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Part 1

Giám khảo

What is your favourite food?

Thí sinh

Egg and you.

Giám khảo

What kind of food did you like when you were young?

Thí sinh

When I was younger my mom liked to do a an egg.

Giám khảo

Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?

Thí sinh

Yes.

Giám khảo

Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?

Thí sinh

When I was younger I liked to eat eating fish, but when I grew up, I think I don't like to eat them anymore.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

What is your favourite food?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: พยายามตอบอย่างชัดเจนเป็นประโยคเต็ม และให้รายละเอียดมากขึ้น เช่น บอกว่าเพราะอะไรและชอบทานอย่างไร ใช้คำเชื่อมสั้น ๆ เพื่อความลื่นไหล หลีกเลี่ยงความผิดพลาดแบบคำพูดสองความหมาย (เช่น 'and you' ไม่จำเป็น) และจำกัดความยาวไม่เกิน 5 ประโยค

Ví dụ: My favourite food is eggs. I especially like boiled eggs because they are simple and nutritious. I often eat them for breakfast with toast and some vegetables. They are convenient and keep me full for a long time.

What kind of food did you like when you were young?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: ตอบตรงคำถามโดยเริ่มด้วยประโยคหัวข้อระบุว่าอาหารประเภทไหนที่ชอบในอดีต แล้วอธิบายรายละเอียดหรือเหตุผลเพิ่มเติม ให้ใช้คำเชื่อมเช่น 'because' หรือ 'so' และแก้ไวยากรณ์ เช่น 'my mom used to make' แทน 'my mom liked to do'

Ví dụ: When I was young, I liked simple homemade food, especially eggs. My mom used to make scrambled eggs for me because they were quick and tasty. I remember eating them with rice or bread every morning, so they became my comfort food.

Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: คำตอบสั้นเกินไป ควรขยายด้วยรายละเอียดตัวอย่าง เช่น บอกฤดูและอาหารที่เปลี่ยนไป ใช้คำเชื่อมเช่น 'for example' หรือ 'in summer' เพื่อความชัดเจนและเชื่อมต่อเหตุผลกับตัวอย่าง

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. For example, in summer I eat more salads and cold fruits because they feel refreshing. In winter I prefer hot soups and stews to stay warm. This seasonal change helps me enjoy a variety of flavours and stay comfortable.

Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: ตอบโดยเริ่มจากประโยคสั้น ๆ ระบุว่ารสชาติชอบเปลี่ยนหรือไม่ แล้วอธิบายเหตุผลและยกตัวอย่างโดยใช้คำเชื่อม เช่น 'because' หรือ 'however' แก้ไขไวยากรณ์ (เช่น 'I used to like fish' และ 'I don't like them anymore') และหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำซ้ำเช่น 'to eat eating'

Ví dụ: My favourite food has changed since childhood. I used to like fish when I was younger because my family cooked it often. However, as I grew older I eat less fish because of the smell and my changing tastes. Now I prefer eggs and other simpler dishes.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect sentence structure

× Egg and you.

I like eggs. And you?

The original is a fragment and unclear. Use a complete sentence to state preference and a short question to return the question. Use plural 'eggs' as a general preference (singular/plural use for food can be treated as plural for countable items). Also separate the two ideas into two sentences for clarity.

Article errors

× When I was younger my mom liked to do a an egg.

When I was younger, my mom liked to make an egg for me.

The phrase 'do a an egg' is ungrammatical. 'Make an egg' or 'cook an egg' is correct. Remove the duplicate article 'a an'. Add a comma after the introductory clause. Use a suitable verb like 'make' or 'cook' to describe preparing food.

Sentence without a verb

× Yes.

Yes, I eat different foods at different times of the year.

The single-word reply 'Yes' is grammatically acceptable in conversation, but as a full answer it lacks context. A complete sentence repeating subject and verb clarifies the response and fits the examiner's question.

Incorrect use of verbs and tense

× When I was younger I liked to eat eating fish, but when I grew up, I think I don't like to eat them anymore.

When I was younger I liked to eat fish, but when I grew up, I stopped liking it.

Errors: 'liked to eat eating fish' has redundant '-ing'; choose either 'liked to eat fish' or 'enjoyed eating fish' (verb + -ing issue). 'I think I don't like to eat them anymore' mixes past and present incorrectly; use past change 'stopped liking it' or present 'I don't like it anymore'. Also 'fish' as food can be uncountable, so use 'it' not 'them'. Ensure tense consistency when describing change over time.

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