Food— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be clear, concise and use correct vocabulary. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid fillers and repetitions, and correct word choice (e.g., "toppings" not "children").

Ví dụ: My favourite food is pizza. I especially like it with lots of cheese and a variety of toppings such as mushrooms and pepperoni, because the combination of flavors is satisfying.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence about preferences in the past and support it with specific examples and a simple reason. Use past tense consistently and avoid unclear phrases like "meat person" or "eat food in half them."

Ví dụ: When I was young I liked meat dishes, especially grilled chicken and pork. I often ate these with rice and vegetables because my family cooked them frequently.

Gợi ý: This answer is quite clear and relevant. Improve by adding a linking word to explain why and by giving a bit more detail about the dish and seasonal preference to sound natural and fluent.

Ví dụ: Yes. For example, in summer I enjoy naengmyeon, a Korean cold noodle soup, because it is refreshing in hot weather. In contrast, I prefer hot soups and stews during winter to keep warm.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear comparison between past and present preferences using past and present tenses correctly. State specific foods and a reason for the change, and avoid hesitations and incomplete sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, my favourite foods have changed. As a child I liked simple dishes my mother made, such as boiled eggs and congee, but now I prefer more varied and spicy foods because I enjoy trying new flavors.

× Umm pizza is one of my favorite foods. Umm I like cheese and many children in pizza and that mix mix is very.

✓ Umm, pizza is one of my favorite foods. I like cheese on pizza, and that mixture is very tasty.

Original contains odd phrase 'many children in pizza' and repeated 'mix mix', which are incorrect word choices and unclear. This is an incorrect use of adjectives/nouns and adverbs creating confusion. Suggest using 'cheese on pizza' and 'mixture is very tasty' to convey the intended meaning clearly. Grammar problem type ID:13

× Actually I like kind of meat person when I was young so I usually eat food in half them.

✓ Actually, I liked a kind of meat when I was young, so I usually ate half of it.

The sentence mixes present tense 'like' and 'eat' with the past time reference 'when I was young'. This is a past tense issue. Change verbs to past tense ('liked', 'ate') and correct noun phrases ('a kind of meat', 'half of it') to make the meaning clear. Grammar problem type ID:5

× Well yes, in summer I enjoy naengmyeon. It's a traditional cold food in Korea, but I never tried this in winter.

✓ Well, yes. In summer I enjoy naengmyeon. It's a traditional cold dish in Korea, but I have never tried it in winter.

The clause 'I never tried this in winter' conflicts with present habitual enjoyment; using present perfect 'have never tried' is appropriate to indicate experience up to now. Also 'food' is better as 'dish' and use pronoun 'it'. This is a present tense/experience usage issue. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Yes, umm, when I was a child I like Zhangji and egg food which made the my mother but uh. Older I I.

✓ Yes. When I was a child, I liked Zhangji and egg dishes that my mother made, but as I got older, I changed.

The sentence uses present tense 'like' with past time 'when I was a child' and has fragmented structure. Change 'like' to past 'liked', fix noun phrase 'egg dishes', remove extra 'the', and complete the final clause 'as I got older, I changed' to make a grammatical, coherent past-tense statement. Grammar problem type ID:6