Food— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant and clear, but there is a repetition (“when when”) and some phrasing could be smoother. Make the response slightly more varied and add one specific detail about flavors or a brief example to enrich it. Keep answers concise (max 4–5 sentences) and avoid filler words.

Ví dụ: I like fried rice because it’s quick and easy to make after a long day at work. For example, I often stir-fry leftover rice with eggs, scallions and soy sauce, which makes a simple but tasty meal. It’s also economical because I can use whatever vegetables I have in the fridge.

Gợi ý: The idea is good, but the answer is long, repetitive and unfinished. Use a clear topic sentence, avoid repeating 'because', and finish the thought. Add concrete details about what made the dish special (specific ingredients or memories).

Ví dụ: In my early teens I loved my grandmother’s fried noodles. She used fresh pork and crunchy bean sprouts, and she seasoned them with garlic and oyster sauce, which made the dish very flavorful. I remember eating it at family dinners, which made the food even more special.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and informal (e.g., 'wanna', 'Oh'). Be specific about seasonal differences and give one concrete example (seasonal ingredient or festival food). Use linking words (for example, however) to structure the explanation and avoid vague phrases like 'depends on the years and my feelings'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. For example, in winter I prefer hearty soups and stews made with root vegetables, while in summer I choose lighter salads and fruits like watermelon. Also during Lunar New Year I eat traditional dishes such as dumplings, which I associate with family celebrations.

Gợi ý: The response addresses the question but has grammar issues and awkward phrasing (e.g., 'while you growing up', 'after tired long day school'). Be specific about when and why your preference changed and give an example of a Korean dish you enjoy. Use linking words like 'however' or 'now' to clarify contrast.

Ví dụ: Yes, my tastes have changed. As I grew up I tried many international cuisines, but now I especially enjoy Korean food because it feels hearty and comforting after a long day. For instance, I often eat bibimbap or kimchi stew, which are warming and satisfying.

× My favorite food is fried rice because it's quick and easy to make when when you feel tired after work.

✓ My favorite food is fried rice because it's quick and easy to make when you feel tired after work.

The sentence uses present tense appropriately but contains a duplicated word 'when'. Remove the extra 'when' to correct the sentence. Suggestion: read sentences aloud to catch accidental repetition.

× It is so convenient you can just use your leftover vegetables and eggs.

✓ It is so convenient; you can just use your leftover vegetables and eggs.

Two independent clauses are joined without proper punctuation, creating a run-on. Use a semicolon, period, or coordinating conjunction (for example: 'so' or 'and') to separate them. Suggestion: separate independent clauses with a comma plus conjunction or a semicolon.

× When I was in early teens, I used to like fried noodles of my grandmother's ingredients because she makes the best because she always used most high quality meats and good vegetables for me that's why I.

✓ When I was in my early teens, I used to like fried noodles made with my grandmother's ingredients because she made the best; she always used the highest-quality meats and good vegetables for me.

Multiple issues: 'in early teens' needs article 'my early teens'. 'fried noodles of my grandmother's ingredients' is awkward; use 'made with my grandmother's ingredients'. Tense consistency: talking about the past, so 'makes' should be 'made'. 'used most high quality' should be 'used the highest-quality' (superlative + hyphenated adjective) and the sentence ended abruptly with 'that's why I.' Remove incomplete fragment. Suggestion: keep past reference consistent and restructure to avoid fragments.

× Absolutely yes, because it is depends on the years and my feelings.

✓ Absolutely yes, because it depends on the year and on my feelings.

'it is depends' is ungrammatical; use 'it depends'. 'years' is plural but context implies 'time of year', so 'the year' or 'the season' is clearer. Add 'on' before 'my feelings' for correct prepositional structure. Suggestion: use 'it depends on' + noun.

× If I wanted to try new things I would like to do it and if I wanna still taste old memories I would rather choose.

✓ If I want to try new things, I would like to do so, and if I want to relive old memories, I would rather choose my childhood favorites.

The conditional structure mixes past 'wanted' with present hypothetical; use 'want' for present/future preference. 'wanna' is informal; use 'want to'. 'do it' is vague—use 'do so'. 'taste old memories' is nonstandard; use 'relive old memories' or 'recreate old tastes'. Suggestion: keep conditional structure consistent and use standard forms.

× Definitely because while you growing up you will taste a lot of different dishes such as international and Middle Eastern dishes.

✓ Definitely, because while you are growing up you will taste a lot of different dishes, such as international and Middle Eastern dishes.

Missing auxiliary 'are' in the present continuous 'are growing up'. Add commas for clarity. Suggestion: include the correct auxiliary verb in continuous tenses: 'are growing'.

× But now I love eating Korean food because it's filling and comforting after tired long day school.

✓ But now I love eating Korean food because it's filling and comforting after a long, tiring day at school.

Word order and word choice issues: 'tired long day school' is incorrect. Use 'a long, tiring day' (adjective order) and include preposition 'at' before 'school'. Suggestion: use natural adjective order and include necessary prepositions.