronoun problems. Use present perfect negative 'hasn't changed' to answer 'Has your favourite food changed?', past simple 'liked' for childhood, present simple 'cooks' for habitual action, and 'makes' for present result. Remove redundant words and fix pronoun references ('it' for the food). Suggestion: match tense to the question and keep subjects and verbs consistent.