Food— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar; give a clear topic sentence then one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid trailing/incomplete sentences. Also use precise vocabulary (e.g., ‘cooked with’, ‘aromatic spices’) and correct article use.

Ví dụ: My favourite food is kachi, a traditional Bangladeshi dish. It is made of mutton and basmati rice cooked together with aromatic spices, which gives it a rich flavour and tender texture. Because it is slow-cooked for several hours, the rice absorbs the meat juices and spices, making it very special.

Gợi ý: Use one clear topic sentence and avoid repetition. Organize supporting details with linking words (firstly, then) and correct grammar (past tense: ‘I liked’). Be specific about preferences and give a brief reason or example.

Ví dụ: When I was young, I liked sweet and snack foods. For example, I often ate chips first, then ice cream, and cake on special occasions, because I loved their sweet taste and crunchy texture.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear direct answer (Yes/No) and follow with a linked explanation. Correct factual/word errors (e.g., ‘Bangladesh has six seasons’) and use linking words (‘however’, ‘for example’). Be specific about seasonal foods you eat.

Ví dụ: Not usually, but I do change some foods with the seasons. For example, Bangladesh has six seasons, so I eat different fruits when they are in season, such as mangoes in summer and lychees in spring.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear direct answer (Yes/No) and explain the change with reasons. Correct grammar and confusing phrases (e.g., unclear job reference). Use linking words (‘when I was a child’, ‘now’) and be specific about what you eat now and why.

Ví dụ: Yes, my favourite foods have changed since childhood. When I was a child I preferred sweet snacks, but now I choose healthier dishes, such as grilled fish and vegetable rice, because I want to maintain good health.

× My favorite food is kachi.

✓ My favorite food is kachi.

No change needed; sentence is grammatically correct. 'Kachi' is used as a proper noun here so no article required.

× It is made of mutton and basmati rice with lots of different kind of spices.

✓ It is made of mutton and basmati rice with lots of different kinds of spices.

The phrase 'different kind of spices' is ungrammatical because 'lots of' requires a plural noun and 'different' should modify the plural 'kinds'. Use 'kinds' to agree in number with 'lots of' and maintain parallel structure.

× The process of this basmati rice kachi is very different from the other dishes and it's.

✓ The process of making this basmati rice kachi is very different from that of other dishes.

Original ends with an incomplete clause 'and it's.' Omit the fragment and use 'the process of making' to form a clear noun phrase. Compare processes using 'different from that of other dishes' to avoid repetition and ensure grammatical structure.

× In my young age I used to like food which is sweetest and in my young age I used to like food snacks item basically actually chips, then ice cream and then cake.

✓ When I was young I used to like foods that were sweet, especially snacks like chips, ice cream, and cake.

Use 'when I was young' instead of 'in my young age'. 'Food which is sweetest' is awkward; use plural 'foods that were sweet' and past tense 'were' to match 'used to'. 'Food snacks item basically actually' is redundant; simplify to 'snacks like' and list items separated by commas.

× Those are the my most favorite dishes.

✓ Those are my most favorite dishes.

Remove the extra definite article 'the' before 'my'. 'My' already specifies possession and adding 'the' is ungrammatical.

× No times does not have anything to do with my food habit.

✓ Time does not have anything to do with my eating habits.

'No times' is incorrect; use 'time' or 'times' appropriately. 'Food habit' is non-native; use plural 'eating habits' for general behaviour. Reorder to a natural English sentence.

× However it is related in some cases like the fruits because Bangladesh is a 676 season and different season have different fruits so I used to eat those different.

✓ However, it is related in some cases, for example with fruits, because Bangladesh has many seasons and different seasons have different fruits, so I used to eat those fruits when they were in season.

Multiple issues: add commas for clarity; 'the fruits' -> 'fruits' or 'with fruits'; 'is a 676 season' is nonsense — likely meant 'has many seasons'; ensure subject-verb agreement 'seasons have'; 'eat those different' is incomplete — specify 'eat those fruits when they were in season.' Provide coherent meaning.

× Is my favorite food chains over the years.

✓ Has my favorite food changed over the years?

Original is ungrammatical and not a question form. Use correct question auxiliary 'has' and past participle 'changed' to form present perfect question matching the time frame 'over the years.'

× In my childhood I used to like the food which is consist of sweet.

✓ In my childhood I used to like foods that consisted of sweets.

'Which is consist of' is incorrect; use past tense 'consisted of' and plural 'sweets' or 'sweet flavors'. Also use 'foods' or 'food that consisted of sweets' to convey plural items.

× Right now I am Mold Hill concierge so I choose the food which is also a health beneficial at the same time.

✓ Right now I work as a concierge at Mold Hill, so I choose foods that are also healthy and beneficial.

Clarify role 'work as a concierge at Mold Hill'. 'The food which is also a health beneficial' is ungrammatical: use 'foods that are healthy and beneficial' or 'also good for my health.' Replace 'choose the food' with 'choose foods' for general preference.