Food— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more direct and concise: start with a clear topic sentence naming your favourite foods, then give one brief reason and one specific example. Reduce filler words (umm, uh) and avoid repetition. Use linking words (however, although) to contrast unhealthy and healthy preferences.

Ví dụ: My favourite foods are mainly fast food and soft drinks because I enjoy their taste and convenience; however, I also try to eat healthy snacks like apples and mixed nuts to balance my diet.

Gợi ý: Use past tense consistently and give one or two specific details or a brief reason. Avoid hesitations and correct grammar (liked, not beneficial → not very healthy). Add a linking word to show contrast if you wish.

Ví dụ: When I was young, I liked unhealthy foods such as fried chicken, burgers and soda because they tasted good and were fun to eat at parties.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and logically. If you don't change food seasonally, say so clearly and give a short reason that makes sense. Avoid contradictory phrases (unhealthy diet to keep fit). Use linking words like because or although properly.

Ví dụ: No, I don't usually change my diet by season because I tend to stick to convenient processed foods year-round instead of switching to seasonal produce.

Gợi ý: Use clear contrast words (used to… now…) and correct tenses. Give one specific example of a food you used to like and one you prefer now, and briefly say why the change happened (health, taste). Keep it to two or three sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, my tastes have changed. I used to eat a lot of junk food like sugary snacks and fried items, but now I prefer fruits and vegetables because I'm more health-conscious and feel better eating them.

× To be honest, my favorite food umm quite unhealthy like fast food, soft drink.

✓ To be honest, my favorite food is quite unhealthy, like fast food and soft drinks.

Missing verb 'is' (sentence structure and article/context). Also 'soft drink' should be plural 'soft drinks' when speaking generally, and add 'and' to join items. Suggestion: include the verb 'is' after subject, use plural for countable nouns when speaking generally, and use commas to separate items.

× But umm, I also like some healthy food, uh, such as fruit, uh, such as fruits, umm, healthy snacks.

✓ But I also like some healthy foods, such as fruit and healthy snacks.

Redundant repetition 'such as fruit, such as fruits' and inconsistent countability. Use plural 'foods' or uncountable 'food' consistently; here 'healthy foods' and 'fruit' (uncountable) or 'fruits' (countable) should not both be repeated. Suggestion: simplify the list and avoid repetition.

× When I was young I like and the some unhealthy foods like fried chicken, fast food or soda.

✓ When I was young I liked some unhealthy foods, such as fried chicken, fast food, or soda.

Tense inconsistency: 'When I was young' requires past tense 'liked'. Remove extraneous words 'and the some'. Use 'such as' for examples and commas to separate items. Suggestion: keep past tense throughout clauses referring to the past and proofread for extra words.

× I know it's not beneficial but I like it.

✓ I knew it wasn't healthy, but I still liked it.

Context refers to past habits, so past tense should be used: 'knew' and 'liked'. Also 'not beneficial' is awkward for food; 'not healthy' is clearer. Suggestion: match tense to time frame and use natural collocations.

× To be honest, I don't eat different foods at different times of the year because I have an unhealthy diet to keep fit and I don't want to change this at different times.

✓ To be honest, I don't eat different foods at different times of the year because I have an unhealthy diet to keep me from getting fit, and I don't want to change it seasonally.

Sentence has logical and expression issues. 'To keep fit' conflicts with 'unhealthy diet'; likely intended 'I don't want to change because I want to stay the same' or 'keep me from getting fit'. Also 'this' should be 'it', and 'at different times' is better as 'seasonally'. Suggestion: clarify intention, maintain consistent pronoun ('it'), and use appropriate phrases like 'seasonally'.

× Of course, my favorite food chance since I was a child.

✓ Of course, my favorite food has changed since I was a child.

Verb form error: 'chance' is incorrect; should be past participle 'changed' with present perfect 'has changed' to indicate change from past to present. Suggestion: use present perfect for changes that span from past to now.

× Now I I was young I like a lot of unhealthy food, junk food or sugar and fatty food.

✓ When I was young I liked a lot of unhealthy foods, such as junk food, sugary and fatty foods.

Mixed time expressions: remove duplicate 'I' and 'Now I I was young' is incorrect. Use past tense 'liked' for childhood habits and pluralize or use adjectives correctly: 'sugary and fatty foods'. Suggestion: separate present and past ideas and use correct adjective forms.

× But now I also like fruits or vegetable.

✓ But now I also like fruits and vegetables.

Parallelism and pluralization: use plural 'vegetables' to match 'fruits', and prefer 'and' instead of 'or' to indicate enjoying both. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general statements and ensure parallel structure.